WAITING FOR D RESULT...A story of two family but related to every1...

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BEFORE WRITING ANYTHING JUST WANT TO SAY SORRY IN ADVANCE ...


I DONT KNOW WHAT GOING TO B HAPPENED OR HOW WOULD B THE RESULT ...


AND I DONT KNOW HOW U ALL WILL REACT SO ADVANCE SORRY FOR ALL THE MISTAKES ...


AND JUST WANT TO WRITE SOMETHING NOT TO DISRESPECT ANY WRITER NOR ANY PROFESSION...


BUT STILL IF IT HURT U IN ANY WAY THEN PLZ FORGIVE ME...





ACTUALLY U CAN BLAME @TINA 😛 😉 😃 as much u want bcoz its tina's Idea and
yes u can blame @SPUNK for selecting my name AS POTW 🤣 🤣 🤣 ...




... ... ... ... ...


Finally that day is came ...😭
I dont know end of the day what will b result !!!! ...😕
really scared to think to lost my happiness again ,my new identity...😭
Cant stand in same position again...
BUT im eagarly waiting for its RESULT...
BCOZ it spoiled lots of relation B2N Khandelwals & PUROHITS, AKSHAT-ARPITA, AVNI-RAJ &AVNI'S FAMILY...
Khandelwals r not aware of Savri's intention Except Avni,Arpita and Pratap BUT the main fact is THAT Khandelwal's runs THAT ORPHANAGE AND WE ADOPT PUJA FROM THERE.. .. AND SAVRI &ARPITA IS A TRUSTEE AND AKSHAT GAVE TESTIFY AGAINST PUROHIT'S though he was not aware of that but damage already done by Savri ...


There is a rift B2N Akshat -ARPITA now its BCOM HUGE but still arpita is in our side ... Actually this girl again proved that IF U ACCEPT SOME1 FROM HEART THEN NO NEED TO HAVE BLOOD CONNECTION...
Raj is always like this when he accept some1 then ready to do anything for that person ...
actually we too dont feel any difference B2N RAJ AND ARPITA AND SO ON ARPITA ...
May b its makes OUR RELATION MORE STRONG THATS Y ARPITA GOT THAT STRENGHT TO STOOD FOR US...
MOST IMPORTANTLY WAS WORRIED ABOUT AVNI-RAJ & their REACTION after Knowing THE WHOLE TRUTH that IT WAS SAVRI WHO BRIBED PUJA'S REAL/BIOLOGICAL MOM ...
As usual RAJ BCOM ANGRY but THANK GOD avni handle the situation carefully...


THANK GOD IT DID NOT AFFECT AVNI-RAJ RELATION AS THEY R NEWLY MARRIED COUPLE AND THEIR MARRIEGE WAS ANOTHER TENSION BCOZ EVERY RITUAL WE'V TO C MOM AND MR. SUKET'S DEBATE PROGRAM
BUT THANKFULLY AVNI-RAJ CAREFULLY HANDLE THE SITUATION ALONG WITH ARPITA,ABHAAS,BHAVNA AUNTY ,MR. PRATAP ,BAUJI AND JASAN ...


BUT DONT KNOW Y GOD ALWAYS WANT TO TEST US AFTER LITTLE HAPPINESS HE BRING ANOTHER TEST FOR US!!! ...
REALLY Scared when that lady came and Falsely accused us for ill-treating PUJA ...
GOD Y R U DOING THIS!!!!! ..
WAS REALLY SHATTERED ,JASAN WAS SPECELESS
AND RAJ-AVNI SHOCKED...
😲
THANKFULLY MOM COME UP WITH SOLUTION AND FOUND THE TRUTH BUT THAT SHAKES EVERY RELATION ...
AVNI -ARPITA ALREADY AWARE OF IT SO SUPPORT US and this creates a huge MU as RAJ-AVNI HAD LOVE MARRIEGE
So Mr.suket believed that avni support raj's family for this and Savri cooked up a new story to control the situation and EVERYTHING IS ruined...
AND MOM as we know SHE HATE CHEATING SO FILED A CASE AGAINST SAVRI AS SAVRI BROUGHT THE LADY AND BEING A TRUSTEE OF THAT ORPHANAGE CASE DIVERT TO THE ORPHANAGE WHICH ADD KHANDELWALS AS THEY RUNS IT SO ...


THIS CASE MADE TWO PARTY -
1ST 1 IS PUROHITS - Mrs.Anjali Purohit,Mr.Jashan Arora , Mrs. Madhuri Jashan Arora, Mr.Raj Purohit,Mrs. Avni Raj Purohit,Mr.Abhaas Khandelwal,Mrs.Arpita Akshat Khandelwal, Mr. Pratap ...



AND 2ND 1 IS KHANDELWALS - Mr. Suket khandelwal,Akshat Khandelwal and Savri...


Actually Bauji and Bhavna aunty was confused Bcoz they neither cant Believe Or cant Ignore any1's
Its our bad luck that Puja's real Mom ran away and still police cant find het
BUT MAXIMUM DAMADE WAS ALREADY DONE...



