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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luvblah

it was an awesome up date plz publish the next sceen


hey thanks will update it
just checking the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi friends sorry for the late update
was feeling lazy to write

Scene 22:

RaYa's romantic moments-3

Recap:

Priya: abhi tho kiya tha

Ram: usse tum kiss kehti ho Priya nodded her head

Ram: main tum batata hoon ki kiss kise kehte hai and he kissed her deeply and passionately on her lips making her to hold him for support

Update:

Priya got up from bed: aap bhi na

Ram: main bhi kya

Priya: aap bahut besharam ho gaye hai

Ram: arreh aap ne hamari besharmi ab tak kaha dekhi hai

Priya: nahin dekhi... kal se aap jo kar rahe the woh sab kya tha

Ram: woh tho bas... moved forward to catch hold of Priya

Priya ran away: mujhe fresh hona hai

Ram: Priya... Priya suno tho...

Priya peeks out of washroom: kya hua...

Ram: agar tumhe kuch help chahiye tho main karne ke liye tayyar hoon

Priya: mujhe help ki zaroorat nahin hai

Ram: are you sure

Priya: aap kya kehna chahte hai

Ram: tumhe yaad hai humare reception ke din tum apni saree bahar hi chodd kar gayi thi

Priya: toh

Ram: agar aisi hi chodd na hai tho main tumhare saree ko pakad ne ke liye tayyar hoon

Priya throws flowers kept in the near by vase on Ram: aap na...

After getting freshed Priya sits on the bed reading she feels that Ram was watching her she puts the book aside and was shocked: aap ye kya kar rahe hai

Ram: maine kya kiya hai

Priya: aaj aap ko kya ho gaya hai... mere godh mein sarr rakh kar so rahe hai

Ram: so nahin raha hoon tumhara attention mujh par laane ki koshish kar raha hoon

Priya: woh kis liye

Ram: kya yaar tum bhi hum yahan ek dusre ke saath time spend karne aaye hai aur tum ho ki books pakdke baiti ho tum mujhe kehti thin a ki main hamesha apne laptop ke saath rehta hoon aur aaj dekho tum kya kar rahi ho main apna laptop bhul gaya lekin tum

Priya moves her fingers through his hairs: acha sorry baba maine socha ki jab tak aap fresh ho kar aa jayenge tab tak main kuch padlu jab aap aagaye hai tho aap bataiye ki ab hum kya karenge

Ram takes her hand and kisses it: jab time mila hai tho utilize karte hai

Priya: Ram aap bhi na

Ram: haiyee jab tum mera naam leti ho tho kitna acha lagta hai mujhe

Priya: main aap se kuch puchu

Ram: haan holds her hand in his

Priya: aap ko mujh mein kaun si ek baat achi lagti hai

Ram: tumhara caring nature aur tumhare selfless love apne parivaar ke liye aur ab main bhi tumhare iss parivaar mein shamil hoon aur tum mujse se bhi bahut pyar karti ho na

Priya: aap bhi na...

Rma: kya main bhi na tum karit ho na

Priya: haan... aur ab mere sawla ka jawab

Ram: k seriously yaar tumhara selfless love and caring nature

Priya: k aur mujh mein i mean mere nature ke baare mein nahin

Ram: mujhe soch ne do...

Priya hits him: aap ko ye batane ke liye soch na padh raha hai

Ram: sorry mazak kar raha tha

Priya: acha tho bataiye na

Ram: tumhari aankhe... bahut expressive hai jo kuch bhi tumhare dil mein woh tumhare aankhe bol dethi hai... kehte hai na eyes are windows to the soul(got this line for maris08) waise hi... haan tum koshish karti ho chupane ki lekin tumhari aankhe tumhe dokha de dethi hi sab kuch bata kar aur tumhari smile jabhi tum smile karti ho na... mann karta hai ki tumhe dekhta hi rahu palkh zapakne ka ki irada nahin hota hai

Priya: thanks

Ram: kis liye

Priya: mere baare mein itni achi baatein boli hai na

Ram: k ab tumhari baari

Priya: meri kya baari

Ram: arreh abhi tumhe batana hai

Priya: main kuch nahin batane wali

Ram: aisi kaise yaar tumhe bhi batana hoga ki tumhe mujh mein kya acha lagta hai

Priya: nahin

Ram: come on yaar maine kaha na ab tum bhi kaho

Priya: agar main kahungi tho aap gussa karenge

Ram: nahin... gussa nahin karunga

Priya: promise

Ram: haan promise ab kaho

Priya: ek minute

Ram: jaldi kaho na

Priya: same wahi jo aapne kaha ki mujh mein hai caring nature and selfless love aur ek baat jis tarah apne mere parivaar ko apna maan kar mere papa ki izzat ki hai woh bhi tab jab hamara rishta ek samjutha tha and tears roll down her cheeks

Ram: ye kya hai

Priya: kuch nahin

Ram: tum rothe hue na bilkul achi nahin lagti chalo ek achi si smile de do... agar tum nahin deni hai tho thik hai main hi tumhe hasa deta hoon and he starts tickling her

Priya: Ram please aap kya kar rahe hai and starts laughing

Ram cups her face in his hands and says: ek aur baat kahu

Priya: haan

Ram: main tumhare chehre par hamesha ye muskhan dekhna chahta hoon Priya smiles listening to it

Ram: tumne bataya hi nahin ki tumhe mujh mein kya acha lagta hai

Priya: bataya na abhi

Ram: arreh woh nahin mujh mein

Priya: mujhe na aap ke ye cheeks bahut ache lagte hai aap na bilkul ek teddy bear lagte hai and pulls his cheeks

Ram: tum... tum mujhe teddy bear keh rahi ho

Priya: aap ne promise kiya tha... ki aap gussa nahin karenge

Ram: haan maine promise kiya tha iska ye matlab nahin ki tum... ye kya hai kabhi polar bear... kabhi dinosaur... aur ab teddy bear and pouts

Priya: Ram ek aur cheez hai jo mujhe achi lagti hai he looks at her

Priya: aap ki smile bahut hi pyaari hai

Ram: acha

Priya: haan aap ko yaad hai jab hum hamare shaadi se pehle mile the tho hum yahi kehte the ki hum dono mein kuch bhi common nahin hai... par hum kitne galat the na hum dono mein kitna kuch common hai bus humara dekhne ka nazariya lag tha and looks at him

Ram keeps his hand on her cheek: ek aur baath kahu main tumhare aankhon mein aise zindagi bar dekh saktha hoon

Priya; aap bhi na... hamesha shrur ho jaate hai

Ram: haan woh tho hai par abhi bhi tumhari ek cheez mujhe achi nahin lagti

Priya: kya

Ram: tumhara mujhse yu durr rehna and pulls her close to him and hugs her Priya too hugs him back


Edited by M_n_h - 13 years ago
saisamanvi thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update mnh loved it
thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww... ye sab cheeze hamen bhi badi acchi lagti hai...
well done... 😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
teady bear😆 i too thought of that priya is lucky😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
so nice... update next fast... plz
serial se yeh padna mujhe bahut acha lagtha hai
😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
keep up the good work
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update. Waiting eagerly for more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update! 👏 👏 Thanks!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww... such a sweet convo yaar😍 kash show mein aisa hi kuch ho jaye😳

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