'MY FAMILY'...A lengthy story.. - Page 3

Hi maris ...thanq so much for da beautiful story i really loved it..at first i really felt bad looking cross mark at ram's pic slowly u brought smile on my face n the end was just superb n i liked da part wer u killed ayesha she deserves it ...

Maris, truly wonderful.very beautiful. Such a beautiful story , very well presented.

Originally posted by: Nany

Amazing story, its just wowww...out of this world . U just make my day ,thanks for lovely story.

Thanks Nany.. Glad you really feel it that way..😳😃

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Awww maris such a lovely attempt ,your thoughts has to put up how a 4 year old chils thinks and its just fab dear ,each and every line so keen and clear manner,too good to read ,and the guddi is very clever like RAYA,and the pictures of family i mean each post you updated a pic of family ,that was so touching and it's not at all lenghthy ,i felt like oh it finishd soo soon,thank you very much for this..loved it to the core..



I consider this writing as the best one so far of all my creations..

i too consider this is your best dear ...keep rocking by the way what's u r name 😉

Thanks a lot Neel..Thanks again for reinfrocing my belief that its my best creation so far..Its quite lenghty, Cant deny that..But glad you seem to think otherwise..😳😃😆

Originally posted by: janardana

What can I possibly say Maris??? It's beautiful.. I cried at the last part.. If only we had such scenes in the serial... Beautiful!!!!!👏

Thanks J.😳😃. You cried over the last.?. I cried while writing it from Guddi's POV. Wish I could have done more justice to her part, her emotions,her actions.. Well there is always another story from her side..Wait and see.😉

Originally posted by: TVserialfreak

Naan unmaya thaan sonnen😃 Neenga eppadi edhuthkittenglo theriyathu 😉...your each post is unique and different👍🏼👍🏼...keep rocking with such beautiful posts👏👏👏...and thanks once again for this beautiful story😳...have copied it to my PC so that I can read it any time I want...😳😆

Kishore , naan saatharnamaha than eduthukiten.😆. Onum thamppa ninaikathey..Very honored that you have copied it to your PC..Am deeply touched..😃

Originally posted by: fanraya

Awee soo cute, it is absolutely amazing maris, just love it.🤗big hug to you.. superb story, you really write so well, just too good.

Thanks Priya...Lo, here is the big hug.🤗. Lets bond over BALH..

Originally posted by: LalitaLahiri

Maris,

I came back to IF after such a long time today and was rewarded with THIS !!!!! Its AWESOME, overwhelming and beautifully crafted !

I'm going to read it a few more times; has really helped to soothe away some of the crap inflicted by the serial over the last few weeks... or rather, months, now.

Its really really too good. And I loved the way you took care of the Ayesha track. Thats what she deserves. The bimbo.

Lalita

Laitha

Originally posted by: Anamika163

eee... this is out of the world Maris🥳 m speechless... the story came out to b just perfect👍🏼 n a biiiggg eddy teddy huggiiieee to you🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 for killing Ayesha😈😆 keep them coming yaar🤪

Anu, hhhahahhaha !Ayehsa is now history..She had no choice but to pass away to oblivion..

Originally posted by: sahana747

Superb!!.Am wondering whether the stupid CV can ever match your genius script,but then we have to put up with them for Raya only.Do we have a choice?

Thanks Sahana for reposing so much faith in my writings😳😃..We dont seem to have any choice, that why we still keep zeroing in on BALH, inspite of ourselves..This is strictly for those inveterate addictsof BALH who are beyond any redemption..😉😆