FF Western twist to BALH - Page 2

just read the both parts, man it was magnificent 😃 what I liked the most is Priya is very strong person here, she is handling everything perfectly, no crying, no weeping - too good man :) hope u will give us the next part asap 😃

Part 3

Priya is sitting at the door between Sitting room and bedroom. Looking at her life on both side. It was as if there was a mirror image she was looking at. One side of the mirron Ram and the other side Peehu. Both snoring and smiling in sleep. She went to the window and looked at the sea standing there. Just then her phone rang. It was Krishnaji

P: Haan Ma.

Kris: Priya Ram kahan hai.

P: Maa Ram aur peehu dono yahan par so rahe hai.

Kris: Beta Ram ki dawaiyan bhijwa rahi hoon driver ke saath. Please usko de dena.

P: Thik hai maa.

After a while she heard a knock at the door. She had kept DND on so that the bell does not work and the driver has to knock instead. As soon as she heard the knock she went to the door and collected the meds and prescription info.

She read everything and took the tabs out and kept it on the table. Ordered some brown bread sandwich for Ram and 2 Black Forest Pastry for both her angels. The order came in. She placed everything on the table and then went to Ram and whishpered in his ears. Raaam and quickly went and sat at the table. Ram opened his eyes in Aww. He thought to himself what was that. I hate her. I hate her. He looks around and sees Priya sitting at the table again with a book. He tries to get up and feels a little weak. Priya goes to him and offers her hand. He looks at her like a raging bull wanting to shoot her with his eyes.

P: Peehu ko godi mein uthana hai har pal? Usko har roz school leke jana hai har roz ? Toh phir yeh haath lijiye aur table pe aakar medicines le lijiye Mr. Ram Kapoor (With a firmness in her voice, so that he does not feel that she is weak and it hurts his ego) He takes her hand gets up and sits at the table. She comes and sits opposite. He looks at her with eyes almost shooting cannon balls at her. She understands that look and go and stands near the window. He starts eating and remembers their time together looking at the brown bread. He picks up the phone receiver and calls the restaurant to ask for Aloo Paratha. Priya is listening to all this. The Aloo paratha arrives. She looks at the waiter and tells him. Ek karo tum on call doctor ka aur ambulance ka number aur haan security guard companies ka list mujhe de jana.Waiter looks at her all puzzled not understanding what is going on. He says OKAY. And leaves scratching his head.

R: (Understanding the sarcasm for asking for On call Doc and Ambulance number) Scratching his head, Ms. Sharma yeh Security kis ke liye ?

P: Peehu ke liye.

R: Kyun

P: Jab use koi ladka chedega ya koi usko pareshaan karega toh mein to hoongi nahi waha par, kyun ki sole custody you know. Toh use kaun safe rakhega. Is liye.

R: With anger in his voice. Mein abhi jinda hoon.

P: Abhi toh aap zinda ho. Magar agar aise hi apka diet rahega toh phir''''''

R: Pushes the Aloo paratha plate away from him and takes an apple in Anger. Mein 5 saal tak mar ke zinda raha hoon. Ab ja mujhe jeene ki wajah mili hai to ab kya maroonga. Kher yeh tum kya jaano.

P: Tum ?

R: Looks at her wondering what wrong he said. And then the red eyes again. Sorry Ms. Sharma AAP ( With anger)

P: Dekhte hai.

R Eats his food and takes the tablets. After that he feels sleepy again. Due to the heavy dose. He tries to get up but suddenly looses control. Suddenly from back comes a tight hold. He feels the touch and realizes its Priya. But feels too weak to react. She helps him on the bed next to Peehu. Knowing that if he looks at Peehu sleeping he will fall asleep too. And so it happens.

Priya calls Krishnaji and tells her not to worry about Ram. He is with her and he might stay here for few days. Krishnaji feels really happy and says Thanks to her.

Priya calls Rajat.

Rajat : Haan Priya. Kaise chal raha hai ? Ram kahan hai?

P: So rahe hai. Medication thoda heavy hai is liye jaldi hi neend aa gayi.

Rajat: Tum thik ho ?

P: Mein thik hoon. Aap meri chinta mat kijiye sir. I just wanted to say thanks to you. Thanks for understanding and being here to help.

Rajat: Priya tum pyaar to ho Ram ka. Par galti se mein bhi karne laga tha. Par ab wo pyaar ek khoobsoorat dosti hai. Tumne mujhe jeena sikhaya hai. Tumhare liye kuch bhi. Acha jo ghar tumhe ghahiye that Juhu mein. Meine us khareed liya hai. Tum jab chaho tab waha shift ho sakti ho. Aur hotel ka bill ke liye mein advance de diya hai. To tumhe kuch phikr karne ke zaroorat nahi hai. Tum bas un dono ka khyaal rakho.

