RAYA New FF:ISHQ PART-24 On PAge -142 * 25-08-2014 - Page 95

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thx for the PM.
I loved the whole drama and priya falling for ram. Final part was so good, priya is showing her care for him, OMG ram took a ticket next to her, so romantic, kab batayega ram kapoor ki he loves her.
Flight me the way priay was fighting for chocobar was so funny😆😆 now the real priya is opening up, her childishness and belief in ram is taking her to normal. Loved the way she is forcing ram, and showing her right on him , slowly getting connected to him unknowingly, just adorable.

Doc the whole idea of cruelity to RaJ and the other guy was so scary DOc devil mind it is😆😆 but they so deserve, but i was really scared to read that part.🥱

Please next update zaldi de dena..
The progression is so beautiful and the writing is just awesome the way the two unknowns are getting connected to each other unknowingly, very deeply i m loving it.


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Posted: 11 years ago
slowing raya relationship is getting stronger and they r falling fr each other.

Very eager to know hw and wen they will propose.. Gud going.. 👏
thanks fr pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update
Finally Raya becomes married. nuts and karthik were also present in the marriage
Vikram's parents did kanyadaan...so cute
Ram punish Vishal and Raj in a very different way...and they deserve this.
Raya sharing the bed but both are not united.
Priya missing Ram...
she wait for Ram ...but Ram showed his frustration on her
Priya bina khaye so gayi😔...but he tries to manofy her but she ignores him.
flight scene was so cute...non veg spoon...😆
my nani is veg so she use different plates and spoons so she used to say urs spoons are non veg spoon😆..so I think priya is correct😉
wow both share the chocolates😉...dheere dheere both are enjoying each other company
Thanks for PM...please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
rams gift..so nice n then ram helped in removing jewellaries... 😳
Aww priya ..ram bursted his anger out on priya grrr...
both left for US...
ram has already fallen for priya n priya is too started feeling for him...hmmm ..this journey might bring them more closer...
thanks di fr d pm...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz

It was one of the perfect update with portraying hesitation, emotion,happiness, hurt, realization and to relieve RaYa wala special nokjhok which is always fun to read/watch😆

Lol the evil trio😆 just kick them out Ram😡

Priya jii woh The Ram Kapoor hai he can arrange a Jet at any moment of time...😃

And Vik's gesture was heart warming...

so they are officially married but unofficially single😳 but none knows except awesome foursome so ahem ahem was arranged..poor Priya was baffled..😆

Neha kyun rukegi Priya😆

Trust him gal...😳

ohh Ram was lost in her beauty

Ohh Ram has punished them very differently..sane in between insane people hmmm very different thought..

Hayee hayee help welp bhi kar rahe hain..😉 ab jewellery aage jakar..ahem ahem..😉😆

Howw Nuts was teasing her 😳😆yeh sab Priya ko naya hai na..😆

Yummy gajar ka halwa I love it reee 😛

So Priya started missing him...already pyaar hone ke chances hai jald hiii😳

And haawww Ram hurt her unknowingly..showing his frustration on her poor baby

He loves her still he hurt her..she slept with out eating😭

So Priya is maintaining her stern behaviour.. hmmm

What a shock to Ram she left to US😲..

Ohh finally the Ram Kapoor has pulled the strings in last moment😃

She will be happyyy 😃

LOl the flight scene was😆😆

Nonveg spoons🤣 usse khate hai Priya woh non veg se nahi bante😆

Aweee he gave her chocobar

Ohhh I knew it aisa kuch hoga when he kept the rest of choco in bag.

and it was really 😆😆 bechara Ram...

