Fanfic My Dil goes Hmmm SA UPDT Chap 3A on pg 10!

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Alicia

@desi344

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Posted: 17 years ago

#81

Hey Guys I m back and ready to continue thanks for all your support and patience!

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Davi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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yay u're back, cant wait 4 u to continue

btw, its a gr8 ff.

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Alicia

@desi344

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Chapter 3A

Hey Guys sorry for taking sooo much time in updating the fanfic! But now I m here to continue the FF 4 u! Here it is:

Aastha was shocked at the rudeness of the guy in front of her.He didn't even say sorry and he was only concerned about the ball. She decided to teach the guy a lesson. She got up and started dribbling the ball towards Shubh. Aastha went up to the court and Shubh asked again " Ball Please!" Aastha said " you are so rude, you are concerned about the ball and not me! You should atleast say sorry for what you did!" Shubh was confused because he was not the one who threw the ball, it was another person. Shubh replied with a confused expression "Sorry for what? I didn't do anything!" Aastha had it enough she was really angry! Aastha challenged him saying "Okay, I will forgive you only on 1 condition. Lets have a game of basketball against each other
1 on 1. If you loose you say sorry to me and if I loose you say sorry to me. Deal?" asked Aastha. Shubh replied "Okay!" They started playing the game and throwed the ball up and Aastha got the ball and started dribbling while 3 guys who were playing with Shubh started cheering for him. Shubh was taking Aastha very lightly as he thought girls were not good at Basketball but he was shocked as Aastha goaled the 1st basket. He then started to play the game seriously as he thought he was not going to loose to a girl. Shubh took the ball and started dribbling the ball while blocking Aastha and scored the basket. Now the ball was in Aastha hand and she was blocking it from Shubh and she suddenly tripped over Shubh's leg and Shubh saved her. The looked into each other's eyer. Shubh stared into Chocolate eyes and was lost in them while Aastha was looking into Black expressive eyes. There eye contact was broken as both of there cellphones begin to ring. Both cellphones were for schedule reminders as they would get late for college. Aastha and Shubh both were disappointed and said it as a tie. Shubh asked Aastha
" Whats your name?" and Aastha replied " I don't give my name to strangers." Shubh didn't argue because he was getting late. They both left the court running.

Sorry guys if the part is not proper. I am updating this fanfic after long time so it might not be proper. Please Reply and say if you liked my fanfic and you could give suggestions and remarks!😛

Edited by desi344 - 17 years ago

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alicia

@Swaggerr

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Posted: 17 years ago

#84

Thanx Dii you updated it! And its a nice updt!

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Sej

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Posted: 17 years ago

#85

nice update n im so happy u remembered to update this ff =)

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Aisha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#86

thanx ! nice update ,please do continue .

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Alicia

@desi344

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Posted: 17 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: neh91
awww...im sorry...i will pray 4 him...hope he gets well soon 😊

Thanks for waiting so patiently and being so supportive!😊

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Alicia

@desi344

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Posted: 17 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: kvn1983
so soory how is he now.
i wish he will be get soon

I MADE A LIST OF SPECIAL PEOPLE IN MY LIFE. I WROTE THEM IN PENCIL & I INCLUDED YOUR NAME, BUT I USED PERMANENT INK COZ I DECIDED TO KEEP YOU ON THAT / MY LIST 4 EVER.

Thanks for being so caring and he is good now!😊