FF:'Yet Unknown.'Part-30 up. on pg.104(14/02/13) - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi girls...
Birdy, Neel, Eram...guys will try to update soon...Please wait ...maybe on Sunday.😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part-17:

Ram: Haa kal woh breaking news aayi thi, raat ko 'Borivli National Park' se ek sherni bahar aayi thi, shayad ussine kiya hoga.

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'It's so blissful to be in each other's arms in the beautiful Sunday morning' relishing the likely feeling, both hesitates to get up from the bed. Listening to the music of his heartbeats with closed eyes a contagious soft smile adores her face as Priya lies there; resting her head on his strong arm enjoying the comfort of loveliest pillow she has. Usually his other masculine arm wraps around her waist, of course forming the tight yet not forceful grip. It always makes her to wonder about the enigmatic, enchanting presence of his around her without causing a hurt to her. But after all she is his 'Gudia' she thinks with her smile getting wider. Yes! He likes to call her like that especially after their fights when he realizes that it's his fault. Making a childlike face, he would say 'Gudia! Tum kyon naaraz hoti ho mujhse? Ek toh tumne aaney mein itani der lagga de'. She would easily give up her anger, melting into those innocent yet penetrating eyes & deep voice.

Ram is enjoying the serene beauty of Priya's face with warm smile. He continues to absorb by his eyes, the pristine smile she has while being in his arms like that. Admiring the beauty of her closed eyes, he thinks 'At least he gets a break from drowning into those captivating eyes when they are closed otherwise they just take control over him or rather he likes to lose control to them'. Wondering if ever the angels do really exists, they must be like her. Yes! For him she is an angel sent to him who has made his life blissful.

As they continue to spend one of their precious mornings in each other's arms, Ram's phone makes the noise on the side table. Priya opens her eyes, by gazing in the direction of the noise indicates him to pick up the phone in slight laugh. He doesn't want. After the 1st call ends, she persist him to pick up the phone at least on 2nd one. Reluctantly he moves his arm away from her waist & turns around to pick up the phone, sees the flashing name.

Ram: (Slightly irritated) Abb ek yahi baaki thi?

She couldn't control her laugh to his irritation. (Gets up & sits)

Priya: So how many of your friends are trying to call you Mr. Kapoor? (Starts make hair bun, looks at him teasingly)

Ram: Mein phone uthau abb? (With sarcastic laugh) Baad mein baat kartey hain?

She nods in agreement laughing cutely, gets up from the bed.

Ram: Helloo..bolo!

Neha: Goood Morning Mumbai! (Says it in RJ style)

Ram: (Rubs his eyes) Kya nautanki hain yaar subah-subah!

Neha: Atleast itna toh pata hai kay subah ho gayi hai?

Ram: Helllooo! Sun's 1st ray falls on the window glass panel of my bedroom.

(Priya understands who is on the other end from Ram's way of talking, smiles looking at him)

Neha: Haaa! Haa…phir bhi tumhe yaad dilana hota hai ke subah ho gayi hai.Din nikal aaya hai.

Ram: Meri maa sorry! Abb batao bhi phone kyon kiya?

Neha: Fatty! aise kaise chhod dengey tumhe! Pehele yeh bataao itani derse Vikram phone try kar raha hai, utha kyon nahi rahein the? Haa? (Teasingly)

Ram: (With his blushingwala smile) Vikram hai kya wahan pe, ek kaam yaad aaya. Tum ussey phone do. (Tries to avoid her)

Neha: Meary saath oversmart mat bano yaar! Aur waisebhi tumhara kaam hai toh tum Vikram ko call karo na! (Shouts)

From other end Vikram tries to shut her up.

Vikram: Neha rahaine do yaar! Bechare ko subah-subah kyon sataa rahi ho.

Ram listens to his voice.

Neha: Vikram stop acting like his lawyer.

Ram: Arre Neha! (Over hears their conversation) apane samjhdar pati ki baat kabhi toh suno yaar!

Neha: Accha..accha! abb Sharma na bandh kar de.Yaad hain na aaj tum donoko dinner ke liye aana hain.

Ram: Haaa.. bilkul yaad hai! Don't worry ….Bhulne ke liye. I have not become that old yet.

Neha: Fatty! Aur ek baat…time pe aaja na..Ok! Sunna hain shaadi honey ke baad tu bahot "Undisciplined' hogaya hain…(Laughs uncontrollably)

Ram: Tum chahati ho toh abhi aata hun! (Sarcastically)

Meanwhile on other end Vikram grabs the phone from Neha.

Vikram: Kyon yaar…bechare ko pareshaan kar rahi ho! Agar naraaz ho jayega toh 'Dinner Plan' cancel kar dega. Tum jaanti ho na Ram ko kitna 'gussa' aata hain.

Ram: Kya yaar..abb tu bhi suru hogaya?

Vikram: Abb meine kya kiya? Ulta tujhe bacha liya.

Ram: Maan na hoga yaar..tu kaise handle karta hai . 'Thanks'! Nahi toh mujhe subah-subah pagal karke chhodti thi .

Vikram: Aree! Itnay saalo ka experience hai. Tu bhi dheere-dheere apaney aap sab samjhega.

