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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: vinan2050
Beautifull updaye thanxx for Pm

Thanks so much Vinan🤗

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: rkstlove
Wow lovely dialogues

Thanks so much🤗

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Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: movie.buff
Fabulous OS.
Brilliantly written.👏
Priya flirting with Ronit Roy made Ram jealous.😆 He had not realised his love for Priya until then.😕
Both fighting with their egos took me back to the days of the show when Priya had come to her Parent's Place.
Missing each other part written fantastically.😊

"Because if Priya was his soul mate so was he Priya's soul mate. ", Fabulous Line.👏

"Aap shayad aapke pyaar ka bagair reh lenge, par main nahi reh paoongi." Golden Dialouge of this OS.😳

Thanks so much movie.buff🤗Dont know your real name🤔

Well I had to say that Ram realized his love for her after she flirted because the whole flirting scenario with Ronit made him finally let the feeling sink that he has fallen head over heals in love with her!

As for the dialogues you quoted, they were the highlight and thank you for quoiting them! Me too loved the last one by Priya:)

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: viny_queen
u write realy nice i like this os

Thanks so much!🤗

Love,

Mayu

Originally posted by: 123fiza1
thnx

Thanks so much Fiza🤗

Love,

Mayu

Originally posted by: Siacutie
heart touching os🤗

Awww thanks Sia🤗

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Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: balhfan4ever
Beautiful OS...a different take on Ram's confession. I absolutely love that episode where Priya confessed her love for Ram...and your OS is a perfect way Ram could have confessed 😳...thanks for writing and sharing with us👏

Thanks so much🤗

Well I was hoping for something of this kind. Wherein Ram being the Man and wooing his lady love back but the CV's made it very obvious and gave us a okay confession!

I so wanted to see something like this, you know a Dhamaka!

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Pinkjali
This time u didn't pm me ... Anyways aap bulao ya na bulao hum to aapke likhe os par hi lete hai. It was fantastic, each and every dialogue was so magical. Thanks for writing it.

Oh I am so sorry Pinky😳I completely forgot to Pm you but I am glad that you are back to reply on my OS! Bought a smile to my face😃

Thanks so much for the reply and liking my OS!🤗

I had to make the dialogues magical and i took about 4 hours to write such a small OS as I wanted the dialogues to be perfect!

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Lavi_961
Very well written..

Thanks Lavi!🤗

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Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
superbly written . great update ya, why you took so long time to post here ...
Thanks

Thanks so much 🤗

Well I penned it down yesterday<3

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: balhfan22
Lovely OS Mayu!
Loved it!❤️ All the dialogues are so amazing..
Ram & Priya's feelings are so beautifully expressed!
You're such a fab writer!! Thanks a lot for the PM!

Thanks so much🤗

Your are very much welcome for the Pm and I am glad you loved the OS and the all the dialogues!

Love,

Mayu