FF: Bandhan Pyar ka -pt 62 - 5.11.12_pg 85 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Siacutie

Wah wat a update dear u made my day just luved it to the core in IF thre r many gud writers u r one of them i think ekta shud read tis FF she get sum ideas too gud continue soon



hey siacutie.. thanks for the wonderful comments.. i am glad that you liked the update. check out the new post

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow yaar after mny dazs read ur story its awesome, frm mny daz didnt got time to read it caus of work load..it ws too awesome to read it...i read mny parts..all were taking me into a different world it was too too romantic thnks for it..!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You have written so beautifully, I fel I should keep on reading this forever, so please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 15:

Priya closes her diary … and rests on the chair at the beach…

Meanwhile… Ram wakes up and sees.. priya resting peacefully… and sees the diary in her hand.. and says… ye kya hai and slowly.. takes it from her hand…

Ram: opens the diary..

1st page… there is a note…

Welcome to Priya's dreamland… where you can read.. priya's heart…

And just below that.. there is a note.. in BOLD, underlined and in red… take permission.. before you read ... and enter Priya's dreamland…

Upon reading.. the note.. Ram starts laughing… loudly… and looks at priya.. sleeping peacefully… and moves close to her… and whispers in her ears.. may I.. madam…

Priya: smiles in her sleep… and move her head…

Ram: says thanks.. and kisses her forehead…

Ram: starts reading… and takes note of all small small happenings of priya's life…that she has noted down in her diary.. from first crush, favorite actor, actress, her adventures, her favorite color, the person she admires the most, her relationship, her ups and down in friendship, her concept of love, her sorrow moment, her happy moments.. and finally reads the last page…. Where she had written..

Thanks.. ram.. mujhe ye pyara ehsaas mehsoos karwane ke liye… I love you Ram…

… on seeing this his lips curl into a smile… he quickly…takes pen.. and looks at priya.. and writes in it…

Madam.. pyar ka usool hai.. no thanks/ no sorry… waise… I love you too… meri Jungli Billi… and draws a wink smilie…

And closes the diary… and before priya wakes up… he keeps it on her lap…

Its almost … 4pm.. ram is hungry… and sees priya..

Ram: arre.. ye toh sach me.. bahut gehri neend me hai… aur mujhe bhook lagi hai.. ab kya karu… and sees a food stall… and gets.. food to eat…

Ram finishes food.. and looks at waves.. and says… main kya karu yaar.. and thinks chalo.. kuch pics click karta hoon…and clicks some nice pics of priya… and moves his camera.. and also clicks the pics of some girl on beach… and says.. she is really.. hot yaar…

Priya wakes up.. and finds ram.. clicking pics.. and hears him saying.. beautiful… she looks what is he calling beautiful.. and shocked… says.. angrily..ye aap kya kar rahe hai?

Ram: oh uth gayi tum..

Priya: maine pucha aapse.. ki aap kya kar rahe the?

Ram: woh.. photos click kar raha tha yaar…

Priya: acha… zara mujeh bhi toh dikhayiye.. ke aap kya photos khich rahe the…

Ram: hesitant.. nahi.. nahi.. dikha sakta main.. tumhe ye..

Priya: zara mujhe bhi toh dikhayiye… and gets up to take it…

Ram: says.. nahi.. and moves his hand.. away from her…

In the verge of taking it from him.. priya falls.. on ram.. on the chair…

Priya's hair.. waving with the breeze…

Ram… moves her hair… and tucks it behind her ear… and brings her close to him… with their.. lips inches apart… when… priya takes the camera from his hand.. and gets up…and sits on her chair… and finds… girls pics.. clicked by Ram…

Ram: gets up and sits besides… priya.. and says.. woh.. I am sorry.. mujhe pata hai.. maine ye photos nahi click karna chahiye tha… I am really .. sorry…

Priya: looks at him and starts laughing… arre… mujhe koi…gussa vussa nahi aaya hai ram… ab mujhe pura yakeen ho gaya hai ke aap normal hai… agar aap… aisi harkate nahi karte.. toh.. tension waali baat hoti… sach kaha tha.. neha.. ne.. sabhi mardon ki niyat ek jaise hoti hai… ladki dekhi nahi.. ke latu…

Ram: sach me.. tumhe gussa nahi aaya priya?

Priya: nahi ram… and looks into his eyes.. and says.. gussa nahi .. aaya ram…

Ram: thank god.. and takes camera and deletes the photos…

Priya: stops him and says.. agar aapko.. aapko yakeen hai.. ke aap phir se.. aise photos nahi khichenge ram.. toh photo delete kijiye.. varna.. rehne dijiye…

Ram: jaanti ho priya.. jab tumne kaha.. ke.. tumhe gussa nahi aaya mujhe acha laga.. lekin.. jab tumne meri aankhon me dekha tab maine tumhare.. is hasi ke peeche ki woh.. dukh.. woh ghum samajh gaya.. priya…

Jaanti ho.. koi bhi aurat.. apne pati ko kisi aur ko dekhte hue.. nahi seh sakti… woh tadap.. woh… dukh.. maine tumhare aankhon me padh liya priya… main waada karta hoon.. aisa phir kabhi nahi hoga and deletes the photo…

Priya: hugs him.. and says… oh.. ram….

To be continued…

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Posted: 13 years ago
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am first to comment😊
so sweet of Ram
love this update
Edited by Anusha.V - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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written superbly yaar awesome again ...keep it up...great work 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it... thanks.. Trust is everything in any relationship..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@parulkhare / @vss08 / shubhi14/ @haribol: thanks for the comments.. glad you all liked the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@anusha/ neenavindh / @purviva: thanks for the comments and i am glad that you all liked the update

RaYa rock⭐️
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Edited by lgr1210 - 13 years ago

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