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Part 10	14
Part 11	15
Part 12	19
Part 13	24
Part 14	27
Sp 1	21
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hey welcome

Thanks to all of you. My name is Krish. Writing more and will update soon.

Hey krish update was really awesome...Just loving the way Priya is handling Ram by making peehu her weapon..Hope Ram melts down soon...Looking forward to ur next update...

All the 3 parts are awesome...missing this type of priya very much please continue soon

Part 4

P: Cuts the phone.

Ram wakes up and calls out Priya. Priya was not in the room. He quickly realizes what he just said. He gets up. Gets ready to leave. Comes out in the sitting room and Priya was sitting there.

R: Ahem'.Mein ja raha hoon. Ghar pe sab wait kar rahe hoge.

P: Krishnaji ne aapki dawai yahi bhej di thi soch ke, ki aap kuch din peehu se door nahi rahenge. Itne saalon ke baad jo mile ho.

R:Looks at her angrily and says'Mein jaa raha hoon ghar. Peehu so rahi hai. Jab uthe toh use mujhe karva dena.

P: Sure. Yeh lijiye aapki dawai aur aapka prescription.

R:Thanks.

He leaves the room and the anger is still in his eyes. He gets in d car and tells the driver to take it to KM. Everytime he thinks of Priya, only anger creeps out. He tightens his fist and bangs the seat.

Few days pass and Ram is still the same. Raging bull. Comes to see Peehu after his work and leaves without talking to Priya.

Later Karthik comes to the hotel room.

Kar : Di'Aap ghar kyun nahi aa jaati. Aapka hi ghar hain. Aur Papa ko bhi Peehu se milna hai.

P:Karthik mein aana chahti hoon. Par Ram kabhi sharma ghar par aake Peehu ke saath waqt nahi guzarenge. Unke liye mein thode din aur yahi par rahungi.

Kar:Par Di'..

P:Karthik mein jaanti hoon aap sab logon ne bhi mujhe kaafi miss kiya hai. Aur meine sabse jyada aap logo ki miss kiya. Har subah tum logon ki yaad athi thi. Bas himmat nahi hoti thi ki tum logon ka saamna karoon. Par ab mujhe ek ek karke yeh sab suljhana hai. Mujhe sab kuch batao. Jo bhi tumhe pata hai.

Kar: Di aap ke jaane ke baad jaise Kapoor aur sharma parivaar bikhar hi gaya tha. (He takes a deep breath so that he does not cry, he does not want his Di also to loose it.) Jiju ne Ayesha ko apna naam diya, kyunki Ayesha Sid se pregnant thi. Phir Ayesha jaise badal hi gayi. Jiju ka naam usne aise use karna shuru kiya ki jaise who ek lottery ho. Maa ne bhi usika saath diya. Thoda mahino baad Maa Ayesha ke saath KM mein rehne lagi. Tabse wo wahi rehthi hai. Papa bilkul bikhar gaye. Unke liye toh jaise kuch bacha hi nahi tha. Kush ko bhi bahut kam milte the. Jiju kabhi kabhi kush ko ghar lekar aate the. Par wo apne grand children ki kami mehsoos karte hai.

Nutz ke abortion ke baad use kabhi bacha nahi hoga. Par uski treatment chal rahi hai. And yeh baat Ayesha ne sabke saamne khul ke boli aur Nutz ko bahut bura laga tha. Par jiju ne use maaf kiya kyun ki unhe yeh pata chala ki aap ko bhi yeh baat maloom thi. Jiju bhi jaise jee rahe the par bas naam ke. Aur abhi abhi mujhe yeh bhi pata chala hai ki Vikram aur Neha divorce le rahe hai. Kisiko reason nahi maloom. Yeh baat unhone kisiko nahi batayi hai. Sir Jiju jaante hai. Meine Jiju ki aur Vikram ki baat sun li thi. To mujhe pata chala.

Di ''..Aap sab kuch thik kar degi na ?? ( With eyes almost ready pour out ocean)

P: Karthik, mein aa gayi hoon.

That was all she had to say and Karthik felt like this big rock has been lifted from his heart and mind.

Kar: Di kya mein peehu ko ghar lejau. Papa use yaad kar rahe hain.

P: Haan lekin pehle use apne papa se phone par baat karvani hai.

Peehu comes out and sits in Priyas lap.

