FF:'Yet Unknown.'Part-30 up. on pg.104(14/02/13) - Page 25

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

ok i m angry with u saniya yaar 😡 why it is so short 😕 but i just loved it... again VB in & now MS tooo 😆 this is something unexpected 😆 😳 but loved to see the way Ram were making Priya jealous ☺️ poor girl don't know what is coming next to her 😆 😳 post the next one soon waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but this time a big in length 😛 😉

Leena...🤗 don't get angry yaar. That was quick update...Embarrassed Thanks for likng & commenting dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sss283

calamity when priya drinks !!...😆...
ram has more strawberries...😳...
ab priya kya karegi😆😆😆

Priya kya karegi?😉 Thank you so much dear for lovely comments.🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Evan, don't act like Cry-baby 😆...Will try to update soon. The next update will be the toughest one, so please wait patiently.😊 Thanks for liking it so much.
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Priya: Priya tumbhi kitni bholi ho, Golu samjh rahi thi (Sarts removing her watch, bracelet not looking in the mirror) Hears the song in Ram's besura voice.

'bheege hont tere, pyaasa dil mera

lage abrr sa haan mujhe tan tera

jamke barsa de mujhpar ghataayein

tuhi meri pyaas tu hi mera jaa'

Priya: (Sulks, still looking downwards) Laggta hai 'Vidhya Balan' ke baad abb 'Malika Sheravat' ke yaad aa rahi hai(Looks upward, doesn't believe his image in mirror)

She turns swiftly, unbelievably. Her eyes couldn't believe that he is relishing on the strawberries, laid on the couch on sideways, his head resting on his hand against the armrest. She shouts loudly in annoyance.

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Part 11: Flashback- X

Priya: Raam…you cheater! (Her fiery eyes throwing out the fire, difficult to extinguish)

You lied to me…( Looks out for something to hit him, gets a vase on dressing table but feels it's too large.[thinks 'sacchi mein laggega toh'] Takes out the Orchid flowers from the vase & starts hitting him with the flowers one by one, from sitting there.)

Strawberry khaane hain …Disaster management karna hota hain…Vidhya Balan badi acchi laggti hain haa,…(In sarcasm) Abhi bataati hun.

Ram: (Starts getting up as the shower of flowers hit him) Oouch,…oouch…Priya please control yourself (Acting as if the flowers are really hurting him) Allergy hain mujhe..

Priya: (Continues to hit him with flowers…shouting continues) Aur kya…Subah honey na de…..Ohh la la….Bheegay hoth …(changes expressions with each song with sarcasm)

aaj toh 'Mr. Ram Kapoor' se change hokey jaisey 'Mr. Romeo Kapoor' ban gaye hai.

Ram: (Laughs, stands & starts catching each flower) Arre koi phoolonse na maarey apaney deewaney ko (Teases by imitating the last flower as an arrow hit in his heart)

Priya: Enough Mr. Kapoor (Still angry. Keeps both the hands on her ears, shuts her eyes & turns back, now facing the mirror)

Mein aur songs nahi soon sakti hun. Aap itna chillakey kyon gaatey ho. Thoda toh sur mein gaayiye na.(Vase gets empty, now showing her anger on his singing)

Ram: Arre mein akela sur mein nahi gaa sakta..tum jaanti ho.

Priya:Mujhe nahi gaana hain. Aap ke saath.

Ram: Kyon …kya mein itna bura singer hun? (Makes a confused face)

Priya:Nahi per aap phirse kuch 'cheating' karogey.

Ram: Gaaney ka mann kar raha hain aur koi 'surila' saathbhi nahi de raha hain.

Priya: (Still hands on ears, slowly opens her eyes to look him in mirror) Aapko kya hua hain?Aapki tabiyat toh theek hai?

Ram:Haa kuch toh jarur hua hain.

Priya: Kya hua hain?

Ram: Arre peheley toh tum sirf apaney naino se teer chalati thi abb phoolon ke teer marney laggi ho. (Standing & holding bunch of Orchids [thrown by her] as if offering her, with sweet blushing smile)

Priya: (Blushes, anger reduces)Aapko kya laggta hain, mein aisey meethi baatein sunkar maan jaaungi.( Starts to remove her earing)

He comes there, putting a hand on her shoulder stands behind her. They share intense eye lock looking into the mirror. He has strawberries in other hand.

Ram: Ruk jaao Priya…(His voice gets deeper, eyes gets more passionate , keeps the plate of strawberries on the table)

Priya: Kyon? (Questioning look)

Ram: Shhh…kitnay sawal pucchti ho (Makes her to face him, puts his fingers on her lips)Don't do…Who gahenay bahot acche laga rahein hain.

Without breaking the eye contact he makes her stand by holding her shoulders. He bends down his face; she tries to understand him by lifting her face upward. Their eyes start communicating the need, the desire to feel each other.

