FF My Prediction track- 7th Jan Pg 35 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome. keep pdating soon.
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Ram is staring at the phone and decides about calling the warden to inform about his inability to come for the inaugration...suddenly he thinks...but Priya bhi wahan pe hogi...aur sab ke samne woh mujhse baat karegi hi...Mujhe jana chahiye

Here Priya is thinking to herself...plz Mr. Kapoor kuch aur nahi toh apne bauji k khatir to aajayiye...Main nahi janti aap ko achha lagega ya nahi..par aapki achhai ki wajah se jo khushi un bachoo ke chehre par hogi use plz miss mat miss kijiye...

The next day priya is at the NGO...wondering whether Ram is coming or not...


Warden: Priya sari tayari ho chuki hai...bas ab Mr. Kapoor aa jaye...

Priya: Ji thanks aapne yeh sab jo kiya

Warden: Priya , thanks mujhe tumhe karna chahiye...tumne aakhir apna passion follow kiya...in bacho ko dekho kitne khush hain woh...waise maine suna hain Mr. Kapoor bahut punctual hain...toh woh ate hi honge

Priya nods her head...lagta hain Mr. Kapoor ne kuch inform nahi kiya hai...i hope woh aa rahe hain...

Just then a car arrives and Ram and Dadi get out of it followed by Rishabh...

Priya goes towards Dadi and takes her to the sitting area...All are seated while Ram is desperately trying to get Priya's attention...He sees that Priya and Dadi are seating and decides to sit besides Priya...just then Rishabh walks there and sits next to Priya...

Ram grunts under her breath and goes and sits next to Rishabh...

The warden announces the special occasion and says that due to the efforts of Priya and the kindness showed by Ram this new ward could be made for the children...

There is applause everywhere and the Warden announces the name of the Ward as Krishna Amarnath...and Ram looks at Priya...

The warden requests Ram to come up on stage to inaugurate the ward...Ram goes up and the warden instructs him to pull a string...he pulls it and a life size statue of his dad is unveiled...Ram is moved to tears on seeing this and looks at Dadi who also has tears in her eyes...Dadi thanks Priya for the surprise...Priya tells dadi that she has some work and goes backstage...

Ram comes back to his seat...Dadi kya aapne Priya ko bauji ki koi tasveer di?

Rishabh: Nahi bhai woh sorry maine aur bhabhi ne aapke laptop se nikali...aap naraz toh nahi hain na?

Ram: Nahi Rishabh...isase achha tohfaa ho hi nahi sakta mere liye...

Rishabh: Aapko bhabhi ko thanks karna chahiye Bhai...unhone bahut mehnat ki hain iskeliye...

Ram is thinking about waht happened between them and how he has hurt her and inspite of it Priya did this and not to appease him but she thought about it long back...and he always stuck to his compromise dialogue...Ram gets up and tells Rishabh to go home with Dadi and he will come later with Priya...

Ram is searching for Priya all around when he sees her with the kids...Ram comes there and all the kids thank him for the new ward...

Ram: Priya...mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hain

Priya just stands there not looking at Ram

Ram: Priya yaar aise mat karo dekho mujhe pata hain ki maine ...mujhe woh sab...

Just then warden comes : Priya mujhe tumhari help chahiye...yahan aaogi plz

Priya goes and Ram is left standing there...

Priya gets busy in her work and forgets about Ram...

Ram meanwhile is waiting for Priya...Suddenly it starts raining and Ram despite of not liking it just stands in the rain still waiting for Priya...Almost 2 hrs pass and its raining heavily...Priya comes out for something and sees Ram standing in the rain fully soaked .

Priya: Oh no...yeh...she rushes towards Ram...

Priya: Mr Kapoor aap yeh kya kar rahe hain...

Ram: tumse baat karni thi Priya

Priya: Are toh aapko barish mein bhigne k liye kisne kahan aap andar nahi aa sakte...Rishabh aur dadi kahan hain?

Ram: Woh ghar gaye main ruk gaya tha...

Priya: Aap pehle andar aayiye...she takes Ram inside and calls up the Kapoor Mansion to send a car...

The car comes and Priya makes sure that Ram is taken safely back to Kapoor Mansion...She too returns home...but is worried about Ram...

There Ram is shivering and has fever...

Priya is in 2 minds about what to do? She finally calls Rishabh

Rishabh: Haan boliye bhabhi

Priya: Rishabh, tere bhai kaise hain?

Rishabh: Bhai woh so rahe hain bhahi thoda bukhartha unhe...

Priya: Achha plz unka khayal rakhna

Rishabh: Are bhabhi...aap aa jayiena bhai khud thik ho jayenge

Suddenly she hears Ram's coughing and sneezing...and decides to go to Kapoor Mansion...

On the way there is a lot of rain and in the process she too gets drenched...

In the Kapoor Mansion...as Priya is entering the doctor comes out...

