FF: Gori teri aankhein kahein Updt P17 Pg71 on29/9 - Page 6

Originally posted by: fosla

Take a bow Punya!! This is how I want it to be played out too!! Loved how you portrayed those thoughts in their minds so beautifully! Hats off !!

CV's need to just pick this up and not use their brains.Dialogues bhi dediye aur script bhi.. ab bas direct karne ki kaam hai..

👏 If this is your 1st attempt, you have exceeded all expectations.. Ab Amby has got tough competition here.😆

Originally posted by: fosla

First the parathas and the tablets and then the J factor.. This is how I imagined it too seeing the past 2 episodes turnaround and precap.

Muh main ghee shakkar for such brilliant writing!! Gori teri aankhen main😳 Do you write regularly since you have a natural flair for it.

Please keep writing. I read Amby's after a disappointing episode and its time to bookmark yours.⭐️

I couldn't stop reading when I started and that's something since I get distracted while reading anything long.😳

Originally posted by: fosla

Take a bow Punya!! This is how I want it to be played out too!! Loved how you portrayed those thoughts in their minds so beautifully! Hats off !!

CV's need to just pick this up and not use their brains.Dialogues bhi dediye aur script bhi.. ab bas direct karne ki kaam hai..

👏 If this is your 1st attempt, you have exceeded all expectations.. Ab Amby has got tough competition here.😆

Originally posted by: fosla

First the parathas and the tablets and then the J factor.. This is how I imagined it too seeing the past 2 episodes turnaround and precap.

Muh main ghee shakkar for such brilliant writing!! Gori teri aankhen main😳 Do you write regularly since you have a natural flair for it.

Please keep writing. I read Amby's after a disappointing episode and its time to bookmark yours.⭐️

I couldn't stop reading when I started and that's something since I get distracted while reading anything long.😳

Originally posted by: azk92

Chalo, now i can peacefully go on strike hahaha 😛

Originally posted by: nandinimp

Very Very Nice!! Am hoping that something of this sort happens and teh show gets back on track!! Thank you

Originally posted by: PunyaS

no way, madam!! You'll be right here writing OS after each crappy ep. Aasaani se nahi chhodenge hum..

Originally posted by: nandinimp

Hi Angie,

Hope what we all pray for happens. I sincerely hope the CVs stop using their dhakans and just lift ideas from here. At least the beauty of the relationship would be salvaged. And by J i am assuming jealousy right?

Punya,

Like Angie says - you write really well. Awesome in fact and you have taken into account whatever has happened in the past so beautifully. Keep up teh good work darling!!! You just made my day because I could just visualize both Ram Kapoor the character and the actor even as i was reading it. He would have stolen the show and I would have to sit with my dictionary to search for new terms t describe him and his craft!!!! I dont mind will do it with glee and joy!!!