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Posted: 12 years ago
im commenting for the first time
new concept, ok Ram is alive, I think something happen to Ram so that he lost his memory
that's y he is not recognising priya. full of suspense,
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

part 5
i hate u yaar Anu u wrote so small part yaat but still happy as it was worth reading awesome... so Ram was always latto on Priya awww my Golu is so cweettt... n the reat part made restless... klagta hai Gudiya ka Golu aa gaya... wowowo what an hero type entry... maza aa gaya i m really happy while reading this its awesome... too gud yaar moving to read next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 6

omg what u r doing Anu first half padhke aisa laga tujhe bhi Neha aur Ram k pass pahucha dun what r u doing yaar Ram ko maraa toh maraa Neha... i know Ram is hero so he will back by any cost why u killed Neha u r so cruel yaar... so sad for Vik even happy Vik & Priya both know their stand how ever family pressers they won't get together... but happy fatta poster nikla healthy hero awww Ram is back yappiii... but if he is Ram then who was died whom whole Kapoor clan misunderstood as Ram or he is just Ram by face but actually his duplicate so confusing only will get to knwo with next update but for that will need to wait till to feb... ok so do update next soon btw were r u busy this days...😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
heya Leena.. thnk u so much dear🤗 actually my semester finals r going on.. will update soon n reveal all da suspense
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anamika163

<font color="#cc0033">heya Leena.. thnk u so much dear🤗actually my semester finals r going on.. will update soon n reveal all da suspense</font>





ohh best of luck dear Waiting for it to get in 1 pieces... do update soon but after studies...

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting 4 an update 😕😕😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
anamika ji where r u

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Posted: 12 years ago
hola guies.. extremely sorry for such a late update.. had been busy with exams then family affairs.. here's two parts together as promised... will try to be more regular.. do leave your reviews and plz ignore typos 😳

NOTE: both these parts are over dramatic.. please bear it with me


RECAP
"priya kya baat hain.. itni ghabrayi huyi kyun ho?? Thikse bolo na.. koi problem huyi kya waha??" a worried vikram asked
"main thik hu.. tum suno toh meri baat.. Vikram wo.." she sucked in a mouthful of oxygen.. "vikram Ram zinda hain'!!!!"




Chapter.7
aaa..mmm..hhh' was all vikram could hear.. he pressed the phone harder againsted his ear and cupped his other hand on his other ear to listen carefully.
"hello priyaa.. tumhari awaz nehi arahi.. zara zor se bolo.." vik said
"vikram.. ram zinda hain vikram.." priya almost screamed.. but it was all in vain
"accha suno main flight mein baith gaya hu.. network congestion hoga.. main land karte hi tumhe call karta hu.. ok?? u take care." Vikram concluded
"vikram suno toh meri baat.." priya insisted.. by then the call had already ended.
Priya arched her head back and bit her lower lip in frustration.. she sat with her head dug in between her palms. Soon her past knocked in her mind.

