FF Western twist to BALH - Page 17

Awesome dude, Ram must have been burnt in the fire of jealousy, first Arjun and then Rajat both call his most treasured person darling and with that cherry on the cake was Ronit Roy, I must say very well conceived, luved it yaar

Soo sorry for commenting so late!
Read both th parts!! OMG!! They're hilarious!!🤣
Love reading it!! Peehu's a teen now! Woww!
Ram getting so pissed when he knows about Peehu's friends who are boys is so adorable!!😆😳
Loved the characters - Ronit Roy & Rajat too in the party!! Too good!!
Poor Ram! Loved tis dialogue - Aaj tum maa aur beti ne yeh thaan liya hai ki mujhe heart attack do. Isnt it ???😆
Awesomely written yaar!! Wonderful dialogues!😃
Made my day!! Thanks a lot for the PMs! Can't wait for the next update!

Just finished reading the last two parts...must say they are amazing. I can totally see Ram acting like this when his Peehu will grow up..Priya will have to hide the keys to their gun cabinet aur Bhagwan bacchaye uss ladke ko Jo Peehu ka boyfriend hoga😆 beautifully written...thanks for sharing with us.👏

Hope you guys enjoyed this small piece. Tomorrow back to the ongoing track.

Back to the original track

Recap : Ram : He opens the bottle. And pours in two glasses.

Before they sip it. He quietly starts a song that suits the timing.

Priya and Ram are lost in the wordings of the song for a while. They finish the champagne bottle. Priya is out for the counts. And this is when Ram finds her the most sexy and cute.

Ram : Priya what should we do next ?

Priya: Hehehehe''..bottle khatam ho gayi. Ab kya karein. Goes closer to Ram and says

Morning mein champagne ho sakti hai toh'''''''''''

Ram is all glowing at what she is hinting.

Ram : As you wish my love.

They are lost in a kiss that takes all the tension out of them. Their tongues clash, their lips play, their hands all busy. Slowly Ram removes all her clothes and Priya removes his clothes. They are lost in the most beautiful moment. They both wish that the time just stops here.

And it goes on for few hours'.. ( Not good at writing intimate scenes guys, sorry )

Next scene'

Priya lying on Rams bare chest and both of them gazing at the ceiling.

Ram : Priya, ab kuch bhi hojaye, mujhe chchod ke mat jana plz ?

Priya : Gets up and looks in his eyes. Gently kisses his eyes and then his forehead.

Words could not have said it more beautifully then her actions. Ram felt this beautiful relief in his heart and Priya could feel his heart beats in a rhythm of love.

Priya : Will you trust me ?

Ram : I will trust you more than myself. Agar tum kahongi ki yeh raat hai, to yeh raat hai. I will trust you to my life my beautiful wife. Bas tum mere saath raho. Jab mein piche dekhoon, toh tum hamesha wahi ho. Agar mein pareshaan hota hoon, to tumhara haath mere kandho par mein hamesha mehsoon karoon. Agar mere aanso nikle, to sirf tumhare saamne. Priya, pata hai, mein gussa kyun tha tumse.

Priya : Pata hai.

Ram : Tumhe kaise pata. Kisiko nahi pata.

Priya : Aapko aisa laga tha ki mein aap pe trust nahi karti. Aapko gussa aa raha tha ki mein zinda thi par aapke saath nahi thi. Ram mein jaanti thi ki aapka gussa nikalne ke liye mujhe shaant hona padega. Mujhe aapko sirf yeh dilasa dena tha ki mein abhi bhi sirf aapki hoon. Ram aap apne aap ko nahi jaante jitna mein aapko jaanti hoon. Humne kuch 6 mahine ek doosre ke saath bitaaye the. Par wo 6 mahine 7 saal jaise the. Par ek baat bolu.

Ram : Kya ?

Priya : Aap gusse mein bade cute lagte ho.

Ram : Heh ???? Maza aa raha tha tumhe mujhe jealous karne mein rajat ke saath ?

Priya : Wo jealousy wala chapter sirf Rajat ka creation tha. Meine toh bas uska saath hi diya.

Ram : Is rajat ki to ??? Aane do use.

Priya : Kya hum abhi Neha aur Vikram ko lunch pe bula sakte hai ??

Ram : Madam, please look out the window. Its 7pm.

Priya : Wattt ? Arre bache abhi taka aye nahi hai. Kaha hai. Peehu aur kush thak gaye honge na. Mein Karthi ko phone karti hoon.

Ram : Actually Karthik ka phone aa gaya tha. Wo log do din ke liye Lavasa gaye hai bachcho aur Sudhirji ke saath.

Priya ; aare aise kaise. Mujhe kuch bataya bhi nahi.

Ram : Relax darling. They are ok. Karthik and Nutz and Sudhirji need this. This will boost the motherhood in Nutz. And Karthik needs to be around kids for practice. And Papa needs his lost 5 years with his grandchildren. Kush bahut kum jaa pata tha unke paas. Ayesha ki wajah se. Unhe enjoy karne do. Hum bhi thoda enjoy kar lete hain.

Priya : aare pura din kya kar rahe the to hum.

Ram : Yeh to trailor tha meri jaan. Picture abhi baaki hai. (Winking eyes ) Chalo now please get ready and pack your and my clothes for two days. We are leaving in two hours. Neha and Vikram are also accompanying us. Their kids have gone for some Camp for 14 days.

Priya : Kaha jaa rahe hai hum log.

Ram : jahanuum'.chalo taiyaar ho jao ab. Bahut time mat lagana. Aur plz mere koi bhi suits mat lena. Just pack me some casuals and some jeans.

Priya : Aapke paas jeans hain kaha.

Ram : Sab kuch ready hai. Just check my cupboard. Ok bye. I am hungry.

Oye hoy what an update yaar... Ram priya and their romantic moments... And now where are 4 of them going re... Plzzz jaldi update karo... Waiting... Thanks for the PM...

Arey yaar agar trailer inti lambi hai toh na jaane picture aur kitni lambi hogi

hope u update soon

4 lovely updates

nice update :-D I love tipsy Priya ;-)
why this Vik-Neh are with RaYa? I'm afraid they will become the haddi in RaYa romance 😉 😉

My next will come after I get 10 comments... 😛 😉😆:P