Nooo he isnt bechara..he wassaying "this is soo tasty" ha bhai ha Priya ate na😉

OMG fabulous update..jaldi jaldi next part bhi dedo..

thanks for pm

Loved it😃



Aww Thank you so much
everything is in this update from loving to hatred 😆
yeh He is Ram kapoor and he can arrange Jet at anytime
haha they are officially married and unofficially Single
haha yeah Neha kyun rukegi 😆
thank you im glad you like dthe punishment
hehe yan sane in between insane peopl
lol yeah sab priya ko naya hai na and gazar ka halwa my fav sweet bhi 😉
he hurt her in his frustation
haha yeah at last min he pulled his all strings and he too went to USA with her
lol
yeha priya ate na so obviously it will be tastyyy ..
Thank you for the lovely comment

Originally posted by: jodude

nice update...

raya mrg hogayi ...yaayyy...
love their teasing...😛
hahaha...priya grabbed ram's choco ...so cute...😆

update soon..
thanks for the pm...😊



Thank you so much
yeah They married
haha chaco hai na Priya grabbed Ram's chaco

will try to update soon

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

Awesome update
Love their cute nokjhok!!
I totally agree with Neha":Shaadi ke baad pyaar hote hote hohi jaatha hai "
Continue soon and thanks 4 the pm!!😊


Me too agree with you

shaddi ke baad Pyar hote hote ho hi jaatha hai 😛
Thanks fro the comment
will try to update soon


Originally posted by: lpsakshi

thnks for pm

the way their relationship mooving utter romantic lovd it


Originally posted by: lpsakshi

updates are worth for waiting


Thank you so much
yeah it turning to romantic
Will try to update soon
Glad you liked it


Originally posted by: contactcharu

awesome...
waiting for Priya to fall for Ram and finally both confessing it...
pls continue soon


Thank you so much
soon Priya will fall for Ram
will try to update soon


Originally posted by: akilagoud2

awesome update
continue soon
thanks for pm



Thank you so much
will try to update soon



Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

cute update..

But RAM was so rude...
its okieee.. hope this behavior from RAM will help Priya to make herself realize that
She is in love with her man..
nice going.. waiting for more
Thank u For ur pm


Thank you so much
haha Ram was so rude but he is in frustation
she will soon fall for him
will try to update soon



Originally posted by: Dr.Tinni

thnks fr pm
superb updt
lve their nokjhok
continue soonnn


Thank you so much
will try to update soon


Originally posted by: sampa123

just awesm updt.pls cntinue soon


Thank you so much
will try to update soon

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

As a married couple Raya has started a new phase of their life
In this they have trust in between them
for only Priya Ram is doing so much the two persons serve right for wat they was trying do with her and others
Aww Raya first fight he unknowingly yelled on her and now she is giving him silent treatment serve him right but now all is fine
now both are off to USA for Nuts delivery
A very sweet and cute moment occured between them while they were in flight
continue soon thanx for the pm


Thank you so much for the lovely comment
they have strated a new pahse of their life .
yes what ever Ram is doing serves them right to the two persons
unknowingly Ram yelled at her it leads to their first fight 😛
both are off to Usa .. will see how their relation goes on
will try to update soon

Originally posted by: priyajan12

Wow this Priyu is so like me

Mai bhi dogs we abut darti hai
Plus non veg spoon jaise nakhre mei bhi karti hu
Jab humaare that par non veg banta hai toh mai apna spoon kiwi me swath bhi share bhi krti aur na unka leti hu
Mere glass paani ka bottle San alag hota hai
Just can't wait for the next part
Story s damn interesting
Plus I know to what the teen tigdi are upto



Thank you so much ..
yeah she is scared of dogs ..
you are habits are so alike priya's
Will try to update soon .
Im glad you liked it

who are that three you are referring here 😕

Originally posted by: rosinagoor

Thanks for the PM
I will comment soon 😊


Its okay Rosi
will wait for the updte

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thx for the PM.

I loved the whole drama and priya falling for ram. Final part was so good, priya is showing her care for him, OMG ram took a ticket next to her, so romantic, kab batayega ram kapoor ki he loves her.
Flight me the way priay was fighting for chocobar was so funny😆😆 now the real priya is opening up, her childishness and belief in ram is taking her to normal. Loved the way she is forcing ram, and showing her right on him , slowly getting connected to him unknowingly, just adorable.

Doc the whole idea of cruelity to RaJ and the other guy was so scary DOc devil mind it is😆😆 but they so deserve, but i was really scared to read that part.🥱

Please next update zaldi de dena..
The progression is so beautiful and the writing is just awesome the way the two unknowns are getting connected to each other unknowingly, very deeply i m loving it.



