Ariya Os The Last Chapter - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I was waiting for this part from the time u update the second one

This was amazing a bit emotional at end but happy finally he will reunite with his love be happy if not in this world than the other

U r a good writer plz do pm me when u update your other stories would definitely love to read more on ariya from u

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Posted: 5 years ago
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U was waiting for this part from the time u update the last one

It was amazing a bit emotional at the end but still happy finally arjun could reunite with his love and be happy if not in this world than the other one

U r a good writer would love to read more on ariya from u plz pm me when update ur other stories on ariya

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Fabulous os...

A beautiful emotional end...

Thanks for pm...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#24

I'm😭

And for ur story👍🏼

Thanx for pm

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

That was an emotional story..

Literally went through a whole roller coaster of emotions..

Beautifully written

Thanks for the pm

Keep writing

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

Wow

Fabulous ending

It was sad but good that he got his peace in the end


Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

Wonderful Three shots (TS)👏

Its emotional & very touching, loved diary entries parts and the song very much. Plz give some suitable name to this TS.


Nice Ending. Finally God, who never get easily affected by individual's sufferings was not upset with Arjun unlike his colleagues, and reunited him with his lost love without making him wait any longer. Even God's heart too, melted looking at Arjun's pain that he made him immune, so that he didn't shed tears while going through that sufferings like others.


Khuda Iss Jahaan Se Toh Barso Khafa Hain

Ganeemat Hai Tumse Toh Insaan Hai Rootha,

Dariya Ki Tarah Zamaane Ke Aasoon

Palkon Se Teri Toh Qatra Hai Choota


Sar Par Uthaya Hai Kyun Aasmaan Ko

Agar Badh Hain Jaati Teri Dhadkanein...


Sehmi Hain Dhadkan, Sehri Hain Dhadkan,

Thehri Hai Dhadkan

Toh Kya Ho Gaya...

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