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...continued... The officier turns around and SLAPS him...he faints for the third time😛! He now witnesses a very peculiar dream..he sees a dupatta flying in the air..his another fav song "mere khayalon ki mallika" plays in his mind...he is thinking that he is going to miss BALH show..no no he cant afford to loose it..its already time...he sees niharika beating natasha...he grows restless..and YELLS...like a jolt he is pushed back to reality and its pitch black everywhere..he rubs his eyes and still its black...he remembers Black movie and thinks did he become like Rani Mukherjee?😆..he hears footsteps..and assures himself that at least he is not gone deaf...only eyesight is missing...he dreams of his fav actress..wish he could kiss her and see her "that"😉...oh man he wasted so many years of his life living a monk life😆...no no..he prays to god and makes a quick wish...and just then the spot light switches on with a flash and he faces the officier..he YELLS with shock again that his eyesight is back and he made a dreaded wish.. but he receives a SLAP again...😆..only this time he doesnt faint! The cop questions him and asks him to tell what affair was going on between him and nurse..how did she die..the officier has all the proof...her lipstick marks and blood stains on his chest..his finger prints on the glass in which the drug was mixed due to which she died...and so on and forth...poor kish lies low...2 years pass by...The court sentences him death penalty. He is about to be hanged and just then the nurse(one who was dead) comes running and tries to stop the 'faasi'! She pleads that he is being convicted for a crime which he didnt commit...All are Stunned.The police had found her body..and now who is she?Is she her double? Will Kish be acquitted?~~THE RAAZ UNFOLDS~~ To Kishore, Hope you enjoyed the story. The story has been very well crafted and a sharp mind would immediately point out the RAAZ. There are minute points in the story which will lead you to the RAAZ. I will tell you about it after you have finished answering the following questions which will follow in next post-
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Posted: 13 years ago
Questions: well each question carries deep meaning pls make a note of it.
1) describe your first and honest reaction on reading first, second and third parts individually. 2) are you able to connect with Kish in anyway? If yes in what ways. If no in what ways not. Describe in detail. 3) What lesson did you learn from it? 4) How will you solve kish's mystery? What is the Raaz? 5)What do you think would have happened on the fateful night after kish took his medicines? 6)Why did kish feel WET? 7)What would kish had done to check whether those were lipsticks marks or not? 8)Why do you think Kish remembered his maths teacher? 9)Why did kish smile back at the girl? 10)Are there any loose ends or in other words few bloopers in the story? More questions coming up...till then you answer these..and i just wanna say REMEMBER YOUR PROMISE.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SriB

Varun,Varun,Varun...

di, di, di...😆

@saly..iti..nancy...thanks for liking the story :)
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11) why did kish like the beauty of the lake?did it remind him about anything?why did he return the Smile? 12)Are you satisfied with the way Kish handled himself in such a situation? Describe in detail. 13)which actress had he seen in his dreams? 14)is applying for a reality show and participating in it be encouraged ? Kish landed himself in deep trouble by enrolling in one. Should we verify beforehand the whether the show is a fraud or not? Your views on reality shows? 15)Do you think the organisers of the show had any role to play in the murder?why or why not. 16)Why did kish think about doing "that" with a woman when he thought he went blind? 17)Kish never gave his defence. Why? 18) can kish be co related to the serial "fauji"? Why or why not? 19)What would have been kish's first reaction on seeing the lady while he was about to touch the gallows?Describe his state of mind. 20)Did you enjoy my comprehension?Why or why not.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kishore N Chote - Guess who's who?




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Posted: 13 years ago
Kishore
Looks like you had a wonderful time in the hot seat seeing the pages. Iam sure you are tired of answering questions but I just have one.
) When are you going to write the RaYA in Chennai story?😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -varun-

Questions: well each question carries deep meaning pls make a note of it.
1) describe your first and honest reaction on reading first, second and third parts individually. 2) are you able to connect with Kish in anyway? If yes in what ways. If no in what ways not. Describe in detail. 3) What lesson did you learn from it? 4) How will you solve kish's mystery? What is the Raaz? 5)What do you think would have happened on the fateful night after kish took his medicines? 6)Why did kish feel WET? 7)What would kish had done to check whether those were lipsticks marks or not? 8)Why do you think Kish remembered his maths teacher? 9)Why did kish smile back at the girl? 10)Are there any loose ends or in other words few bloopers in the story? More questions coming up...till then you answer these..and i just wanna say REMEMBER YOUR PROMISE.


1) I felt irritated at first, then after reading it slowly enjoyed it..On the second part, I was angry that u bought my Maths weakness into it...u were supposed to write fiction - where did this reality crop up?...I was having fun reading the second part but for the Maths teacher...😡. the way u used my fav songs was amazing...even the third part was nice...

2) First of all, I don't like reality shows...so If you would have wrote something different then I would have been able to think of connecting myself...but u bought my shy nature in the picture...that is the only point where I was able to connect

3) Where there is beauty there is also danger

4) I would take the help of CID 😆 and the Raaz is that the girl was faking death to land Kish into trouble

5) He would have swooned and somebody would have tried to kidnap him...
6) It was his cold sweat...😆
7) He would have tried to smell it...
8) Because of the Police bashing...
9) Because he had never seen a girl smiling at him all his life...and it was not courteous on his part not to have returned the smile
10) Yes...absolutely...everything was a blooper in it...first of all, Kish does not have the courage to see a girl face to face...how would he have participated in a reality show that had lots of girls?...next coming to Venice...all the description of the lake was good...what was he supposed to do at the reality show?...u said to bell the cat...it was abrupt...next coming to the girl,,,how did she swoon even without Kish touching her?...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fosla

Kishore

Looks like you had a wonderful time in the hot seat seeing the pages. Iam sure you are tired of answering questions but I just have one.
) When are you going to write the RaYA in Chennai story?😃

I had written it in one of my parts didi...on my story on Ra Ya's baby...if u want I shall send you the link for that part...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: IndYa4u

Kishore N Chote - Guess who's who?




Mrs Priya Ram Kapoor & unki saas Niharika kapoor, it's means, Angie & Mittal😆😉😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jakther

Mrs Priya Ram Kapoor & unki saas Niharika kapoor, it's means, Angie & Mittal😆😉😆



Chota bomb - Angie and Mittal are sistas. Don't hold your breath on waiting for this to happen between us. However, tera number lag sakta hai...😆😆😆

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