FF ~YOU ARE MINE~ PART 8 [PAGE 31] 4.7.2012 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
update more pls...need to know more about this anjali!!!!!!! what about priya then😲😲😲...
its really good...with a pinch of curiosity mixed in it...👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Awesome take Etika baby...please continue soon...loved it...thanks..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Nice story but suspense thoda jaldi khatm karna.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Nice Etika. But yeh suspense zaroori hai kya? aise hi show ka suspense is killing us. Now we will have to think about your story too...

You do write well. waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
I m utterly confused... not able to say a word after reading those two chapters... plss post next part soon so that i can be in speaking mode...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wht the...😲 yeh Anjali kaha se tapak padi bich mein??😕 she better leave Ram alone soon😡 or else i will kill her😆.. update soon babe.. interesting FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
superbb ff w8ng to see how the story unfolds further..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Etika yaar yeh kya hai?! itna suspense mein rakh diya hai!!!

update sooon!!!!!
fantastic story by the way!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanku gys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
for appericating my work...
ab aap logo ko jada suspense main nahi rakhongi ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3

RAM COMES OUT OF THE AIRPORT AND WAIT FOR HIS CAR?..

PRIYA IS STANDING NEARBY WAITING FOR A CAB AND STILL IN DEEP THOUGHTS??

Suddenly wind starts blowing [don't ask how???] and priya comes to her senses and start walking and ram coming towards her .

Priya dupata comes on her face and she is unable to see and bump in ram and ram get hold of her and then again winds blow and priya dupata removes from her face and ram sees her and lost in her beauty and thinks ahe is so simple but yet so beautiful and priya has her eyes closed?.

Then after 5 minuts standing in that awakard position priya open her eyes and feels uncomfortable and she says in mind [ hey!!!! Ram ji kaha fasa diya]

She stares at ram who is lost in her angelic eyes and thinking { I can swim in this eyes]

AT K.M.

KIDS ROOM

Raj and ridhi are on bed and anjali is telling them story..

About "how raja and rani met"

They are listening it sincerely but they want their papa nearby to tell them story

They both ask her "when will be papa come home?"

Anjali ; papa aajaenge who kisi kaam se bahar gaye hai.

Aap dono so jao

Papa se kaal milne na

But both want to sleep with their papa??

AT AIRPORT

Priya; stand on her feet ans says " aap ko sharam nahi aati ladki ko chete hue

Ram; kya? Main aur aapkjo cheth raha??????????

P; ji haan ,sakal se toh sharif garh ke lagte hai..

R; lagta kya matlab aapka?

Main sharif ghar se hi hoon?.

P; aapki harkte dekhar toh nahi lagta?

R; aap mujhe galat samaj rahe hai. Main yaha aapni maa ko lene aaya tha..

P; aur koi bahna nahi hai jo aapni maa ko iss main involve kar rahe hai..

R; {in anger} kya? Pata aamir ladka dekh kar aap jaan mujhkar mujh par gir gayi?

P; main aise ladki dikhti hoon aapko;

Ram; kisi ki shakal pe thodi likha hota hai uske maan main kya chal raha hai?.

P; apse baat karna bekar hai..

She moves but her feet get twisted and again she falls in ram's arm

Ram; ab aap khud mujh par gir rahi han

P; aapne mujhe haath kaise lagaya. Leave me?

R; pakka ????

P; haan pakka

Ram left her and she fall on the ground

P; akal nahi aapke paas mujhe gir diya

R; tumne hi toh kaha tha Leave me!!!

P; DHAKKAN KAHI KA!!!!!!!!!!

R; kya mujhe dhakkan kaha aur tum kya ho BANDARIYA!!!!!!!!!

HUMESHA GIRTI PADTHI RAHTI HOO??

PHELI MULAQATH MAIN KUCH AISA HUA EHSAAS

KI HUM BYAAN BHI NA KAR PAAYE

AAKHRI MULAQAT MAIN KUCH TO KEHANA HI THA UNSE

YEHI SOCH KAR UNHE TANHA CHHODH AAYE

AT K.M

KIDS WERE IN DEEP SLEEP??

Anjali tip toped to her room and stands near the window and suddenly two pairs of arm surrounds her waist?.

Sid; hi jaan I am sorry aaj phir late ho gaya

Aaj mujhe maaf kardo aagaye se aisa nahi karunga???.

Anji; aaj ya hamesha late ho jate hai

Aaj bacche aap ko baar baar yaad kar rahe thae

Jo kaam aapko karna chaiye who ram bhai karte hai

Sid; bhai toh sab ka kahyal rakhte hai par unki zindgi main unka khayal rakhne wali kab aayegi

Anji; who bhi jald aajayegi??.

Edited by SWEETETIKA - 13 years ago

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