my imagntn about raya UPDTED ON PG 30

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veena singh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Nany
Wow,its amazing yaar .show me to niharika ka band bajega hi nahi lekin ye kam aap kar dijiye. Continue soon

bajega dear show m bhi bajega ...priya h na band bajane k liye ye to uska fvrt kaam h...i blv ki kuchh na kuchh to hoga after seeing promo & priyas expression...that is awsm...

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kaviya10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

amazing yaar...great...Fantastic..wonderful...superb...👏

pls do continue soon...

for the update...

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Siacutie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: veena23

bajega dear show m bhi bajega ...priya h na band bajane k liye ye to uska fvrt kaam h...i blv ki kuchh na kuchh to hoga after seeing promo & priyas expression...that is awsm...

yes kuch to aisa ho k niharika ko muki khani pare or raya k relation pehle jaisa hojaye superb imagination veena😉

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salsaly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

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salsaly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

di... i'm still waiting !!!

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veena singh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: salsaly
di... i'm still waiting !!!

OH I AM SO SORRY---BT ITS NO MORE WAITING IT WILL UPDATED TODAY---BS LIKHNA SHURU KR DIYA H HOPEFULLY AAJ TO AA JAYEGA---LOVE U----😊

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salsaly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: veena23
OH I AM SO SORRY---BT ITS NO MORE WAITING IT WILL UPDATED TODAY---BS LIKHNA SHURU KR DIYA H HOPEFULLY AAJ TO AA JAYEGA---LOVE U----😊

thanks a ton di... will wait 4 it... love u too... 🤗

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veena singh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

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Raam wapas aa jata h kapoor mntion...udhr priya bhi apne maksad k liye kuchh plan krti h

Next morning

Scene 15...

Raam office k liye taiyar ho rha hota h tabhi uska phone bajta h ...priya ka no dekh ke bht khush hota h..

Priya...hello...raam kaise h aap...abhi to taiyar ho rhe honge na office k liye...bansi kaka ne kuchh nasta bnaya ya nhi..ghr se khake hi jaiyega...

Raam...hello m theek hu priya tum kaisi ho??..m kabse tumhare phone ka wait kr rha tha...actully mujhe achha lag rha tha wait krna pta h m kya soch rha tha...ki mne apni puri life aise hi wst kr di kabhi kisi ko pyar nhi kiya kabhi kisi ka intezar nhi kiya kabhi aise phone pe chhoti chhoti baate nhi ki ...kaise ho kya kr rhe ho khana khaya ya nhi ...hehehe actully i am enjoying all this yaar...ye bsnsman banne ke chakkr me jindagi ka sath chhute gya tha pr ab tumhari wajah se jindgi phir se mil gyi aur m ise puri trh jeena chahta hu...

Priya hasne lagti h aur kehti...are raam aap bhi na...ab apko der nhi ho rhi h office jane k liye..chaliye phone rakhiye aur jaiye office..

Ram...m kyun rakhu tumne milaya h tum rakho

Priya...pr office to apko hi jana h late bhi apko ho rha h to aap rkhiye na

Raam...mujhe koi late nhi ho rha h..tum rakho m nhi rakhunga

Priya...ram ye kaisi jid h rkh dijiye na

Raam..sorry priya pr m to nhi rakhunga phone to tumhe hi rakhna padega

Priya...oh that means rude...nhi rakhungi m apko hi rkhna padega

(oye agr tum dono me se kisi ne phone nhi rkha na to m beech se cnnction kaat dungi...hadh h ...1942 k hero heroin jaisi hrkte kr rhe h ...aap rakhiye tum rakho..aahh)

Tabse kamre me dadi a jati h aur dahadti h

Daadi...oye golu puttr tu naste k liye neeche q nhi aya abhi tk

Priya daadi ki awaz sun leti h aur use bada maza ata h ki raam ko dant padi wo hasne lagti h jor jor se...raam bechara kuchh bol bhi nhi skta tha tha dadi jo khadi thi smne

Daadi...are ab khade khade mera muh kya dekh rha h phone rkh aur chal nashta krne...

Bechare raam ko phone rkhna padta h udhr priya mn hi mn khush hoke uchhalti h...phir raam office chala jata h 2 ghante baad phir phone aata h priya ka raam uthate hi bolta h

Raam..is baar phone m nhi rakhunga qki yha daadi nhi h ok

Samne se awaz aati h...hello is this mr.kapoor

Raam...ha pr ye to meri biwi ka no h aap kaun bol rhe h...

Samne se...ha ye apki biwi ka hi no h pr unka accident ho gya h aur wo yha sadak pe padi hui h mujhe mobile m last call me apka no mila to mne mila diya aap aake inhe le jaiye...m address bta deta hu note kr lijiye...

Raam adress note krta h phir kehta h ki aap use hospital kyun nhi le gye wha kyun chhod rkha n

Samne se...bhai tujhe bta diya na ab aake jaha mrzi wha le ja

Raam...are aap kaise baat kr rhe h m manta hu ki apne mujh bta k bht bada ehsan kiya h pr aise kaise baat kr sakte h aap insaniyat k naate itn bhi nhi kr sakte...

Samne se..oye insaniyat k nate jitna krna tha kr diya ab lecture dene ki bjay yha aa aur apni biwi ko sambhal...

Aur phone cut ho jata h raam tnsn aur gusse me nikalta h wha jane k liye udhr wo admi bolta h...kamal ka insan h ek to m use bta rha hu upr se mujhpe hi chilla rha h kaise ye aurat jhelti h aise aadmi ko

Raam us jagh pe pahonchta h pr wha koi nhi rhta h ...ram ko lagta h ki koi mazak to nhi kr rha h yha to kuchh bhi nhi h...wo priya ko phone lagane lagta h pr phone nhi lagta h raam charo trf dekhta h kahin kuchh nishan nhi h kisi accident k logo se bhi puchhta h to sb yhi kehte h ki yha to koi accident nhi hua...ab ram ko aur jyada tnsn hone lagti h tabhi uski mobile pe msg aata h...
Samne wale cottage me chale aaiye...

To be continue....

shit dil pe patthar rakh k color change kiya h bt defently i dnt like this...ufff

Edited by veena23 - 13 years ago