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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ufff...ye ekta bhi na...main jitna hi cope up karne ki koshis karti hu ye utna hi uljhati h...mujhe lagta h is ff ka nam mne bilkul sahi rakha h..."maine socha na th"...waqai..iske first part se lekar abhi tak yhi hota aya h...m kahani k sath isko leke chalne ki koshis karti hu aur ekta kahani hi mod deti h...pr koi nhi...hamari to tunning hi gadbad h...phir bhi jitni jiddi ekta utni hi m bhi wo kahani ghumati rahegi aur m ghumphir k usi track pe aati rahungi..aur hamesha yhi kehti rahungi..."maine socha na th"..lol...khair barish ki wajah se mne to koi nuksan nhi karaya pr ekta ne kara hi diya...khair koi nahi waise nhi to kaise bhi nuksan to karana hi padega...aur bisns barbad karne k to bht tareeke hain..ekta ka serial dekh dekh k itna to sikh hi liya h...to let me try to again cope up with story...hopefully isme ekta k serials jitna blooper na ho...lol..par thoda to rahega hi...bina blooper k serial kaise banega...so here i am with next part...

Part 32

"ye sab kya ho gya"...

Mujhko actully crrent track pe jane ki jyada jaldi h isiliye mari ja rhi update karne k liye...kahin ekta ne use bhi change kr diya to meri excitment dhari ki dhari hi rh jayegi...& i dnt want it...qki ye ashwin wala track mere liye bada mazedar h...lol...to hum ruke the ki ram k ordr ka result aane wala tha...din k 12 baj chuke hain sab bechain h ki ab phone aayega ab phone aayega...pr phon hi nhi aa rha h...order to pahonchne ka time 10 baje ka tha jo ki ram ke hisab se mal pahonch gya hoga qki usne sab dekh kr time se mal bheja tha...ab dheere dheere time aur beet rha h...pr phone nhi aya..2 baj gye hain...

Priya...to aap hi kar lijiye...kam to apka h na...

Ram...right...(ram phone lagata)..hello sir m ram kapoor bol rha hu...m kafi der se apke phone ka wait kr rha tha...

Manager...aur m apke maal ka

ram...ji????..m samjha nhi...

Manager...mr.kapoor aapka mal abhi tak nhi pahoncha h

ram...nahi pahoncha lekin mne to time se pehle mal bhej diya tha..m abhi pta karke btata hu...

Manager...uski ab koi jarurat nhi h..humne order kisi aur ko de diya h...

Ram...are aise kaise kisi aur ko de diya...kuchh ruls wgrh hote hain ki nhi...puchhna chahiye tha btana chahiye tha...aise kaise...???

Manager...mr.kapoor apni hadh me rahiye aap itne bade bisnsman nhi h ki dusro ko ruls & regulation sikhaiye...agar isse pehle kabhi bisns kiya hoga to pta hona chahiye...ki agr time pe order pura nhi hota h to cancel ho jata h aur cancelled order dusre ko diya ja sakta h...(are bhaiya serial k spcl ruls & regulations hote hai...lol)...aur managr phone kaat deta h...mr.kapoor chair pr baith jate hain..

Priya...kya hua??..mr.kapoor??

Ram...sab barbad ho gya...mal time pe nhi pahncha to order cancel ho gya...

Priya..are pr mal kyun nhi pohncha...

Ram...pta nhi

priya...to pta kariye...

Ram...ab koi fayda nhi h priya...ab hum kuchh nhi kar sakte hai...

Priya...lekin mr.kapoor ab kya hoga???

Ram...pta nhi...

Ok to history ye rhti h ki hamari jo excitment ki bina matlb ki dukan h na shipraji...unhe kahin mamaji mil jate hain to wo excitment me mamaji ko ram k order k bare me bta deti hain to mamaji se wo bat ayesha tak jati h aur ayesha se sid tak..aur sid k ghatiya deemag ka ye nateeza hota h ki rambabu k paise aur powr ko hi ayesha se use karwa k wo rambabu ki hi watt lagwa deta h qki use dar tha ki kahin itna bada order mil gya to rambabu phir the ramkapoor na ban jaye to uska to sapna hi tut jayega...par gadhe ko ye pta nhi h ki sapna to abhi bhi tutega hi...ldiot...khair uske bad pta chaltah mal kahin treffic me fas gya tha...ye rha mahabloopr...hahaha...aur ram ne jitne logo se udhar liya tha sabke liye use factory car sab bechna padha...whatevr jo aplogo ne serial me dekha...after that...vikram ka ana sabka mumbai ana mumbai me naukri karna naukri me ashwin ka boss hona...yeeesss...caught it...hehehe...aa gyi na track pr...to ek din ka office ka hal to aaplogo ne dekh hi liya...aur priya ka thappad bhi dekh liya...ab aage...

Priya pihu ko lekar room pr aa jati h...use mr.kapoor ki tension lagi hui...pta nhi abhi tak kam kar rhe honge ..ya nahi..office se nikale ya nahi..ek to office me wo ahwin yha ye aayesha ..priya ka deemag solid khrab tha...but phir bhi pihu ka sath h to kuchh to chain h...pr mr.kapoor wo to wha akele..mujhe ana hi nhi chahiye tha unhe akele chhod k...priya sochti h ki ek bar call krk puchh le...jaise hi phone karne jati h...doorbell bajti h..priya daud k jati h darwaza kholne...samne mr.kapoor khade rhte hain..priya unke gale lag jati h...

Ram...are priyaaa...kya hua???

Priya...i am sorry mr.kapoor mujhe apko wha akele chhod k nhi ana chahiye tha...

To b continue...

Edited by veena23 - 12 years ago

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shavii

@shavii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

veeena ekta ki junior bangayi hoo😭 javooo

continue soon

Edited by shamavi - 12 years ago

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: shamavi
veeena ekta ki junior bangayi hoo😭 javooo

continue soon

tum aayi na thats enough...pta tha mujhe ki aise hi aogi...😛

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

Hello...

Priya kyon rone lagi??

COnda ko maarne ke liye, Ashwin ki insult ki wajah se ya Phir Mr.Kapoor ko akele chod ke aane ke liye..? Aaj kal bahut pyar hai na Mr,Kapoor se -shayad unka zyada kaam karne ka sehan nahi ho raha hai Priya se lol..

chalo accha hai, In dono ki story se ek baat to pata chal gayi Pyar wo cheez hai jo samay ke saath badtha hai, majboot hota hai...lage raho

Bow down for Ekta maiyya's -Business flop wala story line expansion by Veena in Ekta Style...👏

Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

ye kya veena .

har baar bolti hoon itna suspense achhi baat nahi.

khair tum sudherne wali toh nahi.

story se jyada tum jo apna opinion likti ho uuse padne mein jyada maza aata hai

for that ur superb

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sahana747

@sahana747

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

Priya ko Ram se pyar karathe karathe Veenadi aap bhi Ramse...!?

Now why Priya is so concernedabout Ram versus that Aswine? Ridiculous .Aap bhi na blooper pe blooper likhne mein thuli hain.

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: sahana747
Priya ko Ram se pyar karathe karathe Veenadi aap bhi Ramse...!?
Now why Priya is so concernedabout Ram versus that Aswine? Ridiculous .Aap bhi na blooper pe blooper likhne mein thuli hain.

hahahaha..ekta itna ghuma deti h ki deemag ghum jata h to ghume hue deemag se bs bloopr hi bahar aata h...lol