RAYA New FF:ISHQ PART-24 On PAge -142 * 25-08-2014 - Page 56

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Posted: 12 years ago
update karo na di
sorry😛 i know aap busy ho...par kya karoon...cant stop myself





Edited by sss283 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
From the writer :
Im extremly sorry my dear pyarri readers,I promiced that i will give an update by last 2 weekends ...
But somehow my hands are full with work these days ...whenever i sat infront of this story something is coming up ,And this story i wanted to send for a contest ,but couldnt get time to write it in one phase ,But seeing your responce Im just amazed ,Luv you all..
Each passing day its getting busier than the previous day ,When i reallized i haven't updated for 4 months and 1week ,I felt myself guilty ,And iam very much thankful the readers who is asking for continue of this FF ...I will surely make this week and Now im promicing will give daily update for a week of this FF ...It means 7 updates ...
Maybe from tomorrow onwards so plz forgive me and you will be happy with this news ...soo stay tuned for it..

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Posted: 12 years ago
awww daily update... wowoowow đŸ„ł đŸ€— waiting egarly for it do update soon... n tell thanks to writer for consifering our req love her...đŸ„ł đŸ€— btw in which contest she wanted to sand her this story????
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-14



The feeling of connection is always royal to her.her eyes kept closing and opening. Her pupil dilated with each stroke, and she screamed with his each contraction,their feral haste lovemaking ended late night in the night ,he drifted off too sleep ..
she looked at his sleep, smiling herself ...kissed his cheek ,I LOVE YOU ...she rested her head on his chest drifted off to sleep...

Priya wokeup early in the morning ,Kissing his forehead she slipped out of the bed,freshend up ,checked on Rashi planting a gentle kiss on her hairs ,she left to kitchen to make thier break fast ready ...After that she went to minu,monu's room to wake them up ...
Both were sleeping closely covered with a cosy mickey mouse painted quilt ...
Goodmorning kiddos ... Its rise and shine time .. utho utho sitting beside minu, caressing monu's hair ...
Plzzz mamma sone do na ... our panch min mumma showing their lil palm opening the fingers ...
She kissed their palm...accha 5 mins ok ..
she packed their bags ,checked once again their dairies wether she missed any of their work..
She squeezed some tooth paste on their brushes rushed towards them ...Minu,Monu common 5 mins are up
We are also up ,both woke up to hug their dear mother ...
Common common go and brush ..we will have your fav item today ...
Reallly mamma ..both asked in unison ...ha bachhao
She made both got ready for the school ..Ram freshend up walked towards the dining table with Rashi , He made her sit on the table infront of his chair ,
Pampering her to eat the breakfast ,She is nodding her head in opposit ways a\still he is trying to feed her ...
Papaaa majhe nah[nahi] chahiye...
Ram:Oh my princess only this half of tha parantha ..just this showing half parantha in his plate ..Than i wont feed you ...
Chal finish this ...
He feed her , unmindedly she gulped it down ...Try to grab the parantha piece from Ram ..
He looked behind hearing some foot steps ...His jaws dropped ,eyes popped up seeing Priya in violet saree beaded with some pearls on the edge of the pallu , Minu,Monu were in white dress ,clasping her hand each side completely lost in their mammas talk walked towards dining table ..They wore whote dress and Priya is glowing like a blossoming flower with them...
She came to him & closed his mouth..
What r u doing handsome??? Are you trying to eat or Are you trying to make Rashi eat ..Smiling naughtily at him...
He rolled his tongue over his cheek ...Looking elegant my lady ...
She soundlessly said "Thank you " leaned on him trikled Rashi ...
So what my lil angel doing ...
Eathing [eating] palata[parantha] ...Ram&Priya laughed at her ...
Rishab joined them : Ohhh taking Rashi from Priya's arms ..ohhh so you eathing palata [ in her tone ]
she jumped in his hands clapping ...lishuuu [rishu]
Risha: ohooo baby call me "Rishu " ...
Rashi : Li..Ruurishuuu "
Rishab: wow thats like a good girl ... But baby i think you should clean of your parantha make up ,wiping the parata small pieces from her face ..
All giggled by his comment ...
Everybody enjoyed the break fast ..
Ram handed a visiting card to Rishab asked him to meet that girl and come ..
Rishab: Bhaii..
Priya : Rishab we already told everything about you ... She also wants to talk with you , she want to confess something with you ..so plz go and meet her ..
Rishab: agreed planting a kiss on Rashi he left from there ..
Ram&Priya both looked sadly at him ...
They bid bye to Minu,Monu ...They kissed their mom & dad left to school ..
Ram heaved a big sigh ...Hope evrything will go well with Rishab..Ya sure
Rajiv reached there ...Ram said to him you just wait in the car i will come..
He gave a sid ehug to Priya ...Dont stress yourself my lady ,will try to be back soon..Love you planting a soft kiss on her cheek...
Rashi who was in Priya's arms ,forwarded her face to him...Mera kya ??/
Both laughed at her ...He gave kiss to Rashi to ...left for office...

Guys i know this is very short ..Im not feeling well today ,But i promiced to you people so here is the update ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
short and sweet
get well soon and next time long update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Readed all parts in one go.. It was superb. Ur ff is lovely, right know am little confuse about rajiv but i know u will clear my confusion soon.. And get well soon dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago

luved rashi interaction with ram or is rajiv k kuch kro na kab tak ram k ghr me rahega iska khud ka koi ghr nai h kaya😡

cute post next time update the long one 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
even in this small update you gave joy of reading loved ram and priyas convo and rashis palatha make up ...get well soon dear hope to see you fit and fine soon and with a big long update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Get well soon dear!!!...!...!!!!
hope u fit n fine soon... yet short but given me so much joy dear loved them all loved it all loved RaYa's cute convey along with Rashi's eatng palata... hope Rishu finds happiness soon... waiting for next... do update when u be fine soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the update, really liked it! 😊 RaYa and kids are sooo cute! esp little rashi, palatha and lishuuu! lol 😉

get well soon, take care 😊

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