ff no name, new update 12/21/08

Hey guys in writing a new ff on shubh and aastha (of course)

Just a little note aka disclaimer: im not a writer so I don't know how good this will be, but I will try my best and my updates will come according to how much hw I have that day.

Starts off with preparations going on for a wedding.

Lady: kakka yeh waha pe rako, aur in phoolo ko har jaga saja dena, aur ha waha pe mandap lage ga to safaye kar dho

Guy: dheere se soluchna itna kam karogi to kaise chalega, tum araam kar

S:aap tho baitye rehte hain tho kaam tho mujhe hi karna parega na, akhir mere beta ki shadi hai.

V: vaise aap ka chotta ladla kaha hain, usne to kaha ki vho aaj aa jaye ga

S: mera shubh aata hi hoga, akhir uske bhai ki shaadi hai

----------At the Airport-------

A tall, dashing man comes out of the air port and walks to his driver

D: saab chale?

G: ji

---------Back at home--------

Saksham: dekhiye mom aapka ladla beta abhi tak nehi aaya, agar woh meri shaadi mein late hoga tho main use maaf neahi karonga.

Sol: beta woh aa jeyega

Shubh: woh aa gaye hai

Sak: SHUBH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sh: BHAYIYA!!!!!!!

that's all for now i know its short, but i think ill have time over the weeked to update

its started off well

Shubh and Saksham hug

Sh: mom!!!!

Shubh goes to his mom and hugs her

Slo: mera beta aa gaye, kaise raha tumhara safar

Sh: bohut acha mom, ghar akar bohut khushi ho rahi hai, vaise meri honevali bhabhi dikthi kaise hai bhayiya

Saksham blushes

Sh: ooh hoo, bari sharam aa rahi hai, jab suhaag raat ayegi tao kya hoga bhai.

Saksham: Shubh tujhe to main nehi chordunga

Saksham starts running after Shubh, while soluchna laughs

Sh out of breath: ok bhayiya sorry, vaise papa, deepa, swayam bhaiya, aur payal bhabhi kaha hai?

Sol: deepa aur payal shopping ke liya gayi hai aur swayam aur tumhare papa office mein hai.

----------------at anushaka's house---------------------

A girl enters a house with her luggage, it seems that the whole house is empty

G: that's weird kaal anu di ki shaadhi hai aur yaha koi nahi dikh raha hai

Girl: hello anu di, aap kaha hai, mummy, papa, anyone? Hello

A: BOO!!!!!

G (scared, then mad): ANU DII!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aap bhi na, mujhe dara diya

Anu laughing: sorry Aastha mujhse raha nehi gaya

Aastha: thik hai kaal aapki shaddi hai isliye aap ko maaf kiya

Anu: mein bohut kush hu kit um meri shaddi mein aayi.

Aastha: of course mujhe to aana nit ha, aakhir aap ki choti behen hu, vaise saab log kaha hai

Anu: voh mummy aur papa shaadi ki liye kuch last minute tayariya kar rehe hai.

Aastha: kal sangeet hain nay aha?

Anu: nahi voh hum ne decide kiya tha ki dono sangeet saath kare, tho kal hum saab saksham ke ghar jaa rahe hain.

Aastha: oh, tho matlab kaal mein apne hone vale jiju se miluge, can't wait (winks)

Anu blushes.

Aastha: vaise di aap kya pehan rahi hai kal

Anu: sari aur kya, kyun?

Aastha: main aap ke liye ek bahut aacha lenga lekar aayi hu, aap woh pehen na k?

Anu: thik hai, chal let's go to sleep, kal subah jaldi utna hai.

Aastha: thik hai di, mein aapke saath sooja hu?

Anu: as you wish

What will happen when aastha and shubh meet?

i luv it!!!

hmm.. aastha's anu's sister. thats different(in a gud way)

one suggestion. can u change the font, its a bit hard to read, and if u can can u rite some 'dialogues' in english, not that i hvae a problem w/ hindi, but its a bit slow to read(takes time to figure it out)

but its wonderful!

Originally posted by: shubh_astha4eva

i luv it!!!

hmm.. aastha's anu's sister. thats different(in a gud way)

one suggestion. can u change the font, its a bit hard to read, and if u can can u rite some 'dialogues' in english, not that i hvae a problem w/ hindi, but its a bit slow to read(takes time to figure it out)

but its wonderful!

Originally posted by: sumeya

its started off well

waiting to see wat happens next

------------------------------at ranawat house---------------------------

(everyone is there but anu and aastha)

Poor Saksham is restless

Sh: kya hua bhai, who are you looking for?

Sa: main, umm woh oh yeah I was looking for mom.

Sh: oh ok (he smiles because he knows that saksham is lying), don't worry bhai she will be here soon.

Sa: what are u talking about, mom to yahan par hai.

(shubh just laughs and walks away)

-------------------Next day------------------------

Rukmini: Aastha beti kahan ho?

Aastha comes running down the stairs: MOM!!!!!!!!!

(BTW: they aren't poor like in the show)

A comes and hugs her mom: I missed you mom!

R: missed you to sweetie.

P: aur mujhe?

Aastha: dad! (hugs him) Missed you too!

Anu: okay if everyone's met with each other should we go and get ready for the sangeet.

Aastha: arre wah. Di don't you think you're a little over excitied. (winks)

Anu: AASTHA!

Aastha: okay baba sorry.

R: you girls go get ready, we're going to head over to there right now to see if soluchna behenji needs any help.

Aastha: thik hai mom, we'll meet you over there. Chal di let's go get ready.

Anu: k, bye mom.

---------------------------------a couple of hours later-----------------------------

Aastha: are u ready di?

Anu: haan, abhi aayi!

(sorry guys I don't know the dresses they will be wearing, so I'll post that later)

(anu and aastha enter the ranawat house and unknowingly both put their right foot in first)

Saksham sees them and he smiles.

Shubh comes over to him: looks like bhabhi is here that's why you're smiling, where is she?

Sorry I know it's sucks and it's short, but I promise tmrw's will be extra long!

Anu's Dress:

hey guys i know i said i'd update today, but i have lots of hw, maybe after im done with it but im really sorry if i cant update today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its okay, i understnad.. school is so much...plus we get homewrok..its like school all over agian , but at home....
take ur time.............