Dadi: Mera golu thik toh ho jayega na

Doc: Dadi unhe bukhar toh kaafi tez hain...par kam hona chahiye...mujhe dar hain kahi pneumonia na ho kaafi der tak bhige hain

Priya is tensed hearing this...

Doc: Aur ek baat unki dawai kaafi strong hai toh shayad unhe zyada hosh na rahe...

Dadi sees priya, are tu aagayi...ab tu hi sambhal mere Golu ko...

Priya: Ji dadi main jati hun unke paas

Priya enters the room to find Ram sleeping ...

She goes near him but hesitates to touch him...her hand comes forward then again withdraws itself...

To be continued
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃 aree v good impeccable i want to salute for your awsome ff cheers dude!👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Update soon...its getting more & more interesting.😃
Thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Hats off to you yaar..⭐️⭐️

Amazing scenes..pls do continue waiting to read the next part!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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suuupeeerrrbbb🥳 Nodi u r brilliant👏 plz updt soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gathering courage...Priya touches his forehead...to feel his burning skin...Forgetting her own state Priya feels sorry for Ram and thinks that in a way she is responsible for his state...

Rishabh comes in...Bhabhi ab aap gaye ho toh bhai jaldi thik ho jayenge...Are yeh kya bhabhi aap bhi bhig gaye ho...change kar lijiye...warna aap bhi bimar pad jaogi...

Priya nods and goes off to change...
She comes out and sits besides Ram checking his temperature every now and then...seeing that there was no improvement she takes some cold water and cloth and starts putting it on Ram;s forehead...She does this the whole night ...meanwhile she herself gets temperature because of being drenched in the rain...SHe drifts off to sleep at dawn...as she is feeling weak...

After about 2 hrs...Priya wakes up to see that Ram is still sleeping...Again she checks his temperature which has come down marginally...Priya decides to call the doctor

Priya: Doctor Priya bol rahi hun...Mr. Kapoor to ab bhi temperature hai sirf thoda hi fark pada hain...

Doctor: Kya woh uth gaye hain?

Priya: Ji nahi...

Doctor: Main thodi der main aata hun agar aaj bhi koi improvement nahi huyi toh phir hum admit kar lenge...

Priya: Ji thik hain aap aa jayiye

Priya looks at Ram and sees her own state...Her heart and mind are having a conflict among themselves
Kya hua hai Priya...tune nahi kal se kuch khaya hai na piya hai yahan tak ki thik se so bhi nahi paayi hoon...agar Ram ki tabiyet thik nahi toh tumhe kyun itni fikra ho rahi hain...
Firka kaise nahi karu aakhir meri wajah se hi woh beege hain
Toh kya tujhe kahan pata tha ki woh tere liye ruke hain...
Kyun tu unhe is haal mein nahi dekh sakti itna sab hone k baad bhi kyun unhi ki taraf khichi chali ja rahi hain...

Main sirf yeh insaniyat ke naate kar rahi hun...usase zyada kuch nahi...
Nahi Priya...insaniyet k liye koi itna sab nahi karta...mane ya na mane tujhe unse pyar ho gaya hain...warna tu itni bechain nahi hoti...

Priya puts her hand on her ears to stop the voices...

The doctor comes in the mean time...

He checks on Ram and gives some more medicines...

Doc: I think Mrs. Kapoor aapko apna water cloth ka ilaz jari rakhna chahiye...maine medicines change kar di hain...i think jab yeh uthe toh unhe plz yeh nayi dawai de dijiyega...

Priya: Ji Doctor...

Doc: Mrs Kapoor kya aapki bhi tabiyet thik nahi

Priya: Ji nahi doctor woh bas raat ko thik se neend nahi hui hain

Doc: Main chalta hun..kuch bhi ho aap phone kar dijiye ga

Priya: Ji

Priya decides to ignore her feelings as its no use...agar mujhe pyar hai bhi toh kya fayda...kya karu main...shayad mere naseeb mein pyar hain hi nahi...Pehle aise insaan se pyar kiya jo uske layak nahi tha aur ab aise insaan se jiske liye mera sath majburi hain...jo mujhse hamare is rishte se nafrat karta hain...

Priya sits besides Ram again putting cold water cloth on his forehead...Vikram and Neha come in

Neha: Hey Priya...Fatty kaisa hain

Priya: Bukhar toh ab bhi hain...uth jaye toh yeh nayi medicines deni hain

Vikram: Priya tum kyun itni pale lag rahi ho

Neha: Are ab Fatty ko bukhar hain toh yeh bhi toh pale lagegi na...

Priya gives a faint smile and looks longingly at Ram...Ram stirs a bit and Priya looks at him expectantly...Ram opens his eyes and sees Vikram, Neha and Priya...As soon as Ram sees Priya he remembers how he waited for her in the rain...He again closes his eyes...

Vikram: Ram ab kaisa hain...

Ram: Thik hun...

