SS~The Twilight Saga~LSK-LUV,SMILE & KHANA Pg.24 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wat yaar after a long wait such a small update tis is not fair tiz was short but nice as well update soon the long part we all r waiting desperately
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Posted: 13 years ago
so awesome, updating soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ashiii...this is not fair yaar... we were desperately waiting... n such a small update.. plz yaar hv mercy on us😭😭
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Agree yaar its too good please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz post bigger update
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Posted: 13 years ago
really thanks for updating dear... i really was waiting for this part... i must accept... mai toh khud bahut dealy karti hu updates mai par yaar aashi u... pls have some mercy on us... atleast sab nahi toh ek FF/SS toh update per week okay... yeh todha kum
2 updates per week
pls
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and these was...
no words... dear... superb priya's state... awkwardness... u hav pendown really well...
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Posted: 13 years ago
NOTE : Sorry friends...in a hurry i just posted a small update .😳
Dont' worry...update is extended & posted .
Part 05 : Piyaa Baawari ...continued from ...last update...😳
Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Update : *PIYAA BAWRI*😳


Ram was completely stunned to see priya walk upto him like that! He just didnt know what to say! And seeing her reach him and stand just inches away..from where he was had left his heart skip a beat! Meanwhile..Priya was too shy to even look at ram! Silent..she kept on trembling in embarassment as ram spoke up-priya..yeh..kya hai? PRIYA DOESN'T LOOK UP AND fumbles as a confused ram just stared at her- woh..main..(ram could see priya was stammering and nervous..while priya doesnt't even realise..that she was crying and her tears falldown on ram's hand..balh tune plays in bg as ram stared at his wet hand and hears priya say)..aapke bauji ka sapna..jo wahan..aapne ship par..Uske liye..hummein.. HER VOICE TRAILS OFF as a completely shell shocked ram finds himself at a loss of words!

By then he could hear priya sob..and he realised how uneasy and awkward she was! Postponing the idea of saying anything to her..ram just walks past priya and picking up the robe he had seen her drop..ram hurries back to priya and from behind..wraps it around her..and as he does this..with tears in her eyes..priya looks up at ram and as he too looked down at her..their eyes meet..ram stopped..his hands still holding onto the gown around priya's shoulders and the lines play in bg *hum tum kitne paas hai..kitney durr hai chand sitarey..sach pucho toh mann ko jhootey..lagtey hain yeh saarey..magar sachche lagtey hain..yeh mausam..yeh baatein..yeh uljhan aur hummm..*😳

The song ends and realising how close to he was to priya..ram steps back instantly and just stares at priya..still not knowing how to put up things in front of her! Sighing and gathering some wit..ram says-tum..tum baitho priya..AND makes A CRYING priya sit down...giving her a glass of water..he begins..while priya takes a sip from the glass and looks up at ram..THEIR Eyes meet..yet again leaving ram thoughtful as to how to say..taking a deep breath he finally speaks- dekho..priya..i know..i mean..(breathing in he says matter of factly)..tumhe yeh sab karne ki zarurat nahin hai! Aur woh bauji wali baat..even i dont know that why i shared it with u?! Bas yun hii keh diya tha..(balh tune plays in bg as priya listened to ram as he went on..more comfortable now..) abb dekho na priya..pehle hum ek doosrey ko jaantey bhi nahin the..at least now we have started knowing each other! Aur..aur abb toh hum dono dost bhi bann chukey hain..(ram smiles and a relieved priya smiles back nodding her head in agreement..and he goes on a serious note)..main jaanta hoon priya..yeh pati patni ka rishta humarey liye thoda complicated hai...so i guess being friends is a good start for us..baaki Jo Jab Hona Hoga..ho jayega! RAM's VOICE TRAILS OFF..AND THE TWO GAZE AT EACH OTHER..the screen bla.cks out and u see ram and priya in the bed sitting in the same quilt..and watching a movie..having popcorn and soft drink the two were busy enjoying themselves..laughing..chatting and having a great time as the lines play in bg *dheerey dheerey..hauley hauley chupke se abb hoga..kehtey hain hum pyar jisey abb na janey kab hoga...badey achche lagtey hain..yeh dharti..yeh nadiyan..yeh raina..aur tummm*..PRIYA STOLE GLANCES AT ram while he enjoyed the movie and she couldnt help but smile to herself!


Later that night...priya was busy reading a book while ram sat on the couch..working on the lappy..MEANWHILE IN INDIAM U SEE A TENSED MAAMA ji says to niharika- arrey sweety..wahan..australia mein raat hogi na.. zara phone toh lagaa ram ko..pata nahin dono panchi kya chonch ladaa rahey hongey..AN IRRITATED NIHARIKA replies back-oh plz bhaiya..woh dono koi..CHONCH NAHIN LADAA rahey hongey! U bet..priya koi kitaab padh rahi hogi aur ram..woh apne laptop se chipka hoga! ON SHINEY'S INSISTENCE..niharika calls up ram frowning..not knowing that her call was going to change ram and priya's life forever!

Hope u enjoyed it...😳 ...Appology for inconvinience...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
haila another suspense... how does Nih's call change their lyf🤔 waiting Ashi... gr8 update👏
Edited by Anamika163 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update karo na yaar... its was killing to wait for another suspense... show mei kam torcher hai ke tum bhi 3rd degree de rahe ho...

Its lovely parts...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...awaiting the next part soonest...

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