Tears of Joy or Sorrow Part 20 on pg 39

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lalmadhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Very well written. Thank u for the pms

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Lesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Beautifully written.. Priya seems like the ideal mother.. :-)

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Evan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Wow...simply OMG... You really penned this emotional scene to perfection, hats off to you! I couldn't imagine anything better! the way Ram-Priya handled the convo, dialouges were outstanding. Kush is such a lovely kid, infact he is quite mature for his age. Though I would love to see him with RaYa forever anyway.

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haribol79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Superbly written.. loved how Priya explained Kush..

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Eram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

it was awesome update dear👏👏

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

That was a flawless update.. Each and every scene was needed, nothing extra. Just perfect.. The way priya handle the kids is so calm and mature and i loved it.. Sandhya ur life experiences are paiding off.. I can surely say that u 2 is a ideal mother or else u can't potray priya's character so blissfully.. With the current track we are thinking that peehu is being so hurt but when the things will get more complicated naa then kush is going to get effected more than peehu, bcoz peehu has priya but poor khush he has no one beside him... U give the story so fine cut that i can't help but saying that u should be the writter of balh... As always u rocked.. I want more , update soon..

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crystal30

@crystal30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

An awesome update, I loved the way the whole interaction with Kush is been penned. Kids & their questions..please update soon.

Thank you

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Hey sandhyaji ... thats really a rolercoaster update ..
Loved the way how priya explained the kid to understnd the circumstances,Hoe Ram became his papa..
thats a great thought yaar .. really really wonderful .. i loved it and i wont be surpriced if they will take this scene from your ff ...Its indeed a thought ful way to understand a child ..and i must say kush is a very smart kid tooo ... Thank you so much for the update ...

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sss283

@sss283

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

that was damn good...loved the way raya dealt with the situation
incredible writing
thanks for d pm

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

simply superb, the way u handle the situation is remarkable, making him understand the situation in the form of story and that too of Lord Krishna is so apt in this situation, eagerly waiting for next part, plz update ASAP

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