Ram: Shut your eyes Priya.

She closes her eyes.

He picks up the plate & keeps a strawberry in between his lips. She feels the touch of soft strawberry & warm fingers on her lips. She trembles little bit. He feels her lips as soft & tempting as strawberry.

Ram: (Brings his mouth near to her ear & whispers) Please have it. I have got this for you. You thought I fought with You for the sake of fruit.

She eats it. She opens her eyes. He feeds her some more. He enjoys looking at her when she enjoys the fruits. He waits till she finishes,

Ram: Now tell me which one tasted better?

Priya: (Confused) All were same.

Ram: I am talking about the fruits you ate here & the one you had on the couch (Naughty look) with me.

Priya: (Understands but acts naively)Yes….yaad aaya. The previous one had some syrup coating. That's it. (She lies with her bubbly smile)

Ram: Are you sure? Woh tumhey isliye acchi laggi? (Picks up another strawberry now places it in between his lips)

Before she can speak anything he nears her mouth to his. He wraps his arms around her waist tightly. Their lips now so close, only the strawberry keeping them apart. Their eyes closed inherently, the moment they felt the soft strawberry along with the luscious touch of their lips against each other. Their hearts beat faster, his strong masculine arms supports her trembling figure. He pushes the fruit in her mouth by his tongue. They stood tasting the fruit, even after gulping the final traces of the fruit, their tongues kept invading other's mouth trying to absorb the pleasure of 'feeling each other' so intensely. He chokes grasping for the air to breathe. Though they broke the kiss, his hands moves fiercely up & down on her bare back. Her nails dig into his scalp.

The kiss ended in leaving their hearts, bodies & souls craving for more 'to give & get' from their better half. The eyes & raised heartbeats conveying it.

He bends, looks intensely in her captivating eyes. She is already melting but reciprocates his gaze with equal magnitude. He sees her hairs falling on her face; he put them behind her earlobes. He frames her face in his hands, leans forward. He kisses passionately on her forehead followed by placing soft, wet kisses all over her face. He trails the soft kisses from her face to neck with his lips. She responds by digging her fingers deeply into his back. He turns her around so that she stood leaning her back against him.

He encircles his arms around her by holding her hands from standing behind. He starts rubbing his cheek back & forth to hers, showering his irresistible warm breath all over her face, neck & collarbone. She moans with closed eyes. He tightens the grip so that pressing her body hard against his. Her smell & silky hairs have additional intoxication to his senses. He nibbles her earlobe & closes his eyes. His hands start moving softly back & forth on her hands, stomach causing her to move in responding the sweet sensation. Their bodies start swaying rhythmically in responding to the music of their moans. With their eyes closed they remained there till the urge of wanting more perturbed them.

Ram releases her from his grip; she turns back around facing him, stands on her tiptoes & kisses softly, sometimes passionately all over his face. He moans. Her arm wrapped around his neck she caresses his jaw line with other hand. His hand tightly wrapping around her waist, other hand goes to her shoulder to get hold of her saree pallu. They breathe heavily. But Priya put her hand on his to stop.

Priya: (In soft voice with heavy breath) Raam… (Buries her face against his chest)

Ram: (Stops) Kya hua? (Confused)

Priya: Mujhe bahot thand laggegi yahan…(Blushes)

Ram: Oooh..(Relaxingly smiles sweetly) Ek kaam kartey hain(Understands her)

He bends down, lifts her in his arms. He starts walking towards the bed. She wraps her arms around his neck. Both get lost in each other's eyes. He put her down on the bed. He presses the switch which changes the ambiance of the room. The elegantly designed ceiling gets converted into a starry night, looking very natural.

Laid back on the bed she feels like sleeping under the starry sky, she remembers their sweet memory. He waits for her reaction. The endearing smiles flash on their faces staring it. She invites him by spreading her arms & cute smile. He lies on the bed besides her. She hugs him tightly & kisses passionately. He takes her in his arms.

She wonders about his thoughtful efforts including every trivial thing to make their night so special. She feels very lucky of course not for getting the materialistic or sensual pleasures because of him but for being married to the man whom she loves more than her life.

The purity of their love searches to find out the ultimate happiness by reaching at the destination where two bodies become one soul. They explore each other more and more as the night got darker with each passing hour quenching their desires, passions. The harmonious cycles of new born arousal followed by utmost satisfaction continued through their mutual dedication.

XXX

Hi all,

Thanks for reading. Sorry for the mistakes. For me it's the toughest part to write so far.😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
hieee saniya
this part is beautifully written
na kuch kam na kuch zyaada 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
such a romantic part 😳 loved it ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey saniya... It was a romantic and a passionate update... U have written it perfectly yaar... Awesome as u r always... Plzz update soon now...

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