Thank you so much Malu
Im glad you liked the whole drama how these two are coming close
haha Yah he took the ticket next to her
hmm dont knw when he will tell her but it will be soon
priya was fighting for the chacobar its funny yeah The real priya is opening up for him
whatevr she missed to do she is doing with him
and making her ownself clear
and they are connecting unknowingly

Malu devil mind 😆 of doc but for them it serves them best
will try to update soon ..
Thank you so much for the beautiful comment


Originally posted by: sssabcd

slowing raya relationship is getting stronger and they r falling fr each other.

Very eager to know hw and wen they will propose.. Gud going.. 👏
thanks fr pm.


Thank you so much
raya is getting stronger and falling for eachother
will try to update soon ..

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

great update

Finally Raya becomes married. nuts and karthik were also present in the marriage
Vikram's parents did kanyadaan...so cute
Ram punish Vishal and Raj in a very different way...and they deserve this.
Raya sharing the bed but both are not united.
Priya missing Ram...
she wait for Ram ...but Ram showed his frustration on her
Priya bina khaye so gayi😔...but he tries to manofy her but she ignores him.
flight scene was so cute...non veg spoon...😆
my nani is veg so she use different plates and spoons so she used to say urs spoons are non veg spoon😆..so I think priya is correct😉
wow both share the chocolates😉...dheere dheere both are enjoying each other company
Thanks for PM...please continue soon


Thank you so very much
yes finaly Ram becomes Married ..
vikram parents did kanyadan
yeah he punished them in a different way and they both deserve it ..
Ram showed his frustation on her .
he tries to manfiy but she ignores him
lol i too have scene this type of behaviour with special paltes and all
your nani is also added that list
wil try to update soon

Originally posted by: 123fiza

rams gift..so nice n then ram helped in removing jewellaries... 😳
Aww priya ..ram bursted his anger out on priya grrr...
both left for US...
ram has already fallen for priya n priya is too started feeling for him...hmmm ..this journey might bring them more closer...
thanks di fr d pm...cont soon


Thank you so much
Ram helped in removing jewelleris
Ram bursted his anger ..
hope fully this joureny will bring them closer
wil try to update soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey My guess is Right, That is Karthick
How sweet Ram is, He brings Karthick & Nuts for Priya
So Vikram Parents done Kanyadan for Priya
Vikram accepted Priya as his sister, nice to hear this
Vikram said "anything for you sister "
Aww finally RaYa married
Priya Scared hearing the word First night
Neha don't miss any chance to tease her
Neha":Shaadi ke baad pyaar hote hote hohi jaatha hai winking at her"
OMG! what a gift Ram gave Priya for their First night, I never expect this😆
Aww Ram help Priya 😳
Ram massage her head too , How so sweet 😳
Morning Nuts come to RaYa room & tease Priya 😉
Priya Missing Ram
Ram was in office tension scold Priya & hurt her too
Priya never expect this from Ram
Feels very bad for Priya
Ram felt bad & guilty for his behavior
Because of him, Priya not eat anything & slept
So now Priya start ignore Ram
Ram feels very bad now, because him Priya didn't ate anything from yesterday night
Ram send flower & Sorry card for Priya
But Priya is missing & Ram become more worried
When he reached home, then only he knew what had happen
He also rush to Airport
Flight scenes very cute
specially that chocolate scene 😳
Thanks for the Lovely update 😊
Continue soon ASAP 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

ISHQ-23

Ram : slowly unzipped one of her pocket , he took the old chocolate out

Priya: "shitt" her cheeks turned into red .. Ram enjoyed having the chocolate, he said "God this is soo tasty." She took her handbag and looked out side through the window ..

Oh god oh god they just exchanged the half chocolates .. What was happening to her she didn't understand.

"Is she falling for him" she looked at him with her corner of eyes. His gaze was on her so she shifted her gaze back to window .

Soon they reached their destination. When they came out , they found Karthik standing with a bouquet and a big smile on his face .

