Lalita's take : 25th March 2012 :CHAPTER 5 UPDATED

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PoojaMishty

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

OMG.. Its so amazing!!!!

Hats of to u...

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jakther7

@jakther7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Please keep continue, waiting 4 next update, it's really awesome too good.

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mem1

@mem1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

I love you lalitaji!!!!
This was just beyond awesome. You write very beautifully, and you have an awesome imagination!
This is such a great story line. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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shra28

@shra28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

lalitaji!!!!!loved it !loved it! loved it!!!!!!

seriously speaking...cnt wait more...plz continue it asap!!!!
nd yeah plz do continue writing in weekdays too...want 2 read wats gonna happen next!so cnt wait till weekend!😊

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Mani

@Mani-RK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

👏awesome lalita ji plz plz continue👏

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salsaly

@salsaly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

wow...

thumne tho meri jaan hi nikal dhi at start...

but the end , it was too good...

i must say , i love your writing...

continue asap...

waiting 4 the next chapter...

hope u would update it tonight...

i will checking...

continue soon...

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fanraya

@fanraya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Wow, Lalita😃Superb.. You are simply amazing, finally thank god, Ram is just playing a game.. Phew! Love it.. Please continue soon. You are so gifted, awesome writing.. 👏

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haribol79

@haribol79

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Kya Baat hain... Lalitha... too good... Continue soon..

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Monamie

@monamie111

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

OMG Lalita ji😃..finally u made me smile..thank u thank u thank u sooo much for this!!😳

i thought that i can manage a small seperation of RaYa..but after redaing this post i have understood that i can't!!😒..so CVs if u r reading..pls pls pls never show any separation of RaYa!!😭 ur post made me so restless di..but when the line came "kisiko zindegi dene ki baat he"..aaah!! i felt so much relieved..😳

do continue😊