OS || The End (Nandini & Aniruddh)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello! 🤗

This is an OS on Aniruddh and Nandini.

Note 🤓 :

1. This is a sad OS so read it at your own risk.

2. The Kis Desh fans, you might have read the first part or something similar before, although the second part is completely new.

3. I'm so happy that AG is finally back!!!!! 😃

Okay, so here is the OS.

OS || The End

Someone was fighting hard. Fighting hard for his life, for the future he had thought of, the future with the love of his life. He was'..fighting against death.

One has to die one day or the other but he didn't want to die, not so soon at least. God can't be so cruel . . . . . can he?!! God d*mn it'. . . . . he wanted to live, live for his love.*sigh*

Why? . . . . . This three letter word is the most asked and yet the least answered.

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His body was beyond repair. Doctors told him that the accident has almost crushed all his body parts, most of his organs are damaged and off-course the scope of his recovery is nil.

It was just his heart that was still beating, making him feel the presence of someone so far but yet so close. And for that someone he was hoping that he would somehow win the battle from death.

Now it seems as if he has just a few days or maybe just a few hours left before silence would fill his room, his body, his heart, his soul and her.

He closed his eyes and immediately knew what he wanted. He wanted her and that was one dream that he could never be able to live...

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Beep beep beep beep bip bip bip bip. . . . . . . . .beee eee eee eee eee

Doctors were trying their best to save the life of Aniruddh. Shocks were being given to revive the heart but the response that they got was silence. Just silence.

The doctor came out of the ICU and without any hesitation and with utmost ease said - "He is no more". Well, I don't blame him. He, in his career has seen thousands of case where the end is this painful and heart-wrenching; he has become quite immune over the years.

This is no fairy tale, life is not fair'..well, most of the time. He was gone and he was not going to return ever'..not at least in this lifetime.

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Nandini closed her eyes, a silent tear rushed down the cheeks and then again silence followed

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Just silence.

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1 Year Later

(Nandini's Point of View)

"Aanken hamari rah nihare, Hum hain akele dard k mare.

Kab aayega woh pardesi, Ab nahi laage kahin apna ji.

Jag se gaya woh pardesi, sehmi si hai ab khamoshi."

(These lines are form the serial Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil)


It is implausible as how the significance of autumn has changed since childhood. I used to be so happy on its arrival; I loved the falling leaves, the crackling sounds. Autumn had meant a season when the angels would drop leaves as their blessings on me. I used to feel so special.

Now, these dried leave hold an entirely different meaning. Each falling leaf signifies an unfulfilled wish, a heartrending moment, and a dying soul. Autumn, with its arrival, revives all those memories I had spent with him. It is painful . . . . . and I still love him.


A small baby boy started crying. She rushed to him. Hugged him and looked into his beautiful chocolate brown eyes and gently stroked him messy silky hair. "You are just like your father."

And with this the last Maple leaf fell down and got carried away by the wind to'..well, to the heaven with her message.

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P.S - I hope you all liked it. Constructive criticism is welcome. 😊

Edited by -Shwetasri- - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sad but Nice OS. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Alina.


Sad but Nice OS. 😊


Wow! I had never got a response this fast. 😲
Anyway, thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Shwetasri-


Wow! I had never got a response this fast. 😲
Anyway, thank you so much 😃


hahha.. mention not! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shweta abhi seria shuru hua nhi or os start 😆
Nywz its nice as i'd already read this os in kis desh
fabulous...keep writing
god bless you :-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_28

Shweta abhi seria shuru hua nhi or os start 😆
Nywz its nice as i'd already read this os in kis desh
fabulous...keep writing
god bless you :-D


Arre aaj hi toh mere board ke exams khatam huye hai, toh I was just going through some of my old stuff and I saw this OS. I thought Aniruddh toh abhi marne wala hai and Nandini is pregnant, so why don't I twist this story to fit their storyline and added a bit about the autumn season. And lo OS ready. 😆 😉 😳

Thank you so much for commenting. Means a lot. You have always been one of those who would always comment on my stuff and it makes my day. Its really very sweet of you. Thank you. 😃 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg! By the way, I never watched Kish Desh but I absolutely love this OS! It's so sweet yet sad at the same time! Beautiful work!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*dammit* this was so sad yaar 😭 but i totally loved it 😳 and awww kis desh lines 😳
this is so beautifully written 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shweta baccha wow i was shocked to see an OS already here :)
really very amazing hoping to see more in the future.
luv
Fatima

P.S:hwz ya girl?its been ages i talked with anyone on IF.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow an OS already
it was awsome 👍🏼
Edited by .FALTU. - 12 years ago

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