Peehu: Mumma Papa kahan hai.

P: Calls Ram

Ram looks at the phone and notices its priyas hotel number. He picks up the phone and shouts Ayesha darling mera towel kahan hai. Mujhe der ho rahi hai. There was nobody in the room, he just wanted to hurt Priya.

R: Haan Ms. Sharma boliye.

P: Peehu se baat kijiye

Peehu : Papa aap kahan chale gaye

R: Rockstar mein mere ghar par hoon. Aap khana kha lijiye phir mein aapko yahan lekar aaoonga. Thik hai ?

Peehu: Mumma kya mein papa ke ghar jaa sakti hoon.

P: Beta aap abhi nana nani ke ghar jaa rahe hai. Kal aap papa ke saath pura din spend karna thik hai.

Peehu: Papa mein nana nani ke ghar jaa rahi hoon. Mein aapse kal miloongi.

R: Par'''Looks at the ceiling in anger and says thik hai princess. Kal milte hai.

Peehu goes with Karthik to Sharma house.

Priya was holding herself after what she heard on the phone. But just after they left, she almost broke. A little while later it started raining. She needed the rain to fall on her face to cool herself down. She went outside in the terrace and stood in the rain. And let out a loud cry. She cried sitting outside in the terrace getting wet in the rain for quite few hours. Letting all that she was bottling out. It was like an outburst. She knew she had to be strong in front of everyone. But deep inside she was broken and hurt and guilty for what she did with Ram, the way Ram behaved and the last phone call she had with Ram.

R: Sitting in his room.

R: Bansi Kaka. Ayesha mam kaha hai.

Bansi: Sir wo abhi abhi shopping ke liye gayi hai.

R: Thinking to himself. Pehle Priya ne mujhe dhoka diya, mujhse itne saal tak meri beti chupayi aura b Ayesha, jise meri kuch fikar hi nahi hai. Mein hospital se discharge leke aaya hoon aur wo shopping ke liye gayi hai. He closes his eyes and a tear falls down his cheek.

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Next day Morning :

Peehu stayed with at Sharma nivas for the night. And priya was alone at the hotel. She cried all night and getting wet in the rain. Later she came inside and slept on the bed.

Ram came there at breakfast time to take peehu to KM. He knocks at the door and no one answers. He stands their for quite a while but no one is answering the door. He calls Priyas number but she does not pick up. He gets a little scared as to where are they. Wild images pop in his head of peehu not being well or priya taking her back to dubai. Invain he calls rajat to ask where priya is. He tells her she is at the hotel, as far as he knows. He calls sharma house and realizes peehu is over their. He goes to sharma nivas and picks up peehu and takes her to KM. 4 hours pass by and he still has not heard from Priya. He gets a little tensed. But then the anger creeps in again. And thinks good if she has gone away from our life. Good for us.

Later in the evening peehu wants to go back to Priya. So he goes to the hotel with Peehu. Knocks at the door, rings her phone but no answer. He gets a little tensed. Calls the hotel manager asks him to send someone up since his wife is not opening the door. Just then he gets a call from Sharma nivas. Sudhir ji asks Ram to drop peehu their, since priya is also coming to sharma nivas for dinner. Ram goes to sharma nivas and drops peehu their and they give each other hugs and kisses.

While on the way back, he tells his driver to take it to the hotel. He goes to the reception and asks if Priya went some where. The receptionist checks for the keys if they were given but says that the keys are not their. May be she is still in her room. He asks the manager to come with him and just check once if everything is ok. Looking at The Ram Kapoor the manager quickly comes with a master key and they both go up. Manager opens the room. Ram enters and he finds her sleeping in the bed. He informs manager its okay she is sleeping here. Thanks.

Manager leaves the room. Ram goes closer to her and hears her deep breathing and almost panting. He goes close to her and says Priya. She does not wake up. He touches her forehead and finds that she is a very heavy fever and is shivering badly. He quickly puts AC off and closes all the doors and curtains. Suddenly Priya's ram takes over the raging bull. And for a while he just forgets everything. He calls out again Priya utho. Touches her again on her forehead and feels very guilty that he did not check on her in d morning.

To be Continued

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Part 6	7
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Part 10	14
Part 11	15
Part 12	19
Part 13	24
Part 14	27
Sp 1	21
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Thanks Pink. Thanks a lot. Keeps me motivated to write more now.

I just loved the part...It showed Priyas pain...Though trying to be a tough women, but hai to human being...just loved this part as It has glimpses of Priyas Ram emerging...Plzzz continue soon...