FF 'pyar me hota h kya jadu'LAST UPDTED ON PG85 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: sreev12

waaah 👏👏👏 good start veena!

ek dum alag sa story but still can visualize actl Neha / Priya.
tumhari narrations mein kaafi zaadu hai ... ppl can visualize what u write!

Loved it dear! Continue soon!


thank u so much...hopefully u all will enjoy it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: pinky2606

Wonderful update loved it 👏
waiting jaldi update karo


thank u sooo much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: taashu11

wow great start di waiting for next kyuki aab raya ki shayrees exchange hone wali hai


thank u dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
OK from here i wil start part of the love stories...here is part 1..which is inspired by deewana movie..ufff shahrukh ki movie ho aur veena ka sath na ho ye to impossible h...mana us time thoda kam janti thi shahrukh ko but ha...ye movie mujhe jbrdst pasand h...ye wala concept mne isi k ek scene se liya h...lettr exchange wala scene...so here i go with lovestory

part 1

"khat se shuruat"

@evning...sharma house

bell bajti h..priya darwaza kholti h...samne as usual super excited neha khadi rhti h..

priya...tum???

neha...yup...i know ye thoda jyada jaldi ho gya bt kya karu yar main apni excitment rok hi nhi pati hu...meri sabse badi problm hi yhi h

priya...hahaha...koi bat nhi...aa jao andr baith k bate krte hain

neha...thank god mujhe laga kahin tum mujhe darwaze se hi na bhaga do ki peechhe hi pad gyi ye to...

priya...hehehe...

dono andr jati h sabse neha milti h...phir dono priya k kamre me chali jati h..

neha...priya..mulakat bhi ho gyi bht bat bhi ho gyi pr yar hamari official dosti nhi hui...mujhse dosti karogi...kar lo kar lo fayede me rhogi..mere sath rehne wale bht aish krte h...
priya muskurati h aur neha se hath milati h...

priya...ha aur kuchh fayeda ho ya na ho chehre ki excersice jarur ho jayegi...qki i defntly know tumhare sath rhne wale hamesha muskurate honge...

dono hasne lagte hai...

neha...priya m ye note layi thi tum padh lena jb bhi free hona..aur kal subah tak ek achha sa note likh dena...

priya...ok...but u hv to promise me one thing

neha...kya???

priya...yhi ki us insane ko kabhi bhi pta nhi chalna chahiye ki ye notes kisne likhe h

neha...nhi pta chalega yar..

priya...aise nhi mujhe chhu k promise karo

neha...ok baba ye lo tumhe chhu k promise kr diya...khush??

priya...ha

neha...ok ab main chalu

priya...theek h

neha...padh lena jarur aur reply bhi dena please...by& tc

priya...sure...tc

neha chali jati h priya wo notes leke k khadi rhti h sochti h padhe ya na padhe..pr reply dena h to padhna to padega hi...lekin wo is waqt nhi padhna chahti h...sochti h rat me aaram se padegi...aur notes book me rakh k ma k pas chali jati h...

@night...
priya kamre me aati h...apna bister wagairh theek krk latne jati h tabhi uski nazar book pe padti h...wo study table pe jati h book aur pen notepad leke wapas bed pe aa jati h...priya book kholti h usme se notes nikalti h...ek note uthati h aur sochti h khol k dekhe pr use bht ajeeb lag rha hota h aise kisika lttr padhna...uska dil ekdm dhadk rha hota h...himmat krk ek note kholti h use padna shuru krti h...

note..1

to my love...

priya note band kr deti h uski sans to ek line me hi atak jati h...wo sare notes kaise padhegi...priya thodi der bad himmat krk phir se note kholti h aur aage padhti h...

aaj rat ek sapna aaya
sapne me ek apna aaya
sang apne khushiya aur muskuraht laya
mere liye ek ajnabi pyar ki aahat laya
...goodmorning dear

priya note padhti h aur uske chehre pe ek muskuraht aa jati h...khamkha itna dar rhi thi..ye note padhne k bad use ehsas hota h ki ye insan kitna bhola aur sachha h...uske har sabd me ek sachhai h..wo excited ho jati h aur jyada janna chahti h to dusra note khol k padhti h...
note..2


to my love...

aaj subah phulo k sath tumhe dekha
aaj subah kirno k sath tumhe dekha
aaj subah itni hasin lagi mujhe
qki aaj ki subah ke sath tumhe dekha...

..gudmorning dear

note..3

to my love..

aaj suraj badalo me chhipa h
aaj roshni ka kahin pta nhi h
shayad koi aaj muskuraya nhi
tabhi to hame ujala dikha nhi h
gudmrnig...

priya ek ek krk note padhti jati h...dheere dheere use ye ehsas hota h ki ye insane kuchh romantic bhi h boss...to shayad use lagta h ki agle level pe wo apna romance hi dikhaye priya ko...khair abhi tak padhe hue notes k hisab se priya likhne baithti h...pr samjh nhi pa rhi hoti h ki kaise shuruat kare...wo is trh se to my love krk to nhi likh sakti qki samne wala to apne pyar k liye likh rha h par priya to kisi aur k pyar k liye likh rhi h...khair priya likhna shuru krti h...

to...(priya is jagah kokhali chhod deti h aur aage likhti h)

kya likhu kuchh samajh nhi aa rha h...pr apke notes padh k maine jo apke bare me mehsus kiya whi likh deti hu...shayad apko achha lage...

ek insan mila bheed me tanha sa
ek insan mila begano me apna sa
dil ka sachha aur bhola h wo
mere samne hi h pr lagta h ek sapna sa

vry gudmorning...

priya wo note nikal k fold krk rakh deti h subah neha ko dene k liye aur chehre pe ek pyari si smile k sath so jati h...

to b continue...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Achha laga,aur samajhne bhi lagi, ye ghaadi kis route pe jaanewalii hai.Bajate raho.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
waaawww Veena!

jabasdat FF hai ... notes toh ... awww ... no words dear!
jaldi continue kar ...

👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
ms allde fabulosos, extraordinario, fantstico y fabuloso!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 aapki update!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Mind-blowing narration... 😉
You rock @veena as always 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
😃Nice update di...update soon!!! 🤗 wow..etne time tak apni maturity ko kaha chupake rakha tha di 😉

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