Priya hugged him with all her sisterly love but Ram has seen motherly love in that. He loved their bond, she enquired about Natasha.He said she was doing good by now .

He hugged Ram and Ram too enquired about Nuts. Karthik took them to their home . Natasha squealed with joy seeing them. Priya hugged her warmly . Ram too hugged her keeping a hand on her tummy.

"Is he okay "

Karthik : No no Not "He"

Ram: Oh so it's a baby girl kya, Is "She " okay

Karthik: No ..no

Ram & Priya : At a tie "what " if its not boy or girl then ... They stopped

Nuts:Smilingly .. Karthik .. tell them clearly that we are going to have twin boys.

Oh my god .. Priya squealed with joy . She too hugged Karthik and congratulated him. Ram was too too happy .

While having their dinner Priya asked about her health .

Nuts: actually my health is total fine, we arranged a honeymoon package for you two here so we had to tell that lie to you . Both Ram& Priya shot up at her and then at Karthik.

Before they spoke anything Karthik handed them some tickets and asked them to enjoy and said sorry for telling a lie and making them to come here asap .

Ram: you shouldn't have done like this ,seriously do you know how Priya was worried and main bhi...

Nuts : smiled .. holding her ears she said sorry and you people should come and stay with me when I need . Bhai don't forget you said you will stay here with me until delivery and you have planned your business according to that .

Ram : he didn't have any choice left . All had dinner and they were back to their room. Karthik & Nuts were staying in a two bedroom apartment and they have given small one to Raya.

And in that room there was no couch, both hesitated for sometime .

Ram : our koi option nahi hai na Priya .. come sleep here, no worries

Priya: smiled at him .she slipped in to the bed immediately and closed her eyes as she was super tired because of the long flight journey.

Ram was very well habituated for this . He was doing his work on his laptop.

When he heard some painful moans from other side . He looked at her, her uneven breath , uncomfortable posture , her painful moans ..Slightly he thought some thing was there .

Ram: Priya ..he called her softly.

Priya: She opened her eyes slowly already those were filled with tears .

Ram: Was worried "kya hua Priya" ...is something hurting you , why are you crying ,he immediately neared her .

Priya: my back.. my back is hurting a lot ..

Ram: what ..why .. when ??

Priya: now tears slid from her eyes, from morning she was controlling her pain

Ram : called Karthik

Karthik : immediately came .. Di are you okay? his concern made Priya shower in more tears

Priya: spelled "it's paining a lot " Karthik

Ram: can we take her to hospital . Ram was now seriously worried for he,r moreover he couldnot see Priya like this . They could hear her painful moans .

Karthik: Jiju actually if di travels for 3 or more hours continuously she will get this back pain . I think this long flight journey might have caused this . I will give one pain killer and will keep Amrutanjan .then di wil be fine .

Karthik left to take meds .

Priya: Raaamm..

Ram: what Priya ? do you need anything ?

Priya: Ram , I have my medicines ,Its in main luggage

Ram: Okk you sleep I will just get them ,he went and came with a box.

Priya: which one you will take Priya .. she blinked her eyes to clear her tears and she took one of the sheet from it , Ram gave water, she just gulped the med and drank it . When Karthik came with pain killer and amrutanjan he saw that Ram was giving her medicines, so he kept quiet ..keeping both in Ram's hand .Take care of di Jiju .just call me when you need anything . He left leaving them alone .

Ram was caressing her hairs and was asking her try to sleep

Priya tried to sleep ,but all in vain she was suppressing her pain but it was uncontrollable at one point . He was watching her he don't know what to do really . but he couldnot see her like this .

Priya:"Bahut dard ho raha hai Raam " and her tears started countless . He just hugged her patting her back , you have taken medicine na Priya . It will come down, please don't cry . Priya gazed at him, his eyes got moist and she could clearly see how he was in pain seeing her pain . For the first time she kept her head on his chest her hand held his back , his eyes gazed at Amrutanjan .

He quickly placed on her back , Priya can you able to sleep on your front , she just did what he asked . Where is the pain Priya show me , she showed her lower back .

