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rayaloveland

@rayaloveland

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

With request of sss283 and SanRaj.Raya, I am continuing it...

PART 2

P: sab garbad ho gaya. na tu milti or na kisi ko pata chalta me zinda hu.

A: arre di isme kya hai sabko pata hona chahiye tha ki aap zinda ho. par bht der ho gayi hai. jiju ko kuch pata nahi hai abhi.

P: tu soch bhi mat ki tu batayegi ram ko.

A: me na batau toh ma toh bata degi. so all the best.

P: teri vajah se sab hua hai. ruk me tujhe batati hu abhi.

Ayesha runs n goes inside where peehu is there. Kady has gone home.

A: di ma bata degi jiju ko.

P: sab teri vajah se.

Peehu: time out. kya kar rahi ho? kya? kya? itni badi ho gayi ho lekin discipline bilkul nahi hai?

aise koi bhagta hai kahin bhi? bacho ki tarah bhag rahi ho? me bhi aise nahi karti hu.

P: sorry meri ma.

Peehu: meri ma nahi meri Peehu.

A: kitna bolti ho tum? is shaitan ki kush se achhi banegi? iski tarah hai.

P: tera jo beta hai. kitni shaitan thi tu bachpan me. me janti hu. achha thik hai chal abhi shop

band karne ka time aa gaya.

A: ji di.

P: chalo peehu. bag pack karo or chalo ghar.

Peehu: thik hai mumma. chalo

They close the shop and move from there.

P: ayesha tu ja. hum chalte hai.

A: thik hai di.

peehu and Priya reach home.

MUMBAI

All gather in kapoor mansion with vikram and neha

Sudhir: shipra kya baat hai kya bolna hai tujhe.

Shipra: priya

Sudhir: kya priya?

Shipra: priya zinda hai.

all shocked to hear this.

Sudhir: kya meri priya zinda hai?

Shipra: ha sudhir vo zinda hai. hum jald usse india bulayenge. me phone lagati hu priya ko.

shipra calls priya.

Shipra: hello Priya!

Peehu: hello yeh koi priya ka no. nahi hai. bye.

Shipra: arre wrong no. kyu bol rahi hai. ayesha ko call karti hu.

Ayesha: ha ma boliye.

Shipra: mene bola priya hai kya. toh wrong no. bola. kyu?

A: ma pooja boliye.

Shipra: thik hai.

She again calls. This time Priya sees the number and cuts it

Shipra: kaat diya phone. soumya apne phone se call kar. uske paas tera no. nahi hoga.

Soumya: thik hai.

soumya calls

saumya: hello pooja!!

Pooja: ha pooja bol rahi hu. aap kaun?

saumya: me saumya bol rahi hu Priya didi.

P: didi?

Saumya: ayesha ne nahi bataya.

P: ohh saumya. kaisi ho tum?

Saumya: me thik hu or aap?

P: me bhi thik hu. kaise call kiya?

Saumya: aapke papa ko baat karni hai aapse?

P: saumya sun. please.

Sudhir: hello priya beta!

P: papa!! kaise ho aap?

Sudhir: kahan thi tum? apne papa k bare me nahi socha kabhi? kabhi yad nahi ayi?

P: ayi na yaad. but aap sab ne toh mujhe mara hua maan liya?

Sudhir: vapas aa ja beta. apno k pass.

P: nahi papa. yahan hi meri choti si duniya hai. me inko chod kar kaise vapas aau.

Sudhir: tujhe aana hoga nahi toh me tujhse bat nahi karunga. yeh le apni ma se baat kar.

P: papa?

Shipra: vapas aa ja pls.

P: ma pls nahi aa sakti inhe chodke.

Shipraa: le apni saas se baat kar.

P: ma pls.

KK: priya beta!!

P: ma kaisi hai aap? ram ne aapko apna liya?

KK: ha or vo sab sirf tumhare vajah se. or fir hum sabko chodke chali gayi.

P: ma pls. m sorry.

KK: ab me rakhti hu. bye tc apna khayal rakhna

in rajat's house

A: aap se kuch bolna hai?

Ram: kya kehena hai?

A: di zinda hai. aaj me mili unse. vohi pooja hai

R: yeh kya keh rahi ho tum?

A: yes yeh sach hai. peehu aapki beti hai. di ne na kehene par mene bataya aapko. india me bhi

sabko bata diya.

R: thanks ayesha.

