Priya's motherly side

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A. Kishore

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Posted: 13 years ago

For continuation sake, I am posting the first part too...hope all of you don't mind...

Its my imagination to show Priya's motherly side to Ram...

This scene happens after Ram realises the true colours of his step - family...

Ram sits in a state of shock on his bed...he is still not able to beleive that his step-family was after his property only and not for him...this thought pains him to no end...Priya enters the room...she is aware of the fact that Ram had known about the truth of his family...but she remains silent as she wanted to know Ram's mind fully...

Priya: Aap itne disturbed kyu hai Mr. Kapoor?

Ram does not reply...

Priya: Mr. Kapoor...aap se hi pooch rahi hoon...

Ram: Haan bolo Priya...

Priya: Kahan kho gaye the aap?

Ram: Kuch nahi Priya...tum bolo

Priya: Aap ko aaj se pehle itne dukh mein nahi dekha...kya baat hai?

Ram: Mere saath hi aisa kyun ho raha hai?

Priya: Kya hua aap ke saath?

Ram: ( In a low voice ) Mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki mere gharwale sirf mere property aur paise ke liye mere saath rehte aaye hai aaj tak...I am not able to digest this truth Priya...maana ki main unka apna nahi hoon...lekin aaj tak maine unke saath kabhi sautelapan nahi dikhaya...Siddhant ko sagi bhai ka pyaar diya, Natasha aur Ishika ko sagi behenon ka darja diya...Mama ji ko apna maana aur Maa ko bhi...main hamesha yeh galat faimi ke saath jee raha tha ki mere family mere liye sab kuch hai...Pita ji ke maut ke baad, main sochta tha ki yeh log hi mere liye sab kuch hai...lekin yeh sacchai to itna kadvi hai ki usse digest karne ke liye mujhe bahut waqt lagega...pata nahi ki is sacchai ko jaanne ke baad kis pe bharosa karoon aur kis pe na karoon...

Priya: Maa ki yaad aa rahi hai na aapko?

Ram: Nahi...us aurat ki baat mat karo tum...

Priya: Maan lijiye na Mr.Kapoor ki aap ko unki yaad sata rahi hai...

Ram: Agar tum aise hi baatein karti rahogi to main tumse baat nahi karunga...

Priya: teek hai to main so jaati hoon...good night...

Ram: Priya mujhe is tarah ki soch ke beech chodke tum so nahi sakti ho...main to aaj se pehle itna disturbed nahi hua...aur tum mujhe console karne ke bajay mere dukh ko aur bada rahi ho...its not fair. zindagi mein late realisation hamesha bhuri baat hoti hai...aur yeh fact mere zindagi ki sacchai ban gayi Priya...tumne hi mujhe maa ki yaad dilaya...kaash mere pita ji zinda hote mujhe sambhalne ke liye...mujhe rone ka mann kar raha hai...lekin main ek mard hoon...tumhare saamne roke tumhari nazron mein girna nahi chahta...

Priya: Yeh kya keh rahe hain aap?...aap meri nazron mein kabhi nahi gir sakte Mr.Kapoor...
ab to aap maa ko yaad karte honge na?

Ram: Agar aisa kahunga to tu mujhe bhura mat maanegi na?

Priya: Arey maa ko yaad karna bhuri baat thodi hota hai ki main usse bhura maanoongi

Ram: Kaash mere bachpan ki sab sacchai mujhe pata hota to main aaj akhela nahi hota...meri maa mere saath hoti...

Priya: sacchi baat hai Mr. Kapoor

Ram: Jo hua usse to kabhi badla nahi jaa sakta na...

Priya: Kyon nahi...main hoon na...main aap dono ki rishte ko hamesha ke liye jod dungi...

Ram: Kya tum ab meri maa ban sakti ho?

Priya: Kyon nahi...aap dil se ek chote bacche hai...aur main aapko apna beta bhi maanti hoon..

Priya Ram ko apne godh mein le leti hai...aap so jaayiye ...main aapko sulati hoon...

Ram: Thank you for this Priya...

Priya: Ab main Priya nahi aap ki maa hoon...

Ram: Ek tum hi ho jo mere liye ho is duniya mein...

Priya apne ungli Ram ki hothon pe lagati hai aur Ram ki maathe ko chumman deti hai...Ram apne dard ko bhool ke ek bacche ki tarah Priya ki godh mein so jaata hai...

Part 2

Next morning

Ram chain ki neend so raha hai...Priya unke paas aati hai

Priya: Good Morning Mr. Kapoor

Ram apni aankhen kholta hai...