Ram : Ok , I will apply this balm will see how it works ..

Priya : didn't say anything

Ram : slowly drawn her night pant down , until he could see to her waist .He applied the balm and slowly started to press with his index and thumb finger effectively .

Priya : felt excruciating pain when Ram started pressing, she called out "Ram "

Ram:easy Priya easy .. You know it will be okay.. he started giving more pressure and all he heard was her moans were getting suppressed with each passing second . After 20 mins Priya slept off . Ram called her but she already slept peacefully .

Ram too slipped beside her , his hand still snaked her waist . They were so close already and as it was cool Priya came more close to him .

The early morning rays passed on this beautiful couple Priya stirred in her sleep , she hid her head into his chest more hugging him very close to her .

With that Ram woke up from his sleep , he was shocked to see Priya all over him . But he don't want to disturb her sleep and he was enjoying her proximity, meanwhile Karthik came knocking the door

He was so happy to see his di in her hubby's arms, he must have looked after like a kid .

I think Di is fine by now .

Ram : ha thoda sa better

Nuts called Karthik and he left excusing himself

Hearing this convo ,she slowly opened her eyes and was startled to see her state , She thought she was cuddling to her teddy in her sleep but she actually hugged Ram .

She separated "woh .I'm sorry "

Ram:smiled back at her ,Its ok ,how is your pain now

Priya : palming her back , slight pain is there and she realized all the night moments. She felt shy, Ram was watching all this but acted as avoided and looking at something in his phone .

Ram ..she called him softly . he looked at her

Wohh thank you ,I just couldn't able to control the pain so ..

Ram : it's okay .. I was horrified caressing her cheeks with his back of the hand

Priya: sorry woh

Ram: common you are my wife what is there to say sorry

Priya : shocked with his confession at the same time Karthik & Nuts entered so the conversation haven't gone ahead but she was new to this feelings . Karthik & Nuts asked about her health she said now its fine .

While they were talking Priya lost in his looks , She slowly got up from the bed listening their convo she went to freshen up .

Karthik : He smilingly was saying something to Ram .. and he was laughing for it .

Oh my what a bewitching smile he is having .. Priya looked at him and went to freshen up.

While the hot water running through her body , she remembered how his strong arms kneaded her waist ,remembering that Priya got goosebumps on her body .she closed her eyes to forget that but she felt his fingers were pressing her waist . She suddenly opened her eyes to check but there was no trace of him . She smiled and hit her head with her hand she quickly finished her bath with Ram's thoughts .

When she came out she found that those three were enjoying having their coffee . Ram looked at her ,come Priya have some coffee .

She kept bindi on her forehead ,walked towards them while drying her hair , she came beside him as there was no place sat almost touching him . Ram gave her coffee while listening to Karthik . She held the coffee , her fingers touched his , she felt something which wasn't able to describe .She gazed at him he was engrossed in the talk . She took one sip of her coffee enjoying it by closing her eyes ,when she was about to take another sip ,her hairs slipped down on her face . Ram slowly tucked them in back of her ear . She opened her eyes to look at him ,a sweet eye lock for moment .

Nuts: Karthik I think we should send them soon for the honeymoon . Both smiled

Raya were embarrassed . All had break fast, soon Karthik &Nuts insisted them to go and start their honeymoon trip . Soon Ram and Priya reached Ram's home .

Priya: we are not going to stay in hotel ???

Ram: he smiled at her , Hmm we have home here so why to stay in hotel .

Priya: She liked when he say "WE" have a home .. she gazed at him ,I forgot you are Mr.Kapoor

Ram smiled . lead the way to her . In meanwhile one of the worker stopped Ram to tell something meanwhile Priya walked inside ..after 2 mins Priya calling "Raaam .." she almost came running quickly

When he heard her shriek , He briskly walked , Priya collided with him , clutching him tightly .

Take me from here ..Pleaseee .. she was trembling like anything then he saw his Johnny was coming very gloriously towards him...

