FF ~ Those Lost 5 Years ~ part.17_ pg.108_ 08.Oct - Page 51

Originally posted by: parulkhare13

YAYAY ME THE FIRST ONE
maine kabhi tere ko line by line reply nehi ki.. aj try karti hu

PART - 10 WHAT A START BOSS BANG ON KYA DREAM SEQUENCE THA uFFF i just loved it my WRITING QUEEN u are
thnk u so much meri jaan, tu haar tym mere naam ke ek nayi adjective add karti hai but i love it

loved the scene where priya crying like a baby and ram calming her that was just awww moment loved that so much kash sach hota hayyy and cady my super girl she told about RAYA everything and poor rajat baychara he was so shocked ki dusri baar bhi he loved the wrong person really feeling bad for him
i knw yaar.. i too feel bad for him.. but nothing to do na.. RaYa ko milwana hai toh rajat ka dil todna hi padega

and fhir last part kya anu tu hemaysha aisay hi la kay last mei rokti hai that's not fare haan but kya karay twist pay la kay wait toh karao gi akhir EKTA MAI KA BHOOT JO TUMAY GHUSS GAYA HAI aur PRE - CAP yay kya hai rajat calling ram that he is getting engaged next week that was really shocking haan
hahaha.. yeah baby.. 12 years ka asar hai

PART -11- ufff this one is awesome,fantastic, adorable, mind blowing,breathtaking,full of love and again u made me

totally yaar kya likha thank u jaan this update is rocking i loved it sooo muchhh

loved the beginning of day with priya running behind pihu that was adorable and the conversation of priya and pihu that was just awesome u write the dialogue of priya exactly the way she speak in serial " hayyyay mera baccha " i was so easily able to imagine with each and every expression thank u to ur writing skill damm good and now best part ever i loved the room scene of raya that was heart throbbing mind blowing full of love yaar

while reading this part i was so happy that u can imagine well that meray expression kya hongein

u expressed so well yaar and last was just outstanding both loving birds bringing out their emotions and hugging each other crying out their emptiness of 5 year in each other arms that was justtt ufff now i can't express.

and at-last u know what anu

i love you yaarthank so much jaan for being in my life love you ...
baap re... tera moo band hone ke baad itna bolti hai.. khulla hone per soch kya halat hoti ok jokes apart even i don't hv words to express how glad i am reading your comment u bring life in me baby.. i am so glad m able to make u visualize loads yaar... blessed to hv u in my lyf... muuuaaahhh

Originally posted by: balhfan22

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OMG!!! Freakin awesome update!!! ⭐️
Jus made my day! 😃 Loved every bit of it!
Priya confessed!! Yay! Finally! 😛
Soo beautifully written.. 😳 Fabulous update!
Plz plz plz continue soon! Cant wait for the next part!! 😉