GOD Y U ALWAYS DO THIS!!!??? ...
Y WHEN HAPPINESS KNOCKED OUR DOOR PPL WANT TO SNATCH THAT
...Y..
Y...
Y...?? 😭


... .. . ... ...


MADHURI ... .. ..


MADHU... ...

MADHURI...


ANJALI'S CALL BREAK MADHURI'S CHAIN OF THOUGHT...


MADHURI: YES MOM


ANJALI: DONT WORRY EVERYTHING WILL B FINE...AND I WILL NEVER LET ANY1 TO SNATCH UR HAPPYNESS...


MADHURI: 😊 THANX MOM... WHERE IS JASHAN!!??


ANJALI: TO KNOW THE PROCESSING OF TEST/EXAM...AND DONT WORRY DEAR..WE ALL R HERE TO FOR U ...OK JUST RELAX AND GET READY FOR THE TEST ...DEAR DONT B NERVIOUS AND PLZ B POSSITIVE PLZ...


MADHURI: OK ...



IN COURT JUDGE ORDERED BOTH LADIES-Savri and Madhuri TO B READY AND GO TO THAT ROOM WHICH WAS SELECTED FOR TEST ..
{actually savri is there bcoz THE CASE WAS FILED AGAINST HER
BUT she is the 1 who still trying her best and yes she helped puja's REAL MOM TO RUN AWAY...
}


NOW THE TEST START...


JASHAN IS JUST OUTSIDE OF THE ROOM AND MADUR-PUJA-SAVRI IN THAT ROOM ...

CCTV CAMERA INSTALLED FOR JUDGE AND THE PPL PRESENTING IN COURT...

B4 sending that room JUDGE secretly find out their weakness that is what makes them scared & what helps them to lost from world????!!!!!

AND THAT TEST WILL B FOR 15 MINUTE BUT ONLY FOR 3 AND FAMILY MEMBERS R NOT ALLOWED...

AND IF ANY1 WILL BREAK THE RULES WILL LOSE POINTS...

JUDGE ORDERED TO SEND them to the room FOR WALK OF WHOLE PLACE (Actually they want to c how 3 behaves each other) which is a horror place actually THAT ROOM is not only dark but it's like raining and some weird sound also coming and smokes+ 3D ANIMATION which makes it more horrible EXACTLY HORROR PLACE OF ANY THEME PARK... (BUT 3 R NOT AWARE OF CCTV CAMERA)

AND FORTUNATLY 3 OF THEM WAS AFRAID OF THIS SITUATION...actually it can scare any1...

Well 3 already started to shouting and PUJA POOR GIRL started to cry AFTER FEW MINUTES OF ENTRY...

1st FEW minute savri and madhuri both take care ...

But gradually savri started to Take care ownself ...

BUT madhuri-PUJA both still walking together ...

BCOZ OF WATER ROADS BCOM WET ..

suddenly puja about to slips but madhuri saves PUJA BUT HURT herself As she get pain in leg and puja started to CALLING HER PAPA &

Jashan too enter the room breaking the rules

actually PUROHIT'S WAS ALREADY LEFT THEIR PLACE WHEN PUJA STARTED TO CRY AND WHEN MADHURI HURT HERSELF WHOLE PUROHIT FAMILY ENTERED THE ROOM...


1st savri as usual started to blame how could u save PUJA if u cant save ownself & they too give right ans which scared her being loser 😔 suddenly she remember the RULE OF NO ENTRY Then started to shouting "THEY BROCK THE RULES" which makes PUROHIT'S SAD ... (and every1 watched this whole drama through CCTV)

Court provides FIRST AID TO Madhuri as its bcoz of them(no WISH to disrespect LAW) ...


AND NOW EVERY1 IN COURT ROOM AS JUDGE IS GOING TO ANNOUNCE FINAL DECISION AND PUROHITS R SAD + SCARED TO LOSS THEIR HAPPINESS...

B4 That they ask puja about POUROHIT'S behaviour specialy her MOM-DAD's and her opinion as how she feel to stay at PUROHIT MANSION...

WHEN THEY ORDERED PUJA TO GO she goes towards her MOM-DAD ...


though savri still believes she is the winner& SHE'LL GET PUJA...

AND NOW JUDGE " AS WE SAW IN CCTV CAMERA PUROHIT'S BROCK RULE AND WE KNOW THIS WILL MINUS THEIR POINTS AND THEY TOO AWARE OF IT ...

SO PUROHIT'S R GOING TO...

...

...

...

B ANNOUNCED...

...

...

AS PERFECT FAMILY FOR PUJA & MR.&MRS. JASAN ARORA AS BEST MOM-DAD FOR PUJA 👍🏼 👏

BCOZ inspite of knowing that minus marking they enter the room its clearly proves that they loves her so much& MADHURI-JASHAN as we saw how much they cares PUJA ,

Injured / hurt herself but didnt let anything to PUJA,

puja's 1 Shout PAPA was ENOUGH for jashan arora to break the rule ...

