OS ON RAYA...last part updated on 13th nov pg 5... - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys..
thanxx for commenting and liking once again..
so for u all...
i will continue it..
Thnax..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Thanx shubhi for deciding to continue it!!
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
she wore a green saree like u wrote! if only the episode was similar too :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
hi..guys..so on ur request here is the another part of this os..
hope u all will like it..
ram also hugs her and said i m sorry priya,main ullu ka patha hu jisne tum pe shak kia..i m really sorry...
priya after realising that she is hugging ram,she broke the hug,wipe out her tears and said,its okay mr kapoor...main samjh sakti hu,agar apki jagah koi aur bhi hota toh woh bhi shayad yhi karta...
ram so that priya can smile said:kash meri jagah koi aur hota,main toh bach jata tumse..
priya:by hitting him on his chest started laughing and said thank you...
ram:thanq u kis liye..
priya:mujhe hasane ke liye..
ram:iss smile ke liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hu...
priya just staring him as she does not understand the sudden change him,but it was a good change...
ram:chalo priya,so jao bhahut der ho gyi hai,mujhe bhi neend aa rhi hai..
priya nodded and move towards her couch..
ram to himself:priya,aj main samajh gya ki main itna jealous kyo tha..jab bhi tumhe us ashwin ke sath dekhta tha toh kyo mujhe itna gussa ata tha..aj main sab kuch samjh gya...main yeh sab isliye karta tha kyoki main tumse bhahut pyarr karta hu priya,bhahut pyarr...ab main tumhe kabhi dhuki nhi hone dunga,i promise...
aur uss ashwin ko toh main dekh lunga kal..tumhare ek ek dhuk aur asu ka badla lunga usse..usse main nhi chodunga..
Priya just smile in her sleep and ram saw her lovingly and said:tumhari yeh ek smile mere gusse ko pta nhi kaha guma deti hai,kuch bhi kar sakta hu main iss smile ke liye..i love you priya..
In the morning..
ram woke up first and saw priya sleeping on the couch peacefully..he goes near her ceases her cheeks and was just going to kiss her forehead,priya started to woke up..ram suddenly get behind and goes to the washroom...
and thinks:ram,tu yeh kya karne ja rha tha,priya ko sab pta chal jata,tujhe apne ap pe control karna padega ram..
and said:yr ye pta nhi mujhe apne ap se bat karne ki kaun si nayi bimari lagi hai..and hit his forehead...
They both get freshen up and ram was sitting on the sofa,reading newspaper according to priya but he was staring her behind his newspaper according to ram..
priya serves him the breakfast and all the time ram was seeing her..
priya:ram,yeh nashta kar lijiye,main niche ja rhi hu dadi ne bulaya hai..
ram was not in his senses,he was so much busy in staring her so he just nodds his head..
priya go out of the room and ram in his senses again says:kahn gyi,are priya kahan gyi abhi toh yhi thi..
ram:are yr main pagal ho jaunga aise toh,jab woh mere samne hoti hai,mujhe toh kuch hosh hi nhi rehta..
then suddenly ram's phone rings..
ram:hello..
his secretry:sir,woh apne kaha tha ashwin ko office se nikalne ke liye,the letter was ready sir..
ram in full anger as when he heard his name,he remembered all the things of last night and said:main abhi aa rha hu..
In the office..
ram was going in his cabbin when he saw ashwin doing his work..
ram enters his cabbin and said:tum itne batameez aur besharam ho mujhe nhi pta tha..and slaps him many times..
all the staff come to the cabbin..
ram was now in full anger and was hitting him vey hard and said:meri,meri priya ko kya kya kha tumne,tujhe toh main chodu ga nhi..
vikram know that ram will loose his control so he came in the office and he reached the ashwin cabin's and said:ram,chod de usse ram,and holding his hands:ram woh mar jaega chod de usse..
but ram was not ready to listen anything and keep on hiting him..
vikram said:ram tujhe priya ki kasam,chodd usse..
ram:who was going to punch him on his eye,stopped in between and went from their..and said to vikram:isse yaha se bhar fek ke andar ayio,vikram..
vikram:ha ram,tu ja,yaha se...
Ram in his cabbin...
now he was feeling relived as he punished the man who tried to hurt his priya..
ram saw the mug in front of him and smiles and remembers what vikram had told him..
ram remove the cup and saw that it was head's and smile..
and said:vikram sahi kehta tha,akhir mujhe ho hi gya priya se pyarr..
vikram see this and comes inside happily:toh yeh bat hai ram..yeh news toh sabko pta chalni chahiye ki "the ram kapoor"ko pyarr ho gya hai..
ram:ha vikram mujhe pyar ho gya hai,mujhe priya se pyarr ho gya hai..
vikram:toh ja na,bhabhi ko bta ab..
ram:abhi nhi vikram,jab sahi tym aega tab btaunga...
vikram:par ram..
ram:vikram samjh na yr...abhi nhi,par main btaunga usse zarur...
The end..
hope you all like it..
Thanxx...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
superb update subhi loved it thank u...
why end
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
super update.. I think similar will happen in show too..Ram will fall first for his lovely wifey... Bechara Bholu... Na kaha jayega na Raha jayega... Yeh Pyar nahi Aasan
Edited by haribol79 - 13 years ago
14shubhi thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
saisamanvi thanxx dear for liking it..
but i think,now you all want to end it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
haribol79 thanxx dear for liking..
and yes yeh pyarr nhi asan..
as everone said..
ik aag ka dariya hai aur dub ke jana hai...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
U CONTINUE SUBHI Y END U SHOULD WRITE MORE
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
great update👍🏼
continue soon

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