arakshi: kalank

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Posted: 6 years ago
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hello friends... i have updated kalank story for ariya.... so i thought i should post for arakshi too...

so here kalank story in my version... for arakshi...

let me tell you it's going to be about very messed up relationship.... so let me know... should i continue or not....

Part 1

1945

“kalank nahi tere ishq ka kajalhai piya,

Unn aankhon me junoon hai tereishq ka jiya

Sawalon ke kathgare ne humarasukoon jo liya

Naa chhodege haath kabhi tera yewada raha sathiya” (poem by moumita roy)

A village near jaipur… a wedding ceremony was going on… panditwas chanting mantra… a groom was sitting in the mandap with his face covered by his “shehra” … and after few minutes, panditji asked to bring bride there…. Bride’s friends brought bride out… her face was also covered in her goonghat… there were some hesitant in her walk… she had made her feast tightly… her face was not visible but her body language was telling different story… she sat next to groom… and tears dropped on her palm… she was crying inside her goonghat….

“ye kya baat kr rahi hai aap masa…hum unse kaise shaadi kar shakte hai… umra me wo humare baap se bhi bade hai…kya Daulat hi sab kuchh hai… humariKhushi kuchh nahi” Sakshi pleaded to her mother…

“ye kaise baat kar rahi ho tumhamse… humne to tumhare babasa se pehle hi kaha tha… betiyon ko jyada padhanalikhana nahi chahiye tha… dekhlo natiza”… her mother said…

“dekho Sakshi beta… hum jantehai.. tumne apni shaadi ke liye kisi Rajkumar ke khwab dekhe hoge… magar khwabhaqeekat nahi ban shakte… aur fir zara apne baki bhai bahen ke bare me to soch…tumhare ek faisle se unki zindagi sawar jayegi”…. Her father tried to explainher…

“aur meri zindagi ka kya babasa”… Sakshi asked… and there was no answer for her question

Panditji asked Sakshi’s parents for kanyadan… sakshi couldn’t forwarded her hand so her mother forcefully put her hand into groom’s hand… he saw tears dropped on sakshi’s palm… he closed his eyes and took deep breath…

“ek aur jaan kurban ho gayi ise samaj ki rashmo ke naam” he thought….

Bride and groom took 7 feras, exchanged flower garlands with heavy heart… and bidaai time came… her mother, father, sister and brother were crying bugging her…

When her mother hugged Sakshi she said, “aaj use agni kundme aapne apni beti ka kanyadan nahi agni sanskar kiya hai… aaj ke baad aap kibeti aaplogo ke liye mar chuki hai… ab humara rishta bhi yahi khatm masa”… and she left…

Sakshi came to Birwaipur (which is near Pakistan border now…before it was part of india)…

A young girl was doing welcome ceremony… she did aarti and put rice kalash near her…sakshi kicked the kalash and entered in the Rathod mention… her mother in law, Dhanwanti Rathod came… sakshi touched her feet…

Dhanwanti: aao dulhan… swagat hai aapka… ye (the girl who did aarti) Rajni hai… Suryakant ki chhoti beti… aaj khas tumhare liye aayi hai…shaadi kar apne sasural me khush hai (rajni’s smile became dull)

Saskhi was shocked… Rajni was 2 years older than her…

Rajni: swagat hai aapka chhoti thakurain…

Saskhi joined her hand to her…

Dhanwanti: aur ye tumhari nanand… leela baisa… (saskhitouched her feet) apne pati ke maut ke baad ye humare saath hi rehti hai … unkaek beta bhi hai Shreekant… filhal to wo apni paghai ke liye vilayt gaya hua hai… Arjun ki tarah wo bhi vakalat kar raha hai…

Leela: are tumhe arjun ke bare me to bataya hi nahi… Arjun ise ghar ka bada beta… Suryakant bhaisa ka bada beta… wo bhi London gaya hua hai… bas wo aaj-kal me hi aane wala hai… uski padhai khatm ho gai hai…

Suryakant Rawte took his shehra off and was about to leave but dhanwanti had stopped him….

Dhanwanti: Suryakant… kaha jaa rahe hai… abhi nav-dampati ki pehli pooja baki hai…

Suryakant was blankly staring at his mother…. He didn’t say anything,but his eyes were saying so much but his mother was not able to listen him… Sakshi and Suryakant rathod performed a pooja together….