AND PUJA TOO CARES FOR HER

SO ITS CLEAR the relation they share r not made by BLOOD its from HEART AND ITS PURE...

So now court permanently gives PUJA JASAN ARORA's resposibilty to PUROHIT'S AND MR.&MRS. JASAN ARORA...

AND Ordered Jaypur's police force to find out PUJA'S BIOLOGICAL MOM TO FIND OUT THE REAL CULPRIT &AFTER THAT ORDERED TO TAKE STRICT LEGAL ACTION..."

NOW SAVRI 🥺

Now THE WHOLE PUROHIT TEAM IS CELEBRATING THIS VICTORY 🥳,FEELS THE HAPPINESS TO GET BACK THEIR LITTLE ANGEL ❤️ 😃 ...

SAVRI ALREADY SHUT HER MOUTH AFTER THAT SHOCKING ORDER TO FIND OUT REAL CULPRIT

Finally khandelwals come and say SORRY TO PUROHITS AND AS USUAL ALL R HAPPY TOGETHER ...

THAT IS

" ALL'S WELL THAT ENDS WELL"



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Already found few mistakes so will try to rectify ...BUT FORGIVE IF I CANT



Anyway its my first writing SO PLZ ... AND YES IF U WANT TO BLAME /APPRECIATE ANY1 THEN U CAN BLAME/APPRECIATE TINA, SAMMY,SHUB,VISH,SPUNK ,PRINZ,MASU ... 🤣 🤣 🤣
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

WHOMEVER U WANT BUT NOT ME FULLY ... LOL 🤣 🤣


AND U CAN GIVE SUGGASION "HOW TO WRITE SOMETHING NICE " ... OR CAN POINT OUT MY MISTAKES... 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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MOM'S CALL BREAK MY CHAIN OF
THOUGHT... (is wrong)


Correction:



ANJALI'S CALL BREAK MADHURI'S CHAIN OF THOUGHT...


Stict (wrong)

correction:

STRICT


WE ALL R HERE TO FOR U ... (wrong)


Correction:


WE ALL R HERE FOR U ...



Edited by PAYA-AVRAJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome 👏
Eksss Purohits won
I so wish it happens in show too 😎
Jannat you write so well yaar 👏
Edited by Barbievishi20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! Paya-Avraj, u are absolutely succesful in writing the story. 👏 👍🏼

A huge congratulations to u on successfully writing this amazing and mindblowing story! 👏 👏

U dont have to say sorry, infact u sud feel proud, bcoz u have exceedingly written and beautifully elaborate the story and specify each and every point so wonderfully. 😃

And i easily understand what u said and how finally PJ goes to her well deserved parents and SV got the punishment which she deserves and i am extremely happy for that as evil SV sud get extreme punishment daily for her evil acts 😡

After reading this story, it doesnt seem that this is ur first story attempt, bcoz u write extremely and exceedingly well in ur first attempt as u have specify each and every detail of every scene and perfectly adds the dialogues! 👏

Keep it up and i think u sud continue like this with ur amazing writing!! 👍🏼

And once again congratulations to u and thanks for providing us this beautiful story narrated by u. 😃

Actually now i am waiting many more to come from ur side... 😊

And i am extremely extremely happy to see that all things are sorted out and its a happy ending!! 😃 😃
Edited by subham101289 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: subham101289

Wow! Paya-Avraj, u are absolutely succesful in writing the story. 👏 👍🏼

A huge congratulations to u on successfully writing this amazing and mindblowing story! 👏 👏

U dont have to say sorry, infact u sud feel proud, bcoz u have exceedingly written and beautifully elaborate the story and specify each and every point so wonderfully. 😃

And i easily understand what u said and how finally PJ goes to her well deserved parents and SV got the punishment which she deserves and i am extremely happy for that as evil SV sud get extreme punishment daily for her evil acts 😡

After reading this story, it doesnt seem that this is ur first story attempt, bcoz u write extremely and exceedingly well in ur first attempt as u have specify each and every detail of every scene and perfectly adds the dialogues! 👏

Keep it up and i think u sud continue like this with ur amazing writing!! 👍🏼


And once again congratulations to u and thanks for providing us this beautiful story narrated by u. 😃

Actually now i am waiting many more to come from ur side... 😊

And i am extremely extremely happy to see that all things are sorted out and its a happy ending!! 😃 😃




THNX A LOT FOR ALL THIS ...
THANK GOD U LIKED IT...WHICH IS OUT OF MY IMAGINATION ...
BUT ALWAYS TRY TO AVOID THEORY AND SO ON STORY WRITING...
IT TOOK ALMOST 4 HOUR TO WRITE AND NOW TRY HARD TO RECTIFY ALL THE MISTAKES... AGAIN THANX
Edited by PAYA-AVRAJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Awesome 👏
Eksss Purohits won
I so wish it happens in show too 😎
Jannat you write so well yaar 👏





THANK U SO MUCH ...
SO HAPPY TO KNOW U PPL LIKED IT...
BUT AS I SAID B4 ITS BEYOND MY IMAGINATION

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