Ram: Good Morning Priya...

Priya: Bahut din ke baad kal raat aap ne chain ki neend soya...mujhe bahut khushi hui is baat ko leke...

Ram: Iski wajah tum ho Priya...agar tumne mujhe apne godh mein na liya hota to yeh chain ki neend mere naseeb mein nahi hota...tumhari godh mein mujhe jannat dikhayi di...

Priya: Sach mein?

Ram: Haan...agar tumhe aitraaz na ho to roz mujhe is tarah sula sakti ho kya?

Priya: Kyon nahi...zaroor sula sakti hoon...mere liye isse zyada khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai ki mere pati mujhe unka maa bhi maante hain...

Ram gets emotional...unke aankhon mein aansoo aa jaata hai...

Priya: Bahut dukh ho raha hai na aapko...agar aapko itna dukh ho raha hai to phir is baat par bhi sochiye ki aapki maa ko kitna dukh ho raha hoga aapko chodke jaane ke waqt...

Ram: Haan...sach hai...

Priya apne haathon se Ram ki aansoo pochti hai...main aapko tootne nahi doongi Mr. Kapoor.. jab main biwi banke aap ki khushiyan share kar sakti hoon to maa banke aap ki gham bhi share karungi...aur mera yeh vaada hai aap se ki aap aur maa ki rishte ko phir se jod dungi...lekin mujhe iske liye aapka saath chahiye...aap mere saath denge na?

Ram: Kya karna padega mujhko?

Priya: Mujhpe bharosa rakhna hoga...aur yeh baat dil ko samjhana hoga ki jo Priya keh rahi hai woh mere bhalai ke liye keh rahi hai...

Ram: Ok Priya...aisa hi karunga...

Priya: Aap jaake taiyaar ho jaayiye...main aapke liye nashta laati hoon...

Ram: Kya tum ready ho gayi ho kya?

Priya: Haan...Aaj mere classes jaldi shuru hone wali hai...

Ram taiyaar ho jata hai...aur Priya ke saath apne hi kamre mein nashta kar raha hai...

Ram: Kya main jaan sakta hoon ki tum mujhe aur maa ko kaise milaogi?

Priya: Yeh kaam itna aasaan nahi hai Mr. Kapoor...mujhe ek aur insaan ki zarurat hogi is kaam karne ke liye...aur waise bhi jo ghaav itne saalon se hai maa ke mann mein woh itna jald kaise bhar sakta hai?...It takes time to heal...

Ram: Haan sach hai...mujhe bhi unhe accept karne mein waqt lagega...lekin main is baat ko accept karta hoon ki meri maa nirdosh hai...

Priya: That's good...

Ram: Mujhe to apne step-family pe itna gussa aa raha hai ki sab ko goli maar doon aur jail chala jaaoon...itne saalon se jo zeher bhara hai unhone mere mann mein maa ke khilaaf...uske liye main unhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga...

Priya: us zeher ko kam karne ke liye hi mera pyaar aur support hamesha aapke saath rahega..

Ram Priya ko gale lagta hai...

Ram: Is support ke liye main hamesha tarasta aaya hoon Priya...thank you so much...

Priya Ram ke gaal ko pyaar se kheenchti hai aur kehti hai ki 'that's like my good boy'

Priya: Time to work Mr. Kapoor...

Dono ek doosre ke haath thaamkar neeche aa jaate hai...Niharika aur Mamaji ko shock lagta hai isse dekh ke...Ram aur Priya dono ko ignore karke gaadi ki taraf chalte hai...

I would continue my next part...if u want only...😉

Edited by TVserialfreak - 13 years ago

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fosla

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Posted: 13 years ago

Kishore.. Wow!!Another brilliant update!!

Needless to say " PLEASE CONTINUE"😳

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Indomitable

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow what an awesome post...You seems to have great imaginatory skills, why don't you try your hand in the industry. Really loved your post. Keep rocking and keep posting. Awaiting for your next post.👍🏼

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Etika

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Posted: 13 years ago

Both the parts are nice.
Continue please.

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A. Kishore

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: IndYa4u
PLEASE continue...

@IndYa4u

Thanks for liking it...I am really happy to see all of u accepting my work too...surely next part is there...😉

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A. Kishore

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Indomitable
Wow what an awesome post...You seems to have great imaginatory skills, why don't you try your hand in the industry. Really loved your post. Keep rocking and keep posting. Awaiting for your next post.👍🏼

@Indomitable

Thanks from the bottom of my heart for your appreciation...I shall surely continue with my next part...😊