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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

very emotional one for me, missing out his princess initial years in indeed painful but at the same time it wasn't easy for Priya also, not having her MAN beside her is nothing more than a death, I seriously wish that both get the second chance of parenting another child...update ASAP

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Dilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

aww! Awazing part 2,3 n 4. Every care scenes were perfectly discribed.. Very emotional and touchy parts.. Superb Neel di.. This ss is my fav among ur creations..

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cloud121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Nice update...thanks for pm!!!

Edited by Alya1991 - 12 years ago

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A. Kishore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Very sweet, cute and emotional updates... 👏 😭 ⭐️ sorry for late commenting 😳 hats off to your passion for writing...take a bow.

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Oneandall
Awww

4 the dedication!! 🤗 Neel you are so sweet!

coming to the update... It was much awaited and i LOVED it!! The fact that she made a video of the first time she held pihu was awesome. Capturing that moment so that Ram can live it again and again was touching!
Now I can't wait for the next part... rayalicious!!! even better...
Neel once again great job!!! 😃👏

Heyyy shethal glad to see your comment on first this time ...
Thank you so much for your valuble feed back , Yes she indeed thought about Ram and for him she told her friends to take the video ..Really isn't it great ,Hmm will try to update soon...

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00Princess00

@00Princess00

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

whn u r going to update??
Update sooon na

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Sheetal

@Oneandall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

When r u updating Neel????????? Waiting :-)

Edited by Oneandall - 12 years ago

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Hii all actually my system is givving trouble when im editing the part yaar ..
dont know whats the problem ..I will check it and soon post it ...

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Sheetal

@Oneandall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Hii all actually my system is givving trouble when im editing the part yaar ..
dont know whats the problem ..I will check it and soon post it ...

Can't wait.. please jaldii 😉 😆

Edited by Oneandall - 12 years ago

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

congrats for new story dear n what a take on... wowoowowowoowo i just loved it some similer kind of story i always want it... awesome... just loving the first part lovely Nuts made plan with rock star n rock the world... Priya still trying her best to win back Ram this is completly loved one thing... but so sad in her guilt she is getting sick day by day so worried for her... n what an end u just put me on fore want get claim until i read next so moving to read next...

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