Ram: heyyy my dear baby .. how are you , he jumped on him ... Priya clutched more in to him .. Ram immediately thought "Oh Shit " Priya is afraid of dogs .. By the time Johnny jumped on Ram .

He caught him in one hand ,and securely avoided meeting johnny and Priya .

Ram: Hey baby ..how are you touching his head , kissing it .. Easy easy baby ..slowly ... Look she is your mistress . Priya clutched him more tightly .Hey Priya common I'm here na nothing will happen .

See he wants to see you . Priya slowly opened her eyes to look at them .seeing very near she fainted in his arms ..

Johnny you have her scared,not good haa.. come lets go inside ..Ram came in with Priya and johnny . All the servants came down by that time. Making her lie on the sofa he asked them to bring one glass of water . He sprinkled some water on her face, she opened her eyes ..

Priya: wo kutta kutta .. she clutched his wrist tightly.

Ram: hey its okay its okay .. see he is good re . He is here only .Priya clung on him .

Telling " nooo " she didn't even looked at that site .

Ram: achha okay ..okay baba ...Hugging her ..Okay okay relax ..

Priya::"I hate you"

Ram: Hawww why you hate me I thought you love me .. winking at her ..

Priya: she had tears in her eyes ,You know I'm scared of dogs and you didn't tell me you are having this big doggg ..

Ram: taking his head near to her chest kissing on her hairs .I'm extremely sorry . I just missed , sorry aage se aisa nahi hotha , I promise ..

Priya :I'm also sorry ..

Ram: kyun ..what you did

Priya: I said I hate you na ..i just said that in anger .

Ram:Then if you wont hate me , you love me kya ??

Priya: She glared at him .He smiled and she too smiled with him , he introduced the workers to her and both walked to their room , It was having a very good view of garden and the bed was really a king size one .She wondered all over the bedroom .

Ram: Priya go and have a look of our house na .

Priya: nahi...

Ram:Kyun

Priya: Kutta ..

Ram laughed and he spun her around ,come I will show you .

Priya: was not moving ..He side hugged her and made her walk with him. When they moved to down floor ,she clutched him tightly. He smiled at her , slowly whispered in her ear "Is hitler ko bhi wo kutta ne dara diya "

She felt ticklish feeling his warm breath on her ear and she glared at him for the sentence .she was comfortable after sometime and freely roaming around the house asking various doubts .

Ram was enjoying all this .He very well knows that she missed her young age by working for Karthik's education and all . Now she was reliving all that with him.

He crossed his arms patiently answering all her questions .She gazed at him and found he was staring at her .She bit her tongue . They both talked ,teased and had their lunch ,while watching the movie Priya slipped into sleep. Ram felt some weight on him , his lips curled into a broad grin and he found a child in her . she was sleeping so peacefully on his shoulder .

He slowly made her sleep on his lap , he caressed her hair , plated a chiast kiss on her forehead he moved to other side hiding her face in his stomach she slept peacefully .

Ram opened his lappy to work on, two hours passed .She stirred in her sleep opened her eyes .she found herself in his lap . quickly she got up telling sorry but in sleepiness she fell again on his lap . Ram carefully lifted her up .a sweet eye lock , he was mesmerized by her sleepy state , his lips were inches apart . His desire filled in his eyes . Priya looked down .Sudden jolt has taken back Ram to realize what he was doing . He left her . She wobbly walked towards bed and slept again .

Ram hit his head God what all I'm doing with her , Rammm control your hormones .

After an hour she woke up with a start remembering the scene when he was about to kiss her she sat straightly on the bed . ruffling her hair ,she looked at him but he was not there .she heard some sound from garden she peeped from window ..

Ram is playing with Johnny and he was so happy , Johnny was all over him and Ram was pampering it to the core . Priya first time felt happy seeing dog ... because the most handsome hubby of her playing with it and how well he was dealing it .

She brushed the thoughts off when her phone rang . She attended it and Nuts wished her good evening .

Nuts :Bhabhi I think you both are enjoying

Priya: smiled aisa nahi hai .

Nuts: Hmm don't blush

Priya: I'm not blushing ..

