ff hum tum part 8 updated page 10 on 13/aug - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dillvill
Welcome to the forum. Just read your Part1 and the concept. Love it. Please continue. Hope you have fun in the forum!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Lovely introduction of the characters. Didn't see any negative characters so 👏👏

Great part 1. Love it... and you started with a BANG (Accident). Nice touch.
Khadoos Boss... Love it already ... 😆😆👏👏👏


Please continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesomeee!!!👏
Welcome to IF!
Love it!!
Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
can any 1 please tell me how can i post 2nd part to this ff i m new to it so dont know it

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice start ..
just post ur part in new reply asusual ..go to first post edit it as where you posted 2nd part ..
hope you cleared
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1 is awesome !!! kyp it up !!!
i dont knw much about posting parts... but i think u can post as usual - post reply !!!
pls wen u update part , pls change heading with which part u updated & on which date... thank u !!!





Edited by salsaly - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hiii Dillvill...this is really a nice FF..i loved it!👏 👏..and welcome to BALH forum😳

you can post ur second part like a post in this thread only!..like u just posted the above post😊..then go to the first page and clicked the edit button below the introduction part..then edit the title as "hum tum updated @ page <page number>"..give here the page number where u have posted the part 2 of ur FF..hope this will help u!😳
Edited by monamie111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
hey forgot... sorry !!!
welcome to BALH forum... glad to have a awesome writer here... hope u will enjoy ur tym here !!! thank u !!!

can u pls give ur introduction in the following thread...


thank u !!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
thanks every 1 on d way to post 2nd part

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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
PART 2


(priya in her car talking to herself)
priya; :plz:hey bhagwan aaj main kiska chera dekh ke uthi thi jo ek ke baad ek tragedy ho rahi hai mere saath... :hmm: please bhagwan ji aaj bacha lo i promise i wont ask any thing else... ek to main pehle hi office ke liye late hun upper se ye sab please help me out.

(ram in his car taking to himself)
ram; ajeeb musibat hai is desh mein to gadi leke nikalna ek war se kam nai hai pata nai kab log dhang se gadi chalana seekhenge :furious: pehle his office ke late hun upper se ye sab.
ram; driver just go out and check who the hell was driving the car and also how much damage has been caused to car.
driver; k sir i will check it out.

here driver moves out of the car check out the car and then ask priya to come out of the car.

driver; dekh kar car nai chala sakte the
priya; ismen aapki bhi galti hai aap nai dekh sakte the ki i m taking the right turn
driver; :eek: dekhiye dalti aapki hai aur upper se aap mujhe hi suna rahi hai cant u see frm ur eyes that there is car on ur right or atleast u could have given indicator
priya not ready to accept her fault :gun:(well we ladies are gud at it becz we r never wrong:wink:)

ram on the other hand seeing all this from his car and priya continued to fight with ram driver not aware that his boss (ram kapoor) sitting in the car which she have just hit. :laugh:

ram finally decides to move out his car and take the situation in his control.

ram; tum dekh kar car drive nai kar sakti.
priya;(shocked to see ram and now realized whose car she has actully hit) wo mr. kapoor wo main... :faint:
ram; listen priya we both have to catch the important meeting as you know... so please better keep moving. i will talk to you about it later on. :pissed:
priya; yes mr. kapoor :eek:

ram in his car talking to himself " i wont leave this girl if i lose this contract today "

priya in her car " aaj to tu gae priya sharma aaj tujhe koi nai baja sakta aaj us dinosaurs (yes she call ram by this name on his back :wink:) se.

finally ram and priya reaches to the office at the same time and comes face to face ones again which does not really wanted. :-X

and not the less her worst night mare was waiting for her THE RAM KAPOOR has actully lost that project which he has to finalize in this meeting. :faint: :eek:

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