FF: Gori teri aankhein kahein Updt P17 Pg71 on29/9

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sss283

@sss283

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

awesome job punya!!!!...do continue in any way you feel...you write so well ...continue asap!!!

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bhakti

@Nany

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Continue,continue ,continue please .its to good.

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Eram

@viny_queen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

so awasome and i love it👏👏👏👏👏👏

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azk92

@azk92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

OHMYGOD!! you continued it for me?! How sweeettt!! Thank youuu 🤗

You are not allowed to leave such long comments on my posts telling me how good I am anymore..😆 Save your words for yourself!! 😉

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YOU ARE FAB PUNYA!! THIS IS AMAZING!! YOU ARE A BORN WRITER!! YOU REALLY ARE!! I still can't believe this is your first OS/FF! I cant even imagine what's going to happen later on! I love your choice of words! Everythign flows beautifully! You're a life saver girl! i was running out of reading material!!! Need some stuff to keep me sane too!! So keep writing!!

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You can never hurt me through your words and actions because I can read the truth in your eyes. Do you know what they speak to me? They confess that you love me the most in this world and can never hurt me without hurting yourself.

😍😍😍 I absolutely Love these lines!! Gosh Girl I don't even know what to say!! It is so good! I'm just speechless!

WHAT IS UP WITH THIS?

Priya opened her eyes bemusedly but' where has he gone?

And the Precap!? You trying to make me cry here? 😭

Is this some sort of revenge????? 😭

I know i know, its based on the promo but still!! itna dard?! 😔

But pleaseee continueee... as you know, i love emotional drama! 😳

I'm waiting for the next part soon!! Jaldi update haaan!! And change this from an OS to an FF and keep continuing it 😃

Love you! and thanks again!! 🤗

Edited by azk92 - 13 years ago

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Chitra RaviKiran

@chitloner

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Arey Punya y so short update? Kisi heroine ki skirt jaisa. Precap generates curiosity.

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Punya

@PunyaS

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
OMG punya this is sooo good and the last lines and precap was very promicing ...
ye dil maange more plz update ASAP...thankyou for the wonderful part

and i loved these lines ..

that same stranger has formed the core of my living; even her fragrance can sooth my frayed nerves and fill my mind with warmth and hope.

Hey luvsakshi.

Thanks for reading.

yeah, I really couldn't stop at the descriptive part... wanted to fill in the gaps left in the show.

Thanks so much! 😊