Ram: Aur ek baat.Ussey bol de last time ke tarah koi shararat na karey.

Priya hears it (More attentively)

Vikram: Kaunsi baat bol raha hain tu?

Ram: Arre! Who Priya kay juice mein …matlab baad mein ghar aatey waqt pareshaani hoti hai, Kissine dekh liya toh. Daadi ke nazar humlogo pe hamesha raheti hai, isliye warna koi problem nahi tha.

Vikram: Don't worry yaar! Mein Neha ko samjhata hun. Aur waise bhi iss baar 'Juice' mein kuch milaney ke koi jarurat bhi nahi …meray dost!( Laughs)

Ram: Very funny! Waise teri biwi se tubhi kuch kam nahi hai. (Irritatingly)

Vikram: Who kya hain na kahete hai ke 'Jabb Miyan-Biwi kaafi waqtse ek saath rahainte hai toh ek-dusre ke kuch aadatey apany aap dono mein aa jati hai.'

Neha restlessly waits to get the phone back.

Neha: Arre abb tum dono dosto ke 'Teacher-Student 'conversation khatam huyi ho toh mujhe do, mujhe Priya se baat karni hai. (Child like)

Ram: Arre baba phone de dena usko…mein bhi Priyako bulata hun.

Vikram: Chal phir Ram shaam ko milety hai phir baat kartey hai ' Tu itna 'Undisciplined' kyon ho raha hai' usskey baarey mein. (Laughs)

Ram: Tum dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta! (Sighs calls Priya)

Priya & Neha talked for sometime & finished their conversation. Meanwhile Ram freshened up & comes(Looking at the clock).

Ram: Tum dono itani der kya baat rahi thi? Aaramse 20-25 mins. hogaye..

Priya: Bahot kuch.

Ram: Waise shaam ko tum dono milneywali ho phir bhi.

Priya: Neha aap ke favorite dish mujhe seekhanewali hai.

Ram: Tum Ghass-phusse meray liye kya banaogi?

Priya: Who aapko shaam ko pata chalega. Aur merayse zyaada Neha excited hain.

Ram: Ooohhh..! That sounds great. Tum dono meray liye itna kuch kar rahi ho.

Priya: Ek baat kahu Ram? You are very lucky. Ummm.. No… actually we are lucky.

Ram: Why?

Priya: Neha aur Vikram! Jiss dinse mein undonose mili hun, yahi dekha hai ke aapse dono kitna pyaar kartey hai.Humesha aapko khush dekhna chahte hain.

Ram: Haa..I know that .Par tum ekdam emotional kyon ho rahi ho?

Priya: Who aap 'Juice' ke baat kar rahain the, toh mujhe yaad aaya , yeh dono humesha hum donoko pass laaney kay liye kitni koshish kartey the.

Ram: Who hum dono ke pehelibaar jo baatchit huyi thi, usskey liye bhi yeh dono jimmedar the.

Priya: Who meine engagement ke din dekha tha, suruse he apanepan ke kuch toh baat mehsoos huyi thi donoke liye. 'Ring Ceremany' mein jis tarah Nehane hum dono ko kareeb laaney ke liye dhakka diya aur Vikramne jhatse photo click kiya tha. Aise lagga ke aapke 'Engagement' ho rahe hai toh sabse zyaada yeh dono khush hai.

Ram: Khush kaise nahi hotey, dono kitnay saalonse meray liye ladki dhoondne ke chakkar mein the. Dono ko meri bahot fikar hoti thi.

Priya: Because both of them love you unconditionally. That's what I am trying to say. Humlog kitnay khushnasib hai. Vikram-Neha jaise dost humare jindagi mein hai.

Ram: Iss baat pe mein ek baat kahu? Tum itani muskura kyon ho rahi ho?

Priya: Aisey dost aur unkay saath beetaye huye pal, dono kitnay anmol hai. Unki yaadon se bhi muskurahat aa jaati hai.

Ram: Who toh hai, aur naye anmol lamhe paaney ke liye ready raho. Aaj shaam ko!

Priya: Surely… Mr. Kapoor!

In the evening Mr. & Mrs. Kapoor reached Shergil's for dinner.

To be continued

XXX

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I was writing about Neha-Vik but felt like the single update will get very long so updating in parts.

Thanks for reading.

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.😃i like it.

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Posted: 12 years ago
good one ... waiting for nxt part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update ...Please jaldi update karna jyda wait mat karana waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
vik-neha teasing ram...lol😆😆
thanku ...this is a sweet update...😛
will be waiting for the next

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Posted: 12 years ago
It was really a treat to read the update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww that was quick and superb update asusaul..
loved the morning and the convo of four friends ...
Thank you soo much..you made my evening ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely convo b/t ram @ vikha
they r the true friendz
continue sssooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome... update once agin Sania... i m loving this awesome fourosome they r just amezing RaYa & NehVik is so adorable together... loving it wish to see them in show too mising their masti so much on screen... now waiting for their masti on scrren do update soon... don't make us wait...want lots of teasing with both end... n if possible want to see Talli Priya once...

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