By the time Ram came to room ..Hey you got up so quickly how is your back pain now . Ram asked in a good tone that can clearly heard by Nuts .

Nuts: Kya bhabhi ..Bhai is so eager to do romance kya , he is asking about your back pain

Priya: hawww Natashaaa ..

Nuts :smiled

Ram: No response from Priya , he went near to her ...when he was about to touch her

Priya: Hmm pleaseee don't touch me Ram ..

Ram: why not ... you slept in my lap for two hours and now you don't want me to touch ,he was about to touch her again ..

Buts: haye bhabhi that soo cute ee...

Priya: I will call you later ..

Nuts:Ha bhabhiii come on ... No probs ,but just try to visit all the places accordingly which I planned for you guys .saying this she kept the call

Priya escaped from there . Please Ram don't touch me

Ram is like what happened to you Priya ,what I did , why I do shouldn't touch you .

Priya: please you fresh up and come , I will only touch you umm hug you also please

Ram was stubborn and was moving towrads her .

Priya: pleading him ... Please please .. I hate dogs ... Please

By the time Ram reached her .. He had a very big grin .Hearing it..ohh okay so madam don't want to touch me because I played with dog .. Hmm impressive and interesting

Priya: she looked at him ..hmm yeah so please

Ram: so will you give what you said ..

Priya : haa ...

Ram: achha so I want a tight hug from you be ready

Priya : flushed ..

Ram: Don't blush Priya .. I will lost in your beauty

She looked down he went for a shower .

When he came back Priya was avoiding his gaze and unpacking her things slowly very slowly .

He came and stood behind her .she felt his proximity very near to her . Her heart fluttered with an unknown excitement as well as tension.

Ram: keeping his chin on her shoulder "so what are you going to do tomorrow "

Priya: sighed ..Umm will check Natasha's message by that we will go to the places what say ,she turned around face to face .

Ram was very near to her , he said Okay .she was lost in his eyes he too .. He restrained himself and he got busy in his work . The day ended on a good note .

The next 7 days ,Ram & Priya visited many places they were enjoying this honeymoon as holidays fullest . Both were never got the time to roam around or they didn't enjoy themselves and both were lost in themselves and both were equally loving each other .But Priya hasn't realized this yet .

Their next visit is snow land .. Ram played so much in spite of Priya warnings . When they came out It was raining heavily . From the snow land to their car parking a good distance was there . when they started to walk from there it just drizzled but when they were in mid way heavy rain started .Ram unbuttoning his coat cupped Priya's head and asked her to walk fast .

He made Priya sit in the car when he was about to sit in the car ,his car keys dropped down .

The keys went with the water flow . Ram went with the keys to get them .Priya was waiting impatiently inside the car .He was infront of her only but he was feeling difficulty to get the keys from the road .

At last he got it and walked back to the car, he dried that with another cloth. They started off to home.

Priya was wiping the water from Ram's face with tissues .He started sneezing .

Priya : worried . are you okay Mr.Kapoor

Ram: ha yaar.. I'm not habit of this getting wet in rain na again hutch [sneezed ]

He was continuously sneezing .Priya was worried for him . When they reached home Ram's health got worse, he was shivering , both entered the house .Priya asked him to change . she too quickly changed ,when she came out Ram was lying on the bed covering with a duvet .

Priya came with a dry towel , Ram .. are you okay .. drying his hair smoothly .

Ram: ha thoda sa , its already cool and i got wet in rain na isiliye , It will come down by sometime. You go and prepare dinner I will come down ,

Priya dishearteningly went to the kitchen she came up after 20 mins with some hot soup.

Priya : called Rammm.. have this soup you will feel better .she didn't get any response ,when she looked at him he was snoring lightly . she went back to kitchen to prepare dinner .

After an hour or so she came back again , she nudged him to wake him up , she felt he was hot , she checked his temp it was high ..

Oh my god ,..Priya had tears seeing Ram in such condition . She called Ram's assistant and inquired him about the doctor .

Assistant : madam don't worry , I will call his personal doctor .he will be in sometime .

Priya is worried she called to Karthik he was not attending the call ,she called nuts its not reachable .

