FF : Aaoge Jab tum oh sajana... :)27 feb pg10 & 12 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Precap :
R : achha, to subah tumhari pasand ka timepass kiya. Ab chalo, tumhe mera wala tp dikhata hu..
P : kya matlab?
R : chalo to.. waise tum to ready ho, achhi bi lag rahi ho. mai abi fresh hota hu, phir chalte hai
And Ram rushes to washroom, leaving priya pleasently surprised...
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Ram came out in 10 mins. soon they were in car. (Btw did I mension? priya was in her white salwar kameez... looking like... well u know what i mean! and she was so happy being with ram, that she didn't even bother to ask where they were headed. 😃)

soon they stopped in front of a grand, and very tall building. It was a 5 star restaurant. they went straight to terrace. It was open and very nicely lit. there was no one there exccept RaYA (finally!!!!👏🥳). its was near seashore. And the view from such height was just amezing. Priya was speechless. she was mesmerized by the silence and beauty of the place. Ram tells her that it was his fav rest. whenever he wants to relax, he comes here, and spends some time alone in silence (and offcourse eats his fav food!!!). He adds that now he wants to spend that time her, which makes priya smile once again. 👏

They just sit together there, enjoying each other's company. They talk, eat, joke and even tease each other. The akwardness which used to be there between them is long forgotten. Seems like, they can talk on any topic under the sun.

As they are about to leave, priya goes to the end of the terrace for one last look at. Ram follows her. But suddenly heavy wind starts blowing. Priya's is unable to control her dupatta, tabhi uske aankh me kuch kachara chala jata hai, and she is unable to open her eyes. Ram on seeing her in trouble, comes close to her, catches her dupatta. drapes it gently around her shoulders. and slightly takes her face his hand to check her eye. halke se aankh phoonk marne se priya kuchh sambhal jati hai. she opens her eyes. only to find herself again under intense gaze of those handsome black eyes. she finds herself getting lost in those once again. even Ram is beyond himself as he unknowingly pulls her even more closer, and leans slightly on her, so that, their lips are just inches apart...😳😳

Priya finds that longing which she felt before has risen once again, somehow it is even more stronger. Ram also looks likes he's lost in the eye lock. 😳

But the distance of few inches seems to be too long to cover, as none of them dares to do first move. After what seems to be an eternity, Ram comes back to reality. he gently releases priya. that brings priya on earth too(😭) Ram just bluffs something about calling driver to cover his embarrassment. But Priya is just unable to move she finds herself in tornado of emotions. tears well up in her eyes, as the rejection hits her hard. She feels like she had poured her heart out for him, and he just broke it into pieces. She knew it was insane to feel this way, as their relationship was not evolved up to that point, Which, she realizes with a pang, probably won't even go to that point, as Ram doesn't love her (another pang😭). She somehow gathers herself together and follows Ram. In car she tries to behave normally. But Ram senses something is wrong. But he thinks priya is probably upset because she did not like the proximity (u dumbo!!!😡). He's also confused thinking about what all happened.

Finally, they reach home. Ram can't see priya upset. he tries to make her comfortable. He wants to tell her how much she means to him. so in attempt to do that he ends up saying
'priya, maine kabhi nahi socha tha, ki ham dono itne achhe dost banenge. Hamari shadi chahe ek samzota ho, aur is umar me pyar to ham dono me hone se raha.. par maine tum me ek bahot achhe dost ko paya hai.. shayad vikram se jyada karibi dost...'

Priya tries to be happy at this words. But she just can't manage it. the compromise thing hits her all over again. And tears come in her eyes once again. To hide it, she goes to washroom, somehow controls her. By the time she comes out, she finds out that Ram is fast asleep on bed.

Priya is unable to sleep. She is too restless. She wants to share her feeling with someone. But there was nobody she could tell this this to, not krishuji, not her papa.
Finally, She turns to her trusted friend, Her diary.. And starts writiing
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Precap : Priya's diary entry. and most imp, what is on Ram's mind, Is Priya his 'just friend' ??
Edited by Priya_Fan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
⭐️😊Please give your views. As I don't want to bore any1...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya_Fan

⭐️😊Please give your views. As I don't want to bore any1...😛



Nicely written but we are back to square one...one sided love...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey loved it , going slowly realizing each and every moment and emotions. Written very well, Nice job buddy ! Do continue ...and welcome to IF.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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If I may have your permission - Give a nice name to your FF, change the topic name to something nice.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --SHWETA--


If I may have your permission - Give a nice name to your FF, change the topic name to something nice.

😊 i was thinking to do that, but right now, I'm too busy decoding Ram's feelings 🤔😕
I will try to update name with next post. meanwhile, can you please suggest something?😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya_Fan

😊 i was thinking to do that, but right now, I'm too busy decoding Ram's feelings 🤔😕
I will try to update name with next post. meanwhile, can you please suggest something?😊


Hmm Sure ..my pleasure ..let me think ...what about Khubsurat Lamhe ..Yaadgar Lamhe ..I will try to come up with more names,meanwhile if you find any go ahead . " Pyar Ke Pal" kaisa hai?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks PriyaFan for the lovely FF...too beautiful!!! It is an awesome continuation of thursday's episode...you write so well that its easy to visualise Priya blushing and Ram being his bhondhu(naive) self😉..please continue soon👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for awesome ff.keep updating
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Recap : RaYa spends a lovely evening together. but Priya is upset as Ram calls their marriage a compromise once more
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Priya starts writing

Dear Ram

Muze pata hai, shayad ye letter kabhi bhi aap tak nahi pahuchega. Par kash ke ye sab mai aap se keh pati.

