RANDOM THOUGHT ABOUT kARVACHAUTH :) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hats off to you farwa...that was smashing
C-nite saree !!...aww😳😳...
just what we would love to watch in the serial
isse continue karo na...love to read more
waiting for more dear


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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was just awesome! Khaash aisa kuch hotha! Hmmm {that is my big SIGH!}

-Jay.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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goood... ap BALH ki cv team join krlo... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wah kya bat hai aisa cv to kabhi bhi nai dikhayenge😡
but u have written nicely 👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Oh god!! I am waiting for the moment and or opportunity where Ram gets to hook priyas blouse 😛😆 Very nice update Wish we could see this in the show I hope KC episode isn't a disappointment I hope that Ram and Priya get ALOT more closer and closer I mean by x10! lol I want RaYa scenes now 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what a thought, splendid, superb yaar, kaash aisa sach me ho pata, yeh dekhne ke liye aankhen taras gayi hain, keep up and if possible then continue

@Veenaji
Thanks to u, infact I also couldn't upload pics, u gave me the solution, thanx a ton
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderfully superb update dear. You should write more. It's fantastic
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow yaar! It was lovely! Kaash aisa hota..
Brought a smile to my face! You write really well! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: farwasneha

hello everyone:)
I am farwa khan n die heart RAYA n BALH fan!!this is the first time i am writing something! My Writing skills are not so good so please bare me. A thought came in my mind n could not stop myself of shareing it with you guys!! :) So here we go!!


The scene starts from kapoor mansion where everyone is busy in karvachauth preparations! on daadi n peehu's insistence priya is also observing fast for RAM n Priya along with Peehu is in Kapoor mansion for Karvachath pooja!!


Daadi: Priya puttr tu yehan seyy wahan kahan ghum rhi hai jaldii ja soni syy tyaar ho kr aa GOlu aata hy hoga.

PRiya:Daadi woh kia hai na mere pas koi saree nhi hai abhi pehn ne k liye or aaj strike hai tou mei ja bhi nhi sakhti koi saree lene k liye.

Mean while NUTs along with peehu comes there !

NUTS: priya i think mere pas aap ki problem ka solution hai! Come with me.peehu baby you also come.

n drags priya with her n takes her to RAm's room!! the samee green room with ther picture on the front wall!! Tears came in priya's eyes seeing each n evey thing same in the room!!

NUTs: yehan aaiyeh priya!

Opening her wardrobe Ab bataiyehh konsii saree pehn na pasand karengi aap ? 😛

Priya with teary eyes: Arey yeh tou saareyy mere hyy kapde hain!! Mr kapoor ne itne saal sambhal kr rakhein yeh 😭

Priya lost in all their old n special memories!

flashbacks of


scene jub Ram priya ko keh raha hota hai about mumbai ki garmi!!

suddenly with peehu's voice priyacomes back to reality.

peehu: mama yeh wali saree kitnii achii haii aap yeh pehno na!! aap boht pretty pretty lago gey!!

Nuts: aareyy priya yeh tou wohii saree hai na jo aap ney mere fashion show mei pehnii thi!! you were lookingg so beautiful!! haan you should wear this :)

Priya remembring their C night: nahi mei yehh nhi pehn sakhti. or yeh hyy kia meii yehan seyy koi bhii saree nhi pehn sakhti natasha mr kapoor aagaye naa kitna ghussa karenge. mere saath saath tumehh bhii nikaal dengee iss ghr sey!! un ko bilkul pasand nhi koi un ki cheezon meii eseyy ghusse!!

Nuts:aareyy yehh un ka samaan thodii hain yeh saarii cheezein touu aap ki hain!! n comon wear this saree bilkul tym nhii mujheyy bhi tyaar hona hai. peehu sambhalo apni maa ko saying this she left!!

PEEHu: mamma plzzz!!!! plzzz mama

priya:peehu bacha dekho zid nhi karo!! agr aap chahte hok mei yehan seyy hy saree pehnu tou theek hai i will!! but yehh walii nhii! plz baby!

peehu: mam kia bura hai iss mei aap pr tou pink colur suit bhi krta hai plzz pehno na!!

Akhir priya jee ko apni beti k zid k samneyy jukhna hy pada!!😆

Piya: Ok baby aap yehan hyy ruko mamma change kr k aati hai!

After sometime she comes out of the changing room!! shouting PEEHU pEEHU !!
NUTS Bua ko upr behjo!!

While struggling with her blouse hook she turned back n found HEr tall dark handsome man standing n noticing her!!

RAm: IF you don't mind! may I help you!

priya hesitantly turned n said yes!

After long 5 years her GOLu was hooking her blouse!! she was on 7 sky!!

RAm: iss k matching bangles n bindi dressing k second drawer mei hain!!
Saying this He left!!

N our sweet GOLLI kept on smiling n biting her lower lips!!!


THANK you!!! THANKS for baring mee !!! will love to see both positive n negative comments :))) n sorry fr spelling mistakes n grammatical mistakes!!😊

😉🥱yaar tumare muh mein ghee shakar agar aisa hogaya ,yeh to kushi to baat hogi par bale bale to tab hoga jab yeh sab shipra aur ayesha dekhe aur jaan jaye ki ab unki koi bhi daal nahi galegi.anyway fingers crossed😆🤣
Edited by nirmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANK u soo muchh guyss frr all this appreciation :) sorry i cann ntt writee more as I am busy with myy studiess!! butt surely as i will gett tymm i will write fr u guys:)

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