Vikram helps Ram to plonk on the bed in a slightly upright position...

Ram is not looking at Priya...Priya tells Vikram to give Ram the new medicines while she moves away as now she is feeling very weak...

Priya: Neha main aati hun thodi der main

Neha looks at Vikram who signals her through his eyes and she goes behind Priya...

Priya is in the kitchen searching for medicine...Neha comes there...

Neha: Priya kya dundh rahi hoo

Priya: Are neha kuch nahi, maine socha tum dono ke liye chai bana du

Neha: Priya yaahan aao yaar, baitho thodi der...as soon as Neha touches Priya she senses that Priya also has fever...Are Priya yeh kya tumhe bhi bukhar hain...Baitho pehle tum...kya yaar Priya i mean hadh hoti hain...tum keh nahi sakti

Priya mutters under her breath: Kya fark padta hain

Neha: Priya main tumse baat kar rahi hun

Priya: Are Neha yeh mamuli sa bukhar hain...abhi adrak wali chai piyungi toh chala jayega...plz tum kisise kuch mat kehna...

Neha: Par Priya

Priya: Plz neha...

Neha: Yaar tum na puri ajeeb hoo, achha hato main chai banti hun

In Ram's room

Vikram: Pehle tu kuch kha le phir yeh nayi dawai leni hain...

Neha comes in with Tea and something to eat...

Ram eats the food and takes the medicine...

Vikram: bas ab tu achha ho jayega

Ram: Haan ho toh jaunga...yeh priya yahan kaise i mean woh apne ghar par thi na

Vikram: Kamal karta hain yaar, teri tabiyet thik nahi toh woh aayegi na

Ram: Are kyun...Neha usko keh do ki main thik hun woh apne ghar reh sakti hain aur kuch din..yahan sab hain

Neha: Common yaar fatty tumhe pata bhi hain ki and stops in between...Khair ab woh yahan hain toh tumhe kya problem hain

Ram: Mujhe kyun koi problem hogi kisise...koi kuch bhi kare

Vikram: I hope tune sorry bola hain usko

Ram: Wahi karne ki koshish ki thi...par madam ko kuch sunana hi nahi hain...yaar mujhe in fact hum sabhi ko itna achha laga bauji ka statue dekh ke maine socha ki main use sorry bol do par nahi...meri baat kaun sunata hain...main usake liye 2 ghante barish mein raha ...tabiyet kharab ho gayi meri par i m sure Madam ko koi fark nahi pada hoga...

Just then Rishabh enters

Rishabh: Bhai aapki tabiyet ab kaisi hain

Ram: thik hun

Rishabh: Woh toh aapko hona hi tha...bhabhi ne khud jo aapka khayal rakha hain...puri raat...

Ram is stunned and looks at Rishabh...Kya...tu yeh kya keh raha hain? Woh kal raat se yahan hain?

Rishabh: Bahi ho kya gaya hain aapko...apko kya laga aap kal khud NGO se yahan aaye...bhabhi ne ghar pe call karke driver bulaya aur phir raat ko woh khud bhi aayi...aur woh khud bhi bheeg chuki thi..aur ab toh unko bhi...his cell rings at the same time he goes out to take the call

Ram: Priya kal raat ko hi yahan...?

Vikram: Ram sorry to say tere jaisa insaan maine nahi dekha...are tujhe kya ho gaya hain...tu itna pathar dil kaise ho gaya hain?

Ram: Are mujhe kaise

Vikram: Ram koi andha bhi dekh sakta hain ki woh tujhse pyar karti hain...agar tu pyar nahi kar sakta toh kam se kam uski feelings ki respect to kar yaar...mujhe sach main aaj dukh ho raha hain ki mera dost itna bereham ho sakta hain

Ram: Are Vikram yaar..yeh mujhe nahi pata tha

Neha: Fatty... i dnt know tum kyun nahi samjh pa rahe hooo aur kitne saboot chahiye tumhe

Ram: Neha tum log shayad bhul chuke ho ke duniya ki nazar mein hum pati patni hain...toh isi wajah se

Neha: Enough Ram...enough...mujhe nahi lagta ki duniya ko dikhane k liye koi bhi insaan kisi aur k liye itna karega jab ki woh khud bukhar mein tap raha ho...Woh puri raat tumhare sir pe patiyya lagati rahi ram..woh khud thik na hone ke bawjud...and for ur kind information Mr. Ram Kapoor jis duniya ki aap baat kar rahe hain na...woh duniya yeh nahi dekh sakti ki is band kamre mein kya hota hain...Are priya ko aisa karne ki zarurat kya hai...kisko pata chalne wala tha agar woh tumhara khayal na bhi rakhti toh ?

To be continued
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!! i mean just wow!!! i am blown away by Neha's last dialogue👏
Edited by Anamika163 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Thank you all for liking the FF...hope it helps in passing away the weekend...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
wow nice update dear...
hope real track flows in this way

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