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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for liking the ff guyzz!! Please continue reading it and I welcome your comments. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ananya fantastic update this one 👏

Meera introduced as Agasthya's friend by Balraj. Exciting chapter with the party setup.

Waiting to know how their Meera and Agasthya feel after this.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it update soon pm me plz
Edited by jojo1986 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice ff dear... Keep it up!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 7
Agastya's POV
What is happening to me? This woman is making me weak. How can she do that? She makes me forget my plan.
"Agastya, how did you and meera meet? I want to know the whole story." Mr. Malhotra said
Agastya was interrupted from his thoughts. Mr. and Mrs. Malhotra thought meera and I were a couple.
"We met at a night near the India gate. Meera was wearing a pink tshirt and a green jacket with a pink cap and jeans. She... Was umm.. with some people who were teasing her and she stood for herself. That was the moment I saw her first. She was looking beautiful and... now also she is looking beautiful in this saree."
Everyone was stunned at his speech. Meera was amazed, he remembered everything about that night.
"Then destiny made us meet again and again." Agastya finished.
"Agastya is the most eligible bachelor in this city. Many girls are after him. But he gave them no attention. You are very lucky Meera." said Mrs. Malhotra.
Meera simply smiled, she did not know what to do. She excused herself and went upstairs.
Here, Shyama was caught by someone who used to come to her bar. He recognised her as Bijli. She was scared and did not know what to do. Just then the man caught her again and pushed her to the wall so that she could not move. Everyone on that side was enjoying ragini khanna's performance.
"Bijli, stop struggling, it won't do you any good. Come with me bijli, I will give you whatever you want. There is no enjoyment in the bar without you. Bijli, I will give you any amount of money you want."
"Leave me. I don't want anything. I am married and I love my husband" she said still struggling.
"Come on bijli, I will love you more than your husband."
"Leave Shyama bhabi." said Agastya.
"Who the hell is shyama? She is my bijli." said the man, leaving shyama.
She was shocked. Now Agastya will know her secret and everyone else will know too.
"Bijli, she is no more. She died the night she met Akhil and this woman is our Shyama bhabhi. She has no past but a present with a beautiful future" Agastya replied.
Does Agastya know her secret? He never showed so. She looked up at Agastya who looked at her back. The man was very drunk, he quickly gave a punch to Agastya and said "She is a bloody bar dancer and she can never be someone's wife and someone's bhabhi.
Agastya got angry and a fight started. Both of them were profusely bleeding. Shyama tried to stop them but in vain. Suddenly, the man took out a gun and shot shyama but Agastya came in between and he was shot.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 8
"Agastya" shyama cried out.
Everyone in the party had heard the gunshot and akhil was the first to reach the spot. Everyone followed. Akhil wasted no time in calling the ambulance. The man who shot Agastya fled the scene before anyone came. Agastya was taken to the hospital. Shyama was too petrified to answer questions. The surgery started. Beeji, Nandini, Akhil, Balraj and Meera was there in the hospital. Shyama was in the house, taking rest. Everyone was shocked. Beeji had tears in her eyes. Balraj and Akhil were swearing to send the person to jail. Nandini was calming Beeji while Meera was sitting in a state of shock. After sometime, the doctor came out of the OT.
"Nothing to worry Mr. Asthana, Agastya is out of danger." the doctor announced.
A smile appeared in their faces. The doctor told them to go and meet him one by one. First Balraj went, he didn't take more then five minutes . Akhil, Beeji followed. Akhil then went to buy his medicines.
Slowly Meera made her way toward Agastya's room. She saw him lying in the bed with his eyes closed. She went and sat down beside him. She kept her hand on his. After a few seconds, Agastya opened his eyes.
"Sitting beside the person you hate?" taunted Agastya.
"You just had a major operation, still in mood for jokes? You are insane. If something would have happened to you then?
"Who said one can't joke after an operation? What can happen to me? I could have died. Nobody would have cared."
Agastya saw tears streaming out of her eyes.
"Agastya you are the most selfish person I have ever known. What do you know about others? Do you know how many people care about you" saying this meera stood up to leave when Agastya caught her hand.
"Would you have cared?" he asked.
"..." meera gave no answer but managed to free her hand and leave.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it update soon👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Going interesting ananya continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 9
Agastya smiled. He had never felt so good in his life. He remembered the first time he saw her, she was being eve teased but he saw no fear in her eyes. She protested and that was the quality that attracted him. Or else he would have never gone behind her to say sorry. Once he reached there he saw her crying but he knew it was not for the teasing. He sat beside her and wanted to help her but couldn't. It was good that he didn't see the address or else he would have never allowed her to come home. He again saw her at the puja and tried to figure out why she was there. She started living in his house that's when he had realized she was the other woman in ani's life. He told her to go away and thought she had only come for money but he was wrong. She really loved ani. He told her to go away as she would have tore his family apart. He saw her in the park where she was crying. He felt that he should go and comfort her so he said that he believed her. He took her address so that he could stay in touch. Then everyone came to know Meera's truth. I reached there late. She seeked help from him but he couldn't help her. She fainted. He called the doctor and sat beside her after she left. He was looking at the sleeping beauty. She became conscious and held her hand. Asked him if he believed her. No one had ever asked any opinion from him, she was the first one. He believed her. But he didn't say it. Then he got the news of her pregnancy. He got disturbed and told her to leave. But the rest came to know. Ammaji was telling her all sorts of bad things. She was broken and going to leave when balraj stopped her. Balraj accused him of sending her away due to the property problem. But he genuinely cared for her. Agastya slowly fell into sleep with a smile on his face.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww agasthya feels somethin for meera love it
update soon

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