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A. Kishore

@TVserialfreak

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Awesome update didi👍🏼...aap ki har ek update mein ek apnapan mehsoos kiya ja sakta hai😊...you write from the reader's perspective and view👏...really love that approach😃...keep rocking..⭐️

Edited by TVserialfreak - 12 years ago

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sss283

@sss283

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

tooo good

amazing write up😛

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Ananya

@anuraya

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

lvly update..i like it because of it reminding me season 1 which is very nyc..cntinue soon nd thankx for PM

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

aapne likka tha ki seaon 1 aapko bahut pasand hai. same here.

isiliye aapke update mein season 1 ki jhalak rehti hai.

don't worry, we like it very much.

love all the scene.

puja scene is very good. then diet scene.

update soon and thanks for PM

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

wow super sweet update 😊 i was enjoying throughout...lovely thanks for Pm.. waiting for next !!

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Dsudipa

@Dsudipa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

very funny & awesome update 👏

thx 4 PM waiting 4 nxt pls update soon

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Very nice update yar totally loved it superb 👏
Cont soon nd thanx for pm

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Anjali

@Pinkjali

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

No big tam jham , sweet , simple but superb update... I am loving this sadgi of ur ff... I am so much thankfull to u for starting this ff, or else we would have missed the fresh air... Ram and priya are so far from each other for them and so near for us.. Aate aate paas aa hi jayenge.. Bade acche lagte hai aapke ke raya aur aap... Update soon..

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Pinkjali
No big tam jham , sweet , simple but superb update... I am loving this sadgi of ur ff... I am so much thankfull to u for starting this ff, or else we would have missed the fresh air... Ram and priya are so far from each other for them and so near for us.. Aate aate paas aa hi jayenge.. Bade acche lagte hai aapke ke raya aur aap... Update soon..

I deliberately try to keep it simple as I want in that way, I think the beauty of the story lies there, thank u for liking it, romance is in the air so keep reading and commenting.

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cloud121

@cloud121

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: shamavi
oyee meir golu putta ko moutu kaha😭 😆 oye bechara.. kana kilado yaar motu hain phir bhi hot hain naaa chalega... continue sooon😉

Oye hoyy kisi ko to ram ki bhut fikr ho rhi hai...😉 😉 to aap hi khila do na jakr...😆