Ram goes to her apartment.

P: so jao peehu. me ati hu abhi.

She opens the door.

R: priya!! kyu nahi bataya tumne ki tum zinda ho?

P: ram

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sss283

@sss283

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

res
aww
for continuing ...😛

am soo very happy...
you are a born writer...
now waiting for raya milan...

Edited by sss283 - 13 years ago

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Eram

@viny_queen

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

atlast they met in ur ff plz do count😃👏👏

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Anjali

@Pinkjali

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: SanRaj.RaYa
wo selfish jerk kabhi kaise kuch accha kar sakti hai yaar😡<b></b>

Ahh.. U got a valid point. Aaj ke epi main to sabit ho gaya tha ayeshaconda kabhi nahi sudregi,

Edited by Pinkjali - 13 years ago

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Chitra RaviKiran

@chitloner

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Nice story and do continue

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rayaloveland

@rayaloveland

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

PART 3

P: ram

R: kyu nahi bataya mujhe ki tum zinda ho?

P: ram shant ho jaiye pls.

R: kaise hu shant? kyu nahi bataya tum zinda ho? pihu meri beti hai?

P: ha ram peehu hamari beti hai.

R: kyu nhi ayyi vapas?

P: ayi thi but aap sabne mujhe mara hua maan liya? toh me kyu aati? tab mujhe pata nahi tha ki me

pregnant thi. dubai aake pata chala or mene call kiya tha toh aap kisi ki ear rings ki tarif kar rahe

the.

R: vo toh mene tumhare liye liya tha. yeh lo tumhe pasand hai na yeh?

P: ha yeh bht sundar hai. mere fav the.

R: toh ab toh peehu ko uske papa se dur mat rakho. pls.

P: thik hai ram. i am sorry ram. ek ek pal aapke bina kitna mushkil tha jeena

R: mere liye. ab sab thik ho jayega. or kal rakshabandhan bhi hai.

P: ha janti hu. pihu ne meri rakhi de di aapko.

R: is baar kartik ko tumhari rakhi milegi. har saal tumhari taraf se me bhejta tha usse. kitna khush hoga?

P: ha or jab milungi or 4 rakhi hai vo sab bhi bandhungi usse.

R: 4 rakhi?

P: ha 4 yrs ki rakhi.

R: chalo pihu k paas. lekin usse pehle?

P: kya?

R: ek hug.

ram spreads his arm.. Priya comes running. and they hug each other for sometime.

after sometime priya n ram break the hug.

R: toh chale.

P: ha chalo

ROOM

P: Peehu nahi soyi abhi tak?

Peehu: nahi nind nahi ayi.

P: achha aao idhar mere paas.

peehu comes to priya.

P: aapko apne papa ke baare me janna tha na?

Peehu: ha mumma. vo kahan hai? kab ayenge vapas.

ram hearing all this from outside the room

P: vo aa gaye hai. aapke angel aapke papa aa gaye hai.

Peehu: kahan hai o? kaun hai vo?

P: ye dekho photo.

Peehu: yeh toh golu uncle hai.

P: yahi aapke papa hai peehu.

Ram comes inside.

R: peehu?

Peehu: papa!! aap aa gaye.

R: ha beta me aa gaya.

he carries her and sits on the bed with peehu on her lap.

Peehu: aap jaoge toh nahi mujhe chodke?

R: nahi beta kabhi nahi.

Peehu: chalo mumma aaj me aap dono k sath soyungi.

P: ha chalo let jao.

all three sleep together.

NEXT MORNING

Again Priya is getting late as usual

Peehu: itni badi ho gayi lekin discipline bilkul nahi hai.

R: ha ha

P: hasiye hasiye or hasiye.

R: priya kitni dant milti hai tumhe. poor u!!

P: hasiye. bilkul aapki jaisi hi hai.

R: achha chodo yeh sab isse school chodke aata hu.

P: thik hai.

ram goes to leave her to school and soon brings her back from school.

R: chalo rajat k yahan. vahan rakhi ka function hai.

P: lekin pls hum abhi kisi ko nahi batayenge ki aap mere pati hai pls.

R: lekin kyu? achha thik hai. lekin ghar me sabke sath video chat toh kar lo. at least apne papa se.

P: ha thik hai. peehu ko tayar karti hu fir chalte hai.

all get ready n go.

Dai ja(DJ): Arre ram beta aap kahan the.

