FF:Dil ne tumko chun liya hai prt 5 pg 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesoeme daviii kwel work bas studies going welll do continue sun
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: animateash

awesoeme daviii kwel work bas studies going welll do continue sun

thanx ash...u didnt answer one question at the end off part 1😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dear agin fab job keep it up do continue!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey davi ! brilliant ff 👏
please do continue .
u asked 2 answer some questions ,so here goes.
Who could the person be?
A friend of shubhs.
Who do you think will defend Aastha?
Deepa!
How will this change Aastha's life?
deepa and aastha become very close as sisters but deepa sister inlaw anushka doesn't like aastha so she does everything 2 split their friendship up.
What role will they play in Aastha's life?
A true friend.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanober88

hey dear agin fab job keep it up do continue!! 😃

thanx sano...will cont today if i finish write the next part...otherwise tomorrow

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: x-Prii-x

wow excellent FF!!
continue soon!

thanx...will cont soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: flowertot

hey davi ! brilliant ff 👏
please do continue .
u asked 2 answer some questions ,so here goes.
Who could the person be?
A friend of shubhs.
Who do you think will defend Aastha?
Deepa!
How will this change Aastha's life?
deepa and aastha become very close as sisters but deepa sister inlaw anushka doesn't like aastha so she does everything 2 split their friendship up.
What role will they play in Aastha's life?
A true friend.

thanx & great answers...some of them were very close to what i had planned.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks to everybody for the comments…its an inspiration for me to continue
Here's the next part…hope u enjoy reading

Part 2

Suddenly, somebody makes rude comments about Aastha's salwar & how middle class she looks & that they are eating from a tiffin.

Look guys, what type of clothes she wears, she eats from a tiffin. Looks to me like she is middle class like behenji type u know. How did they allow these people into our college? Excuse me; you cannot sit here because this is our table! Said the guy in a very arrogant manner. He comes up to Aastha and starts to pull her arm.

Dhruv get very angry.
Dhruv (shouts): who are u and what the hell do u think u are doing?

Guy: I am Shubh Ranawat & my dad owns this college also the biggest hotel business in the country. Deepa, I can't believe you hand around with these people.

Dhruv: Deepa, you know these people. (to Shubh) just because your dad owns this college doesn't mean you can do what you feel like. Especially you cannot behave with a girl like that.

Deepa: yeah, but I wish I didn't know someone who acts like that (to Shubh) why are you behaving like you are the only person in the world. Be considerate to other people. Just because of their class does not give you any reason to bad mouth Aastha. Stop it right now.

Shubh rolls his eyes while listening to Deepa: I should have known that you react this way. Anyway mere paas waqt nahi hai yeh sab bakwas sunne ke liye. Lets leave guys!!!!

Aastha: Wait!!!! You all said what you wanted too, now its my turn. So Mr. Shubh Ranawat, you think you are all high & mighty, but let me tell you something. You are nothing without your dad. If you weren't from a rich family, you probably couldn't even take care of yourself. Don't you think just because we are middle class that I will not defend myself. I will not tolerate your behavior & don't ever dare touch me again. (to Deepa & Dhruv) Let's leave this place; I won't stay here any longer.

Shubh just stood there dumbfounded.

Shubh: How dare she talk to me like that in front of everyone? I am Shubh Ranawat. I will definitely get back at her for that.

I will end it here…here are more questions for you to think about;

What will Shubh do?

Do you think Aastha was right to talk to Shubh like that?
Edited by Davi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow awesome part!!
lovely writtened!!
keep it up jaan!!
mwahz twinnii!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi all...
to every1 that wanted me to update...i will do so tomorrow...
plzzz tell me if it is boring, then i will stop.

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