New one shot *ONE LAST TIME* An Apology..Pg 4!!!!!

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Ashima

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Posted: 14 years ago

Index..Part 1..ADVICE pg 1 😛

Part 2..IK MULAKAT.. Pg 3.. 😊

Part 3..An apology..😃

Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome prologue ashima. Waiting for the OS.

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Ashima

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi divya glad u lykd the prologue! Part 1 asap hopd u lyk it too

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Ashima

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey theshonaveer soo glad that u lykd the prologue part 1 asap hope u keep enjoying it dear

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avivakirk

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Posted: 14 years ago

Aashima,

Why the delay? Waiting for your one shot kahani!

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Anamika

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Posted: 14 years ago

omg Ashima... this is gonna b one hell of a shot... bring it on yaar... whts da delay about??

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Ashima

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: avivakirk
Aashima,
Why the delay? Waiting for your one shot kahani!

Sorry for wait wasn't well

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Ashima

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Anamika163
omg Ashima... this is gonna b one hell of a shot... bring it on yaar... whts da delay about??

So sorry for wait wasn't well

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Ashima

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Posted: 14 years ago

It begins from yesterdays episode's last part..requesting ram one last time..niharika walks away and ram is left thinking by himself in the room!..

there at vikram's place he had somehow managed to make thngs up with neha and as the kids are asleep the two sit in the hall as vikram tells her all about priya and when he is done neha says thoughtfully-hmm..ladki toh ram ke liye perfect sound karti hai inhein milaney ke liye kuch karna padega vikram..tum phone do main ram se baat karti hoon infact lets go meet him!😊

LEAVING THE kids with the servant the two go to ram's place and there they find him drinking in the bar..seeing the two ram smiles and hugging neha welcomes her back and she says-roka toh tootna hii tha ram! Mere bina tumhari shadi ki rasmein ho jayeingi aisa soch bhi kaise liya! RAM MANAGES a slight smile as neha sits facing him and says-she sounds a fine woman ram..then why not?😲

RAM REPLIES instantly-WHY NOT?!..vikram ne bataya nahin ki kya tamasha kiya usne aaj! Not just that..hum dono mein zameen aasman ka farak hai and well like she said (ram repeats priya's words with an irritated frown) hum dono nadi ke kinaro ki tarah hai jo halato ke chalte saath chalte toh hain par kabhi miltey nahin hai! NEHA COULDNT HELP but smile at how priya managed to get onto ram's nerves! 😆

After sometime neha says- ram kab tak yun hii tanha jeetey rahoge..aaj zindagi tumhe ek achcha jeevan sathi deney ki koshish kar rahi hai toh tum peechey hatt rahe ho (ram looks at neha intently he always heard and respected her opinion and tonight every word she spoke seemed to hit ram hardly)..ji liye jitna jeena tha parivar ke liye! They all are well settled thanks to u and old enough to live by themselves! Dheere dheere woh sab zindagi mein aage badh jayeinge aur phir tumhe ehsas hoga..ki yeh rishta thukrake tumne kitni badi galti ki thi! Aur tab when u wil look back toh pachtavey ke alawa aur kuch haath nahin lagega tumhare! Plz for once think about yourself ram aur shadi ke liye haan kar do! 😳

RAM LOOKS at neha and then vikram..heaving a heavy sigh he takes out his phone and glaring at the two he dials priya's number..there everyone was fast asleep at the sharmas house..priya was still awake and sitting by the window gazing at the moonlit night..she had heard shipra talk to priya's dad as the two shared there combined disappointment at priya's refusal! For the first time priya had seen her father too take shipra's side and not her! Priya hears her dad's voice-soyi nahin priya..TURNING AROUND SHE finds her eather walk upto her and she says smiling-neend nahin aaa rahi thi..aap nahin soye papa..

EMBRACING HIS daughter lovingly and says-mujhe bhi neend nahin aa rahi thi..aur jaanti hai kyun?..aaj pehli baar..pata nahin kyun par tere faisley se main sehmatt nahin hoon! SURPRISED PRIYA says-par kyun papa? Sabki tarah aapko bhi yahi lagney laga hai ki (tears well up in her eyes and her voice trails off as all of sudden she felt Alone)..WIPING AWAY her tears he says-nahin priya aisa nahin hai! Mainey aab tak har faisley mein tera saath diya par aaj..aaj aisa lagg raha hai jaise is rishtey ko todkar tu galti kar rahi hai..ram..maana woh thoda khadoos hai par achcha hai..mera matlab hai..itna bura bhi nahin hai..(priya stares at her father finding it hard to believe that he was saying all this!...)... 😲

Priya looks away from her father and gazing at the night and the darkness of loneliness that she often felt but refused to accept seemed darker than the sky outside..turning to the only man whom she looked upto for everything and says softly-papa..Mr. Kapoor aur main ek dum alag alag hain..this marriage wont work out..😛

LOOKING AT HIS DISTRESSED DAUGHTER HE SMILES ASSURINGLY😊AND says- priya..jahan tak main jaanta hoon literature and life dono mein ek rule common hai..and that is..Opposites attract..ab mujhe aur shipra ko hii dekh lo..kitna farak hai hum dono ki soch mein..duniya ko dekhney ke nazariye mein par phir bhi..our marriage is working quite fine! (priya smiles..eager to listen to her dad's wise words)..aur do logon ki soch aur nazariye mein jitna fark ho rishtey ki khoobsurti utni hii nikharti hai..zindagi ko jeeney mein utna hii maza aata hai..PRIYA FALLS silent and before she can say anything else her phone rings and seeing who it was startled she looks up at her father and says-Mr. Kapoor ka phone hai..😍

Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 14 years ago