She is keeping a cloth on his forehead ,her tears escaped from her eyes .

Priya: She was calling him but he was not giving any response

After 30 mins Assistant came with doctor . Doctor checked on him .

Doc: Priya mam , he is having high temperature ,I will send few medications with him and you give him according this time table .

Priya: he is not responding , her tone is vary she is on verge of crying

Doc : Priya he is having high temp that's why he is not responding and moreover he is afraid of injections so I cannot give that also .so he will take sometime to come into senses, don't worry

She wiped a lone tear . taking the prescription from the doc .

The doctor left after some time the assistant came with medicines . She caressed his hair and she was making all efforts to get him back .she made him drink some soup and gave one tablet . Ram again slept comfortably, at 4 o clock she woke him up and gave meds to him .

Ram: Priya .. sleep na its going to b 4 ... his voice became hoarse

Priya : you take rest , I'm good you have to eat this med again at 8 o clk in the morning .

Ram : please I insist . She slipped beside him but she was unable to sleep. She was gazing at him and saw that he was shivering . Priya covered with him another blanket also but there was no use .

She slid beside him patting his back slowly . She clutched him tightly, slowly that turned into a warm hug , Ram covered her almost all. Priya had goosebumps on her feeling him skin to skin her thoughts were disturbed .."I'm I thinking weird,why I'm feeling like this "I so want to be in his arms .

She doesn't know when she fell in sleep . Ram tightly held her as equally Priya too .

Ram woke up when the alarm was buzzing up . He closed it with his right hand ,and the beautiful site he saw in the morning ,Priya cuddled him like a puppy and sleeping away to glory . He smiled hugged her timidly .Feeling her softness he enjoyed the morning .

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Edited by luvsakshi - 11 years ago
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Mindblowinggg updateee Neel..
Will be back soon


Hayee hayee Choco woh bhi jhuta exchange ho rahe hain... good going Priya.. 😉 😆

Yes my jaan you are falling for him baby, you will know that soon. 😉

Hurray Twins twins khelenge RaYa...Lol woh Nuts ke kids hain I know but RaYa ke nephews honge na.. 😆

Oh my yeh sab planning tha.. fot RaYa honeymoon.. they are in trouble but I am loving it. Hope they will become one soon.

Oh toh Ram has planned his business accordingly..good very good.

Lol small room no couch..cosy moments first touches..

Kyaaa she is suffering with back ache.. poor gal..Ram ke haanthon se massage karwane ke liye body bhi correct time pe kaam karna band kiya hain.. 😆

Itna dard hai ki she went and hugged him. Bechari..

Wah wah Ram ji massage achi tarah karo.. 😉

Remembering a song.. main zandu balm hua darling tere liye( yaha Amrutanjan likhlenge) 😆

Ahaa a very good RaYa hug wala morning Kartik.. 😆

Oh madam ji is sorry but why ji aap toh biwi ho..appke hubby ne bhi bol diya.just enjoy his touch. 😉

Ahaa she enjoyed bath remembering his touch. very good improvemnt Priya.. single se mingle hone ke symptoms hain.. 😆

The way she was eyeing him, he caressing her and tucking the hair..eyelocks. So the couple are going young than their siblings.

So Ram has house over there and RaYa will love sep.. Loved that.
Johnnyy beta Priya ko darr hai aapse 😆

So romance gonna happen on king bed.. 😉

And madam ji slept in lap ahem ahem.. aur phir Ram ji ko kiya tempt kiss karne ke liye . phir bhi Ram ji Control control kar rahe hain..

Lol she didnt allow him to touch as she played with dog..
But Nuts got good chance to tease her.

Oh so enjoying together.. good.

Oh no he got drenched so he is sick..poor man he is on bed now. Priya isnt leaving him giving warm cozy hugs even now.. loved it.

Wify ka hug bukhar gayab... 😆

Amazing write up
Loved it to bits...unhe jaldi ek kardo
Thank u so much.
continue soon.
Edited by armanz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
mind blowing update
thnks for pm
continues soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
continue soon
thanks for pm

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