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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

loved it cant wait for the next one 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update! cant wwait to noe wt happens nextt..update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part plz write more soon :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
well i can't post the part on weekdays because i write the next part on friday nights or saturday mornings
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Posted: 14 years ago

DEAR ANKI

in one go i read ur full ff. thum great ho yaar. ithna creavtivity!! shaayad thum is ff update ko direct sony's BHPH contacts to mail karna chahiye. kya patha thumara storyboard unlogon ko pasand aayega or BHPH team will refresh their approach.
i think all our BHPH forum members will agree this story is much interesting than the original one, keeping us wanting for more.
hats offto you.👏👏
by the my family liked ur story better than the show!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maris08

DEAR ANKI

in one go i read ur full ff. thum great ho yaar. ithna creavtivity!! shaayad thum is ff update ko direct sony's BHPH contacts to mail karna chahiye. kya patha thumara storyboard unlogon ko pasand aayega or BHPH team will refresh their approach.
i think all our BHPH forum members will agree this story is much interesting than the original one, keeping us wanting for more.
hats offto you.👏👏
by the my family liked ur story better than the show!!!



thank you so much !!!!!!!

its indeed an honour that your family liked my ff too
thanks a lot

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey anku dear...How r u?

Its very Nice update...I read 2 updates now ...Really Wonderful Dear...Keep it up..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 14th


Sanchi continued to walk in the rain without paying heed to the car coming from behind

Shravan ran with his heart in his mouth trying to shout at the same time

Sanchi unaware of anything went on in her own world

Shravan thinking:if she doesn't stop now I am going to loose her, there no way I can reach her before that car , plz Sanchi turn , stop plz Sanchi

And just when the car was few seconds away he shouted

SANCHIIIIIIIIIIII

Sanchi who had been walking running on a slippery road in her own world stopped because her heart felt someone was calling her …..

Sanchi turned and saw the out of control car bearing on her and she nearly screamed

Shravan ran fast and just before the car could reach Sanchi he pushed her and himself away from the collision path

They both fell down and rolled over

Sanchi twisted her leg in the process

Shravan and Sanchi rolled to the side of the road, Shravan jumped up and very angry yanked Sanchi also up

Shravan: YEH KYA HARKAT THI MANA KIYA THA NA MAT BHAGO ROAD PE, GAADI KE NICHE AA JATI TOH😡😡😡😡

ITNI BADI GAADI KA HORN NAHI SUNAI DIYA TUMHE, TUMHE KUCH HO JATA TOH ?😡😡😡😡

Uptill this point of time Shravan had been holding Sanchi by her arms and she was crying,but couldn't see her tears (because of the rains)🤢🤢🤢

He suddenly left her arms , Sanchi disbalanced and fell

Shravan angry looked at her and then saw that her leg was bleeding and then noticed that she was crying

He sat down, Sanchi now scared of Shravan after the outburst shrank back

Shravan caught hold of her brought her near❤️❤️

Shravan: jyada lag gayi kya, bataya kyun nahi, main tum pe chilata rehta(hug)

Sanchi: sob sob(crying on Shravan's shoulder)🤗🤗Shravan patting her hair, head

Shravan: chalo Sanchi bahut barish ho rahi hai aur bahut khoon beh raha hai , ghar dur nahi hai tumhara😆😆

He helped her up but she couldn't keep her feet down at all

Shravan glanced at her feeling sorry that he had shouted so badly when she was already in pain😕

Shravan: Sanchi, tum bura mat manna lekin mujhe yeh karna padhega👏👏👏

Saying this and without waiting for her reply he picked her up and started walking😳👍🏼

Sanchi kept looking at him👍🏼

They both reached Sanchi's home

Kaka opened the door , he saw Sanchi in Shravan's hands

Kaka: kya hoga beti….andar aao

Shravan brough Sanchi and laid her down on the diwaan

Shravan to kaka: jaldi se garam pani le aayiye .

Kaka brought the water and a clean bandage

Sanchi was too shocked and surprised to speak

Shravan cleaned and bandaged the wound

By that time Sanchi had started shivering..

Shravan: maza aaya barish mein? Jao jake change karlo nahi toh pair toh zakhmi hua hi hai dimag pehle se zakhmi tha ab fever bhi ho jayegha😕😕😕

Sanchi somehow changed and came after some time😊

Shravan had been given a towel and a cup of tea by kaka and was telling kaka how the accident happened

Sanchi: thankyou shravan , aap nahi hote to shayad… AND i am sorry too

Shravan : shayad nahi pakka bhagwan ke paas pahunch jati….jab bhagwan akal baanth rahe the toh kahan thi

God: she was standing beside you🤣🤣

Sanchi: very humbly, I am sorry Shravan, mere karan aapko bahut pareshani uthani padhi

Shravan: pareshani ab aapko uthani padhegi , abhi hi aapka pair thik hua tha phir chot laga li….

Ab school kaise jaoghi

Kaka: beta bukhar bhi hai use , school toh main jaane nahi dunga

Shravan: fever ho gyaa…he touched her hand it was hot

Sanchi: kuch nahi kal tak thik ho jayegha, main chutti nahi le sakti

Shravan: aise kaise thik ho jayegha ,tumko aaram karna chaiye

Sanchi: aaj raat kar lunghi na aaraam

Shravan: school chod nahi sakti kya

Sanchi: nahi

Shravan: thik hai main tumko chodne aur lene aaunga

Sanchi: nahi …aap mere karan bahut pareshani hui , main kuch na kuch manage kar lunghi

Shravan: dekhte hain, main chalta hun, ghar wale intezaar kar rahe honghe

Sanchi: I am very sorry

Shravan grinning cheekly, I am too, bahut baari ho aap, mere back mein aaj raat bhar dard rahega and saying this ran out of the door🤣😆🤣😆

Sanchi: main moti nahi hun, kitna batameej ladka hai!!!!!!!😉😉😉😉😉

Kaka: aise nahi kehte beta kitni madad ki usne

Sanchi: hmmmmmmmm (Mujhe moti kehta , maine thode hi kaha tha ki mujhe utha ke le chalo)

lekin main agar turn nahi hoti toh ......mujhe laga tha kisi ne mujhe bulaya hai piche se , lekin kuch sunai nahi diya horn nahi sunai diya itni barish mein lekin Shraan ki awaaz mere dil tak pahunch gayi....

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Posted: 14 years ago
how touching! shravan is amazing in this story.. i love his character more than anything...👏👏

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