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Dilli

@Dilli4BALH

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

1Q priya mam. What was the temp of ur room during the confession time that melt ur heart as well?
Nothing to say abt ur diary Maris? Simply the best...

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Priya_Fan

@Priya_Fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

hello Priya! Glad to see you back!

@Maris

will read n cooment at night!😊

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jainneha

@jainneha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

😃 wow u write beautifully the pleothra of emotions experienced by priya very well depicted by u ,plz send some ideas to cvs!👏

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Nancy

@NancyNuts

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Maris wonderfully described feelings indeed...u r just too good in writing Priya's diary👏...keep it up👍🏼

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salsaly

@salsaly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

maris.. u have described priya's emotions & feeling really well... 👏

hats off to u... 🤗

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: avivakirk
Another feather in the cap Maris👏👏👏👏👏👏This page too takes the cake describing Priya's feelings...The myriad of emotions painted in the canvass were so vibrant piercing the soul...Just like the leaves turn colour for every season u very aptly described the changing seasons of Priya's life...tender shoots of love springing up during spring season, the profusion of colours during summmer (blooming love)..falling of leaves during the fall and the bleakness of winter(sad emotions)...Loved your quote of Keats! Good job Maris👏

AVI!!! 🤗My dear where were u all these days. really missed you..😭 leave aside my Priya's diary.. Your comments are simply fantastic..
More poetical and just the right palatte of colorful words to paint a picture perfect analysis..

Your analogy of the seasons for Priya's love is another way of stamping your authority as an English teacher..Love it Mmmuhahah👏

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: ravichitra
Nice post Maris. Dear but keep a check on gender usage. Kabhi thi kabhi tha. So just. Don't mind

Thanks Chitra. I really dont mind when someone is pointing out my mistakes..

Its just that whenever I write Priya's diary, my mind thinks about the way how Ram will react when he reads it; what his heart and mind will say to Priya's posers and doubts. So sometimes my words tumble out as though its Ram speaking. Too much thinking about BALH is definitely loosening my nuts..😆

Sorry and thanks . Will def keep the gender usage in mind in future..😃

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: mem1
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Wonderful as always. Beautiful thoughts written very poetically.

Thanks Gita.. 😃 Ram diary too is wonderful..

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: D4BALH
1Q priya mam. What was the temp of ur room during the confession time that melt ur heart as well?
Nothing to say abt ur diary Maris? Simply the best...

Dilli the AC was in full blast and it was slightly cold. But what transpired heated up the temperature; first the confession melting my heart and later it really melted and fused the two hearts souls, bodies and minds😛😉😆..( as answered by Priya) Thanks Dilli😃( as said by Maris)