The Apple of Our Eyes; Last Prt(27: Pg 62)

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Birdy91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Part-26 cntinue... Sorry phn hang ho rha tha itni cmmntr krke toh Socha comment two parts m kru... 😉
Woaahhooo marathon 👍🏼 ** 'mister-ram-did-you-
hear-that?' ** 👍🏼
** Ram
announced: "Mae bhi aise hi hun,
fit rehta hun, exercise karta hun…
aur…food…mera food habits tho
excellent hai …." and grinned
proudly.**
Haha golu ki Fitness...😉 mae toh Faint hi Hone wali thi 😆 Heheh Priya ne toh Goli Ki band Bjaadi...🤣 han han bhaagte hai usme kya h 😆 Omg... KM U r tooo Guddd 👍🏼 Ispe ek Siti toh banti hai... Bjaaayyeee Haayyee Birdy ji siti..😉 whistle whistle 👍🏼 Ahaaa Poppa n baby ki bike ride.. woaahhoo 😉 lalallala clue clue start 😊 Hehehe golu Ki bjaaa di clue de de k..😆 Khaao aur deemag pao.. 😛 Haaayyyeee Kulfi wala Love... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Muaaahhh Muaaahhh ❤️ fir se Whistle Whistle 👍🏼 Mzaaa aa gaya.. sacchi- Mucchhiii

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sneha

@fanbalh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

It was so touchinng dear...
was a very apt one...
must say u r a fabulous writer...
will be eagerly be waiting to get more frm u...
and thanks fir d pm dear :)

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deepa

@deepa1993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

So nice yr.. Wonderf story.. Last prt is very emotional... Thanx yr for a fabulous ff..hope u write another ff...

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nutshell

@nutshell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Just amazing. Thanks for giving us this wonderful, emotional, witty, enjoyable FF. You are truly a fab writer. Will look forward to more of your writings :)

God Bless!

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rayaBALH

@rayaBALH

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Posted: 12 years ago

#455

ossum yaar di till today i was a silent reader but at last comment marna hi pada...ur writing is ossum yaar plz continue ur writing waiting for ur next ff 😊 n 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 4 u😊😊😊😊

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crystal30

@crystal30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

Oh dear, that was such a fantastic end..wld definitely miss it. After office my only entertainent or rather I shld say the refreshers were the FF's. You don believe I've re-read the parts umpteen times as I cherished every moment of it. One humble request, please do come up with some more write ups, an yes from your end will put a huge 😃.

Thank you🤗

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Siacutie

@Siacutie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

awesum .mindblowing superb y u have ended it aarti it was a pleasure to read it

keep writing wud luv to read it more😃

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Sacchi muchhi update bohat accha tha... End so soon thora aur continue karna tha naa..? Koi baat nahi.. Coming to this update just loved the opening of ur ff after the leap. P&P bonding is just inbreakable and that was the most lovely think in ur ff... From the first update to this last update u just rocked dear.. U justified the name of ur ff to the fullest, it was started on peehu and ended on peehu... Mindblowing.. Ur writing skills r just superb... Will wait for ur come back..

Edited by Pinkjali - 12 years ago

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#459

Hiii ..That was an awesome update dear ..LOved the ending that was very emotional and cute ending ...You have written very clearly and very well ..Hats off ...