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Posted: 13 years ago

🤗Hello All🤗

This is my first RaYa OS and my first ever post in the forum!😳

Hope You All Enjoy The OS And Leave Your Wonderful Replies!😃

😳Dedicated To All My RaYa Fans!😳

RaYa OS- Tu Hi Mera!

Part 3

As they rang the bell, Krishnaji opened the door. Ram was stunned to see his mother, standing right in front of him. She held a thali of Aarti. She was waiting patiently for her son to get his wife home, her Bahu home after their marriage was on the rocks.

The whole house was decorated and there lay the Griha Pravesh stuff, the Kalash, The Sindoor, everything!

Ram: "Maa yeh sab kya hai?"

Maa: "Ram jab tumhaari shaadi huyi thi main to nahi thi , to apni bahu ka sawagt karne chahti thi. Bas iskeliye saare intezaam kiye."


Priya: "Aapne yeh sab hamare liye kiya?"

Maa: "Kaha Priya? Ye to sab maine aapne liye kiya hai. Kyunki main bahut swarthy hoon. Maine tumhe Ram se rishta todne se roka kyunki main chahti thi ki Ram ke saath koi aisa rahe jo use sacche dil se pyaar karti ho. Main bahut swarthi hoon."

Priya: "Theek hai maa." She said while bending down alongside Ram and seeking their mother's blessings!

Priya made her entry by kicking the Kalash, and finally by imprinting her Shubh Kadam in Sindoor she walked right inside the house.

The three had food and Maa was in her bedroom sleeping.

Priya was looking at the moon she could see outside. Ram came from behind and His arms went encircling her waist line.

He slowly removed her hair lying on her neck. He kisses her nape and moves upward to the jaws. Just when he is about to press his lips she withdraws.

Ram: "Yeh kya baat hai Priya?"

She didn't answer and went again and stood by a window breathing the fresh air. Going up behind her, and grabbing her waist, encircling her with his two arms, Ram pulled her against him. Leaning into her ear, he whispered "Here's to a new beginning" and turned his wife around in one quick move. He leaned down and planted a kiss on her lips.

"Chalein Priya?" Ram asked, after they had finished their long walk in the garden.


"Ab kahan?" she questioned, wondering where else they could possibly go.


"What does every couple do on their wedding day?" Ram questioned a naughty twinkle in his eyes. Priya blushed profusely at her husband's words, realizing what he actually meant. And so the couple went off to their room.

Priya found herself sitting on the large white colored bed. He slowly made his eyes have contact with her and gently kissed her lips. She responded with equal passion! He rose to look at her; she was so vulnerable. He just had to go near her to have her weak in her knees! She would lose all defenses when she was with him. That's how he made her feel! After so many of marriage also; Priya shied like a new bride!

He later let his lips linger on her tired eyelids making her shiver. He nibbled at her ear lobes; making her gasp! He later took over her cheeks kissing them each; his touch making him more vulnerable! He pecked her forehead! She opened the eyes to see Ram looking down at her with all the love he stores for her. He later takes his hands down and unbuttons her shirt. She moaned;

Priya: "Ram please..."she pleaded with her eyes!

But before that it was Priya who took over and unbuttoned his shirt. And the she spoke again;

Priya: "Ram please..." she said as she looked at him.

He moved towards her ears; and he whispered in his raspy voice;

Ram: "Aaj tum mujhse bach gayi par agli baar nahi bachogi."

Priya: "Par main aapse bachna chahti hi nahi." She said teasingly!

That was all that Ram required to continue his assault on her. There was no memory, no time, and no other person; there was only Ram and his incredible gentleness, his endless passion and love for her, as he moved ever so gently toward her, and they moved closer and closer, until suddenly they became one and she could feel herself melt into him and she could bear it no longer. It was all so exquisite, and then suddenly they both exploded in unison and Priya lay in Ram's arms in complete amazement. She had never known anything even remotely like that. There was no similarity at all with what had happened to her before, no memory, and no pain, there was nothing but Ram now and the love they shared!

It was the morning when Priya finally woke up when the rays coming from the window hit her face. That's when she realized what had transpired between them! She shied like a new bride! But Ram was nowhere to be seen. She called out to him;

Priya: "Ram..."

Then she saw him entering their room with a cup of tea in his hand.

Ram: "Good morning Priya. Ye lo chai pee lo."


But she didn't move or budge from the bed. As he went next to her; he realized why she wasn't moving.

Priya: "Aise kya dekh rahe hai aap mujhe?" she asked him.

Ram: "Bas apni biwi ko dekh raha hoon. Kya main wo nahi kar sakta? Waise tum bahar kyun nahi aa rahi ho?"

Priya: "Jab tak aap nahi jaayenge; main kaise bahar aa sakti hoon?"

Ram gave her a bewildered expression;

Ram: "Tum bahar kyun nahi aa sakti?"

He sat besides her on the bed. She slowly rose her eyes;

Priya: "Ram maine kapde nahi pehne hai." She said looking away from him.

He got her a pair of change and left the room! He respected his wife and her dignity!

So guys do you want me to pen down an Epilogue for this? Do leave your precious comments! They really mean a lot to me!

So guys how were it? I hope I have lived up to the standards of all the RaYa fans!

Positive criticism is always welcome!😃

Please press the like button!😳

Love And Luck Always!

Mayuuu

Edited by -Mayu- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mayu

Loved the style dear!! Superb ! Kick me for replying late but got caught up with guests at home and takes. Keep writing! You are a natural talent!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago


Edited by SWEETETIKA - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏Wow!! Part 3 is even better!! Truly a new beginning. The perfect family and the romantic acts. Haye Haye.. Loved it dear!!👏 Made up for a good dose of RaYa.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its amazing please continue and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
☺️Wow...superb...well done...marvelous...extraordinary writing...you are a seasoned writer...keep continuing the good work with such beautiful posts...hats off...⭐️👏😳 😃 and thanks a lot for the PM too...
Edited by TVserialfreak - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG MAYU!!!
THIS IS FABULOUS!!
👏👏
YAAR MAIN TOH TERI FAN BAN GAYI!
🤗
And seriously, stop asking, just write LOL
I want to see part 4, not quite an epilogue yet 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
mayu

haye!!!!!!! ! itna romantic update 👏👏

thanx for da PM


She opened the eyes to see Maan looking down at her with all the love he stores for her.


maan nahi ram

Edited by lovelymani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

sooo sorry ...im late dear...wonderful update...i wonder how u manage to write so well...

thanku sooo much mayu dear...🤗🤗🤗🤗

want more of this ...do continue...dont want an epilogue so fast...want more parts...pls pls pls...😍
Edited by sss283 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
absolutely fantastic update ..
bingooo 👏👏👏👏👏👏
i loved it each and every line ..superbly penned down their lovebliss ..
thank you for this wonderful update

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