Priya went back to her cabin.. a playful smile played on her face.. she kept thinking all that ram told about her.. why did it matter her so much.. she brushed her hands through her hair and rolled a strand of hair around her index finger.. looking at her own reflection at the glass wall of her cabin she blushed.. vikram who was just passing by witnessed blushing priya.. priya's eyes met vikram and they exchanged smiles..
"yeh bhi tujhse pyar karti hain beta.. teri love ki gadi toh nikal padi.." thinking to himself vikram left. Days passed.. ram gained more confidence where as priya waited for him to make the 1st move..
That day as usual priya came out of her cabin with some papers in her hands to get them recheck by ram.. as she advanced to ram's cabin she heard 2 of the staffs talking about something.. the words "ram sir.." from their discussion caught her attention.. she stopped by to listen their chatter.
"areh yaar ram sir se kaun ladki shadi nehi karna chahegi.. kitne successful hain, paise wale hain.. ek ladki ko aur kya chahiye, easy money u know" one of the lady staff said.
"sahi hain yaar.. thodese mote hain but with all his wealth he's definitely a dish" the other said chuckling.
"haan par tujhe lagta hain wo kisi aisi waisi ladki se shadi karenge.. unka choise bhi high class hi hoga.. khandani raaiis" they giggled together.
Priya twisted the papers in her hands.. "sahi toh keh rahe hain yeh.. main kaise.. nehi..!! mujhe ram se dur jana hoga.." she gulped a big lump in her throat.. and marched towards his cabin.. knocking da door she seeked his attention. Ram was talking on the phone sp indicated her to come in.. she entered and stood in front of his desk.. standing there she was lost in her own thoughts.. hanging up the call ram spoke up.. "haan priya.." but there was no reply from her.. "priya' helloooww.." ram waited a lil more with a curious expression and finally snapped in front of her' "kya hua bhai? Kaha khoyi ho?"
"nehi kuch nehi.. yeh papers maine dekhli hain, ap zara recheck karlena" saying that she left.. without giving him a chance to say anything.
A worried ram thought "areh isko kya hua" shrugging off the feelings he started checking the papers. After a while he called for his PA.. "priya ma'am ko ye papers de ao zara.. aur bolo aj ka meeting hum postpone kar rahe hain kuch dino ke liye.. I'll take a rain check." He said handing her the papers
"par sir Priya maa'm toh chali gayi hain" the PA informed
"what?! Chaligayi?? Kab??" ram inquired.
"sir apke cabin se nikal ne ke kuch der baad.."
"thik hain.. tum jao.. aur suno cancel all my appointments for today.."
"yes sir.." saying that she left the cabin.
"bahar itni barish horahi hain.. aur priya aise bina bataye kahagayi hogi..??" ram thought.. "I think I should go after her.. zyada dur nehi gayi hogi.. dekhu toh akhir baat kya hain" ram rushed outside .. taking out the car from the garage he moved in the direction of her house.. scanning each passer by carefully.. his intuitions told him she might b on foot.. and he was right just a few meters away he saw her petite body drenched in rain strolling lazily. He pulled over in front of her.. priya shudderes by his sudden arrival.. he pulled down the window and said "priya.. andar baitho"
"wo mujhe kuch kaam hain main chali jaungi.. apko ulta padega.."
"priya kitni zoro ki barish horahi hain.. pura bheeg chuki ho tum.. yeh kya pagalpan hain.. tumhe jaha jana hain main tumhe chod dunga.. just get in damn it" ram insisted
"ram plz leave me alone.." she started walking again.
A desparate ram dropped down from the car and walked after her.. he held her arm and yanked her towards him. "kya problem hain priya.. kyun aise behave kar rahi hu?" ram asked angrily.
"koi problem nehi hain.. kya problem hogi.. mujhe haar chiz apko bata ke karni padegi kya"
Ram was stunned by her reply.. he let her go slowly.. "aisa kyun bolrahi ho priya.. maine kab bola aisa.. m just concerned, tum aise ba.."
She cut him between "kyun concerned hain ram.. kya zarurat hain in sab ki..?? kyun meri zindegi main bina koi aahat kiye involve horahe hain?? Why ram why?? Main naa hi hi kisi rais khandan ko belong karti hu aur naa hi apki tarah successful hu"
ram got puzzled.. what the hell is she saying.. a confused ram could only say "kya??"
Hiding her gaze here and there priya said "maine uss din apki aur vikram ki baat sunli thi" taking a pause she looked at his eyes now.. as if her doe eyes asking affirmation "don't u think u deserve someone much better, ram??"
Ram pressed his lips in a sheepish smile.. boy he was relieved..! taking a deep sigh he held priya by the shoulders.. "saari baatein sunli tumne??" he asked naughtily.. priya looked here and here to hide her eyes revealing her embarrassment.. "phir toh mere liye kehne ko kuch bacha hi nehi.." ram continued.. "lekin yeh kya.. would be Mrs.Kapoor kaise behki behki batein kar rahi hai.."
An amused priya stared at him in disbelief.. did he say would be Mrs.Kapoor.. or is she dreaming, she thought.. "no u are not dreaming TO BE MRS. KAPOOR" ram said it loud and clear as if he was reading her mind.
The two of them stared at each other and let their eyes do the talking.. her heart was pounding.. and ram knew her answer.. after a while he let her shoulders go and knelt down in front of her.. stretching his hands to her he said.. "I don't hv a ring right now.. but there possibly couldn't hv been a better setting to ask u this.. Ms. Priya Sharma.. would like to be Mrs. Priya Ram Kapoor??" priya was too dazed to answer.. and ram continued.. "will you marry me??"
After a long tym priya smiled and a tear drop escaped her eyes.. she did not answer.. just leaned to his level and hugged him.. ram hugged her back with equal intensity.. he stood up and picked her slightly up from the ground still hugging. The downpour from heaven witnessed the first union of the lovebirds.

A sudden knock in the dorr broke priya's trail of flashes..
"come in.." she said.
"maa'm your medicines are here.." the bell boy came to drop da medicines.

Early next morning vikram's flight landed.. soon he was at the hotel..
"kya..! kya bol rahi ho tum?? How's it possible priya??" vikram almost screamed at his loudest
"main sach bol rahi hu vikram.. ram zinda hain.. maine khud unhe dekha hain" priya insisted.
Vikram was clueless of what she was saying.. "accha ek baat batao.. tumhari koi baat huyi usse??"
"nehi vikram.. mujhe pata hi nehi chala ki kab wo aye aur kab chale bhi gaye.." priya said sadly.
"priya.. think practically.. ram yaha kaha se ayega?? Aur agar wo zinda hota toh humare paas wapas nehi ata kya.. wo yaha, itne salon tak kyun rahega priya? Tumhe koi galat fehmi huya hoga" vik concluded.
"wo ram the vikram!" priya said sternly.. faing towards the window and against vik she continued.. "do saal tak bhalehi main unse dur rahi lekin aj bhi main unhe unke aahat se pehchan sakti hu, unki khushbu se mehsoos kar sakti hu"
"thik hain.. agar main tumhari baat man bhi lu toh ek baat batao.. ussne tumhe pehchana kaise nehi??" vik inquired.
"main nehi janti vikram.. sach mein nhi janti.. lekin main zarur pata lagungi.. kyun ki mera dil janta hain ki wo mere ram hain" priya said.
Smiling vikram said.. "tum akeli nehi ho priya.. mujhe tumhare vishwas pe yakeen hain.. agar wo ram hain hum usse hum wapas layenge.."