R: bus kuch kaam tha .

DJ: achha thik hai.

all go inside ram comes to peehu.

R: kya hua peehu? itne sad kyu ho?

Peehu: papa mujhe bhi rakhi bandni hai. but mera koi bhai nahi hai.

R: kisne kaha aapka koi bhai nahi hai.

Peehu: mera hai bhai?

just then ayesha n priya come.

A: ha peehu. mera beta hai tumhara bhai.

Peehi: vo kahan hai massi?

A; india me hai. chalo hum usse baat karte hai video chat me.

Peehu: sach?

A: ha sach much.

P: me jati hu. aap log baat kijiye.

A: di pls baat kijiye sabse. pls di.

P: ayesha nahi hoga mujhse.

A: achha thik hai.

ayesha goes to peehu.

A: tumhe meri help karni hogi apni mumma ko sabse baat karvana hai.

Peehu: thik hai. kya karna hoga.

A:jab hum chat shuru karenge tum rona shuru karogi or jab tumhare papa tumhe chup

karayenge tum nahi hogi but sirf mumma se chup hogi. thik hai?

Peehu: thik hai massi.

R: me shuru karta hu. video starts

A: shuru ho jao.

peehu starts crying sitting aside.

R: ayesha tum chat karo me aaya.

A: thik hai jiju.

R: arre beta ro kyu rahi ho. chalo chup ho jao.

she starts crying even more. priya hears her voice.

P: peehu! kya hua?

Peehu: kuch nahi mumma.

P: toh yeh rona.

Peehu: mujhe aloo ka parantha chahiye.

P: kya vapas?

Peehu: ha or massi ko bhi. ye sab natak tha.

P: ruk shaitan.

priya runs behind peehu. everyone see her.

Sudhir: priya beta!!

P: papa!!

sudhir: kahan chali gayi thi?

P: dubai me thi papa. papa ek min ruko.

she shouts kady.

K: kya hua pooja?

P: yeh lo peehu ko leke jao. baad me isse lana.

Peehu: nahi mujhe nahi jana. mujhe apne bhai se milna hai. pls.

P: thik hai peehu. rehene do kady. vo passage kar lo kady fir me ati hu.

P: papa!! aap kaise ho? me yh kya sun rahi hu.

P: kya haal bana diya aapne appne aap ka.

sudhir: tu nahi thi toh kaise me thik rehta. ha priya.

P: m sorry papa. mujhe maaf kar dijiye.

sudhir: hume peehu se bhi toh mila.

P; peehu!!

Peehu: ha mumma.

P: chalo apne nana se milo.

peehu: nahi mumma mujhe sharam aa rahi hai.

P: papa ek min aap ram se baat kijiye. isse me abhi lati hu. chal ayesha.

Peehu: me nahi mumma pls.

both run behind her and catch her. priya carries her .

P: yeh lijiye ram. milaiye isse sab se. tumhara parantha tayar ho gaya hoga. me abhi aati hu.

Peehu: hi kush..

Kush: hi but tum kaun ho?

Peehu: me peehu hu. tumhari behen.

Kush: dadi yeh kya keh rahi hai.

KK: yeh sach hai beta yeh tumhari behen hi.

KK: peehu kaisi hai aap? me tumhari dadi hu.

Peehu: me theek hu aap kaisi hai?

KK: me thik hu.

P: yeh lo parantha. chalo kha lo

Peehu: wow parantha!!

peehu starts eating.

KK: priya beta vapas aa jao pls

P: ma me inhe chodke nahi aa sakti.

Shipra: tumhe inki parvah hai priya. lekin hamari kya?

P: ma aap logo ne toh mmuje mara hua maan liya tha na.

Shipra: hum maafi mangte hai tujhse. bhul ja priya.

P: kaise bhulu ma?

Shipra: priya bhul ja pls.

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sss283

@sss283

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

peehu -ayesha planning...😛
oh why is priya not willing to go back😲...
pls try to pm na...dont wanna miss reading this...
continue soon

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rayaloveland

@rayaloveland

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

PART 4

P: nahi bhul sakti itni assani se ma.

Shipra: pls bhul ja.

P: nahi ma. me ja rahi hu. bye. aap baat kijiye peehu, ayesha or ram se.

Shipra: priya sun toh.

Peehu: nani mumma chali gayi.

Shipra: beta apni mumma ko bola na vapas aane k liye.