Kash ke mai bata pati, aap ka sath mere liye kitna mayne rakhta hai. Aur mai aapse kitna pyar karti hu.

Sach kahu to, mai in chijo ko 8-9 sal pichhe chhod aayi thi. Hamara rishta mere liye bhi ek samzota hi tha.. par aap ke sath ne muze badal diya hai Ram. Aapne muze firse wohi 21 sal ki priya bana diya hai, jise apane sapno ke rajkumar ka intjar rehata tha, jo chahati thi, ki uska bhi apana koi khas ho, jiske sath wo jindagi ka safar tay kare.

Ab jo maine aapko paya hai, toh mai aapko khona nahi chahati. Par dar lagata hai, kya aap ki liye mai bas ek 'dost' hu? Kyu aapko meri aankho who pyar najar nahi aata, jo aap apani us gudiya se chahate the? Kya hamara ye khoobsurat rishta, ab bhi aap ki najar me bas ek unchaha bandhan hai?

Khair, pata nahi meri kismet me pyaar hai ya nahi, par jo dosti ka rishta ham me hai, use mai har hal me nibhaungi. Mera pyar kabhi hamari dosti ke becch nahi ane dungi mai, taki aap phirse akele na pad jaye. Par, ab muze hamesha ke liye us pal ka intejar rahega, jab aap muzse pyar karne lagenge, aur sahi mayne me aap muze patni ke roop me sweekar karenge.Ye pal meri kismat me ho na ho.. mera pyar aur dosti aapke sath hamesha rahegi ram...

Apaki priya


After pouring her heart out on paper, and deciding to cherish their f'ship. Priya felt better. She kept the diary in her drower. And after such a long day, priya drifted off to sleep.

But It's easier said than done. It was hard for Priya, to not to think about love. She Especially when they shared some cute moment, no matter how much she tried to control her heart, she used to fall in love all over agin. She loved Ram's company, but many times, she spent sleepless night, thinking about her feelings, she wanted to be loved, very badly.

One day, Ram came to home very late. It was almost 2 a.m, He did not pick up phone. Priya was very worried. She had called his secretary, even Vikram but no one knew where he was. Priya hadn't eaten anything and she was very angry. Finally Ram came to room. Priya started to shout at him.

P: kaha the aap? Mai kitnai pareshan thi? Ek phone nahi kar sakte the?

R:(visibly tired) are mai office se nikal raha to urgent meeting aa gayi. Maine office me bi nai bola, kisi ko call karne ka time hi nahi mila. Aur bad me phone discharge ho gaya

P: time nahi mila? Ye bi koi bahana hai? Saf saf kahiye, aap ko parwah hi nahi, ki mai aap ki rah dekh rahi thi

R: oh please priya, ap typical biwi jaisa behave mat karo.. Aur ye tum bi janati ho muze sabki kitnai parwah hoti hai

P: (aur bi chid jati hai) ha ha, aapko bas apne kam aur apne pariwar ki chinta rahti hai.. mai to kuchh bi nahi apke liye

R: Priya, Aisa nahi hai, I adore you'

P : I don't want to be adored' I want to be lo''

Stops in mid sentence, as she realizes what she was about to say. She turns to go to couch. But Ram had seen her tears. He is upset see her crying. Soon both are silent, And go to sleep. Next morning when Ram wakes up late, Priya had alredy left home. So he comes back early home. Only to find priya in room with her bag packed.

R : ye kya? Kaha ja rahi ho? P : ma-papa ke ghar

R: (panicks) kahi tum ghar chodne ki bat to nahi kar kar rahi, please Priya, mai toh'

P: (sadly smiling) ' chhodane ke liye mere pas mera ghar kaha raha hai mr.kapoor, ma-papa ka ghar to parya ho gaya, kyonki ab meri shadi ho chuki hai, aur ye ghar' ise bhi to apana kis haq se kahu, jab aap ke biwi hone ka adhikar muze hai hi nahi

Both come out of room. Ram comes to know from dadi that Sharma family is going for a wedding for 3 days, and priya is going with them. Ram is restless. He has felt Priya's pain when she said the last sentence. He wants to talk to her, he wants to assure her, ki priya ka uspe pura haq hai. And he wants reassurance in return, that Priya is indeed not leaving him.

But Priya avoids him and goes to Sharma House. Ram is upset to see priya like this. And he keeps thinking about priya's last sentence.

Who bat use bi hurt hui. Ram sochata hai, "ki usne khud ne samzote ki bat hazar bar ki hai, par aaj wahi bat priya ne boli, to use achha kyu nahi laga? Priya aise naraj hokar chali gayi toh use itani fikar kyu ho rahi hai? Aur, kyu use is bat ka dar lag raha hai, ki priya use dur chali jayegi? Use khone se dar se meri halat phir se report wale din ki tarah kyu ho rahi hai? Us waqt muze laga tha, ki mai bas uski care karata hu.. par ab ye kya hai? Sach me, kya hai Priya mere liye?? "

Edited by Priya_Fan - 13 years ago

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