Chapter.8
Soon Priya along with Vikram went for their business deal.. at the office of the Kumars.. both of them reached a little early than that of the actual meeting time.. the receiptionist escorted them to the conference room and informed them that mr.kumar will be here soon. They took seats around the long conference table just then vik's phone rang.. he picked up but couldn't hear properly for network congestion. He excused himself and went outside.. after a while priya got up from her sit and walked to and fro the room reading some papers.. suddenly a lady barged in calling out "papa..!!".. and clashed with priya.. all the papers from her hand fell down.. "oh I am so sorry .." the lady apologized helping priya to pick up da papers.. "no no its ok.. actually its my fault to.. mujhe bhi dhyan nehi raha.." priya said soberly
"hey u r Indian.." the lady exclaimed enthusiastically.
"haan.." priya said smiling..
"oh that's gr8.. hv u seen my father?? Ooppss I mean Mr. Kumar" she said
"no.. we have a meeting now but I guess he's not here yet.." priya replied
"oh.. mujhe laga.. agaye honge.."
"so u r Mr.Kumar's daughter.. ap bhi papa ka business sambhalte hain??" priya asked
"areh nehi.. yeh business meri bas ki baat nehi.." forwarding her hand she said "Doctor Nikita Kumar"
Just when priya forwarded her hand to meet the lady's hand some noice outside the room caught her attention.. her eye sight was transfixed at he entrance to see who was entering.. within no a tym a tall wide figure entered who left priya breathless.. a chill ran down her spines and she lowered her hands.. the person marched towards them. Nikita turned back to look at what priya was looking at.. "ah thank god agaye tum" she said to the man.. smiling at niki the man said to priya "areh ap yaha??" but there was no reply from her
"tum jante ho ek dusre ko??" nikita asked
"areh maine tumhe bataya than a.. uss din airport ke samne.. uss lady ke baremein?? Yehi toh thi wo" the man said.
"sorry uss din main ap ke hosh mein ane se pehle hi agaya tha.. actually I was in a hurry" he said
Priya stood still.. listening to him dazed.
The man stared at her hoping to get a reply.. then whispered to nikita.. "tumne inko baat karte huye suna kya.. pichli baar bhi kuch nhi boli thi.. kahi gungi toh nehi hain" he asked
"areh kya baat kar rahe ho.. abhi toh acchi bhali bol rahi thi.." niki retorted
Priya seemed to hv heard them and finally spoke up.. "hi.."
"ah thank god.. kuch toh boli ap.. main to soch raha tha.. khair chodiye.. ap yaha kaise??" he asked.
"pehle apna intro toh de dijye.." priya said.
"oh sorry.. so silly of me.." he said.. "Rajiv.. rajiv sinha.."
"my fiance" holding his arm Niki completed.
Priya felt as if her head split for a moment. But she had to be strong.. she had to hold herself.. she blinked her eyes rapidly to get rid of the tears forming in the big melting eyes.
"aur ap??" he asked
"Priya.. Mrs. Priya RAM KAPOOR" she put in extra effort in saying Ram Kapoor.. they shook hands.. by his 1st touch she was convinced that he is her Ram.. just then vikram entered.. his eyes met priya's and she signaled him.. vikram held his breath to meet da man whom priya confidently said to be ram.
"hi.." vikram said to grab his attention.. he turned towards vikram. His eyes widen in shock.. his face turned pale.. it is ram.. how is it possible' rajiv came forward and shook hands with him.. "hi.. rajiv sinha"
"what?" a baffled vikram asked..
"I mean mera naam h Rajiv" the man repeated
Vikram was still puzzled and looked at priya for clarification.. she just blinked her eyes gesturing him to stay normal.
"hi.. hi.. Vikram Shergill" he stammered.
Before their conversation could go any further Mr. Kumar entered.. he had a lil conversation with his daughter after which she left and the meeting started.. all the while priya's eyes were fixed at Rajiv.. everything was the same.. she knew it for sure that he is ram but whats all these happening.. rajiv.. nikita.. fiance.. how did ram land up here?? And why isn't he recognizing them.. why why???

The presentation didn't go too well for obvious reason.. the little priya cared.. she had to find out about her man' and she made up her mind to do it.. by hook aur by crook

TO BE CONTINUED...

Edited by Anamika163 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fb was superb...
ram so lovingly handled annoyed priya.
lil sad about present...
what happen to ram...
thank you...
Edited by 123fiza1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
priya reaction when she c ram
what happen to ram memory loss
ram fiance
let see what priya do to get her ram back

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