Peehu: kahan?

Shipra: apne ghar india.

Peehu: mujhe bhi aana hoga?

Shipra: ha beta.

Peehu: mera school?

Shipra: yahan k sabse best school me tumhe dalenge.

Peehu: koshish zaroor karungi

on the other hand Priya is going out and rajat sees her.

Rajat: miss sharma mujhe aap se baat karni hai. chaliye mere sath.

P: thik hai sir.

RAJAT'S ROOM

Rajat: in paanch salo me mene apse bht rudely behave kiya hai m sorry for it.

P: its ok sir.

Rajat: aapse or bhi kuch kehena hai.

P: ji sir kahiye?

Rajat: i love miss sharma

P: shocked.

Rajat: kya hua aapko? aap bhi mujhse pyar karti hai na?

P: sir I am sorry but I dont love u. me shaadi shuda hu. me sirf apne pati se hi pyar karti hu

Rajat: but aap toh 5 yrs pehle sab chodke dubai aa gayi or aaj tak aapke pati nahi aye.

P: vo aa chuke hai kabke. but me aapse pyar kabhi nahi kar sakti .

she leaves the room crying and running to kady's room and ram sees her crying and running there.

he goes there.

Ram: priya kya hua hai? tum ro kyu rahi ho?

P: kuch nahi ram.

she wipes her tears

R: kuch toh hua hai? kya kaha rajat ne? bolo?

P: rajat proposed me. he loves me ram.

she starts crying again

R: isliye me keh raha tha na sab ko bata dena chaiye.

P: thik hai ram but sabse pehle kady ko bolna chahti hu ram.

R: thik hai chalo me kady ko bulata hu idhar.

after sometime kady comes with ram to her room.

K: kya baat hai pooja aane bulaya mujhe?

P: ha kady tujhe ek sachai batani hai apne bare me.

K: kya pooja?

P: ki me pooja nahi hu. me priya hu. kady peehu bhi peehu sharma nahi hai. vo peehu kapoor hai.

K: kapoor?

P: me mrs priya ram kapoor and peehu miss peehu ram kapoor.

K: ayesha?

P: vo meri choti behen hai. chal mere sath ram k room me. sab se milati hu. or natasha se milegi.?

K: kaun natasha kapoor?

P: ha vo mere bhai ki patni hai. ram ki choti behen.

K: sir aapki behen?

R: ha kady chal.

ram's room

P: kya chal raha hai peehu?

Peehu: baat kar rahi hu dadi se.

P: peehu idhar aao.

Peehu: ha ayi.

P: ma aaj me apko kady se milvana chahti hu jiske sath me 5 yrs tak rahi hu. jo hamesha meri help karti hai.

K: hi aunty! how are u?

KK: m fine kady n u?

K: m fine aunty.

KK: bht achha laga tum meri bahu or poti k sath rahi.

K: is me thanks ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. vo dono hai hi itne sweet. agar vo 5 saal pehle meri behen ko leke nahi ati toh me kabhi mil hi nahi pati.

KK: tumhari behen?

P: ha ma raina kady ki behen hai. me uski mom jyoti or raina sab us landslide k shikar ho gaye the. jyoti ko me bacha nahi payi but raina ko bacha liya.

K: aaj pooja. nahi priya ki vajah se meri behen hai mee pass. or yeh peehu bht sweet hai.

dai ja calls from behind for dinner.

K: mujhe jana hoga dai ja bula rahi hai.

P: ma hum chalte hai dinner k liye.

KK: thik hai beta. apna khayal rakhna or pls vapas aa jao.

P: sochungi.

they shut the video call n go to have dinner.

P: dai ja aap sabse kuch kehena chahti hu jo mene kady ko bol diya hai.

DJ: kya kehena chahti ho beta?

P: DJ sirf aap hi janti thi ki me priya sharma hu. but vo toh me shadi se pehle thi. mera asli naam hai mrs priya ram kapoor. ha me ram ki wife hu priya ram kapoor. or peehu humari beti hai. ayesha meri choti behen hai.

DJ: ha dai ja. aaj mujhe mera parivar mil gaya is rakhi me.

K: dai ja jinhone mujhe internship k liye aprove kiya hai vo meri ram sir ki behen hai natasha kapoor. priya k bhai ki patni.

R: kady pls dont tell me ram sir. just call ram.

K: ok!!

Rajat all shocked to hear all this.