While everyone was busy in pooja, a young man entered inhaveli… he was surprised to see the haveli… it was decorated with flowers and lamps… he saw Suryakant Rathod was performing navdampati pooja with some woman whose face was covered… he made his feast in anger, and clinched his jaw… eyes filled with anger and he was taking heavy breath…

As rituals finished, everyone saw him standing there with anger…

Leela bua (shocked and scare): arjun beta….

Rajni, dhanwanti rathod and leela bua was worried seeing arjun there… they knew how mad arjun would be… they were looking at each other and tried to find a way to calm arjun down… but before they say or do anything…anrjun in anger went to Suryakant rathod and held his collar… Suryakant rathodwas standing calm… he was helplessly looking at arjun…

Arjun (angry, clinched his teeth and holding suryakant’scollar): agar Gandhiji ke aadarsho ko nahi apnaya hota to mein ise waqt aap kakatal kar deta… jeete ji meri maa ko koi Khushi nahi di aapne… aur aaj dusarishaadi bhi kar aaye… waise to badi duhai dete rehte ho aap… pyar, ishq aur najane kya… bahut hi ghatiya insan ho aap…

Dhanwanti: Arjun… ye kya tarika hai apne babasa se baatkarne ka… chhodiye inhe… aap shant hojaye… ye shaadi humare kehne pe hui hai…panditji ne kaha tha… ki Suryakant ki kundali…

Arjun looked at his grandmother with rage and anger anddhanwanti scared… she stepped back and becme quiet… she saw something in hiseyes… arjun pushed his father and leftfrom there… while he was leaving Chhotu, his childhood friend and driver, brought his luggage in…

Arjun: chalo chhotu… yaha se

Chhotu looked at suryakant and he gave permission, by blinking his eyes… and chhotu about to left when he saw Rajni was standing there… he couldn’t see the happiness on her face… his heart ached… but he put all the thoughts behind his head and went to arjun

Sakshi who was witnessed all these drama was shivering… she had no idea what was going on… through her goonghat, she tried to see arjun’s face but couldn’t see him properly…

At night Sakshi was sitting on her bed… Suryakant came into the room… sakshi was really scared… she never wanted to marry this man and now she’s already his wife… she didn’t know how he would behave with her… she was not ready yet… her heart was beating faster… and whatever happened few hours back, she thought he would be a monster… her mouth became dry and her hands fell cold… Suryakant sat on the chair in the room

Surykant (calm): dekhiye… mein janta hun… jo bhi thodi derpehle hua use aap pareshan hogi… par aap gabhraiye mat…ye to yaha roz hota hai…aur rahi baat ise shaadi ki to meine yeshaadi sirf masa ki zid ki wajah se ki hai… mein ise rishte me aap se koiummeed nahi rakhta… aap bhi mujhse koi ummeed na rakhe…darasal mein bhi kisiaur ko chahta hun, jise mein kabhi apna na paunga… aur haa aap ko ise ghar me goonghat karne ki zaroorat nahi hai… aap chahe to nikal dijiye…

Saskhi removed her goonghat and Suryakant saw her face and he shocked…

Suryakant: aap to kafi chhoti hai umra me… kitne saal ki hai aap

Saskhi: 18

Suryakant (couldn’t believe it): maaf kijiyega…. Mujhe nahipata tha ki aap… kher… mein aap pe kisi tarah ka dabav nahi karuga… aap jo chahe kar shakti hai aur jab chahe ise rishte se aazad bhi ho shakti hai… meri taraf se aap ko puri aazadi hai… apni zindagi apni marzi se jeene ki… aap se koi kuchh nahi kahega… bas arjun se zara dur rahiyega… wo na jaane kya keh de aapse…

Saying this Suryakant rathod left the room and Saskhi tooksigh of relief… she took some deep breath… Suryakant rathod was not a bad person… but now her life had changed… she cried all night…

Suryakant’s car stopped behind some big house… he stepped out from car and was staring at house… he was listening a song, some woman in that house was singing… and he felt peace…

His driver, usman, asked…” thakur saab… aap humesha yaha aate hai… yaha peechhe khade hoke gana sunte hai… unki ek zalak dekh ke chale jate hai… kab tak aise chalega? Ek baat humari samaj me bhi nahi aayi ki aapne dusra nikah kiya hi kyon? Agar…”

Usman stopped when, the lady who was singing was walking on her terrace came near the edge. after looking at moon, her gaze fell on Suryakant Rathod, who was standing behind her house… for a moment both of their breath stopped, and tears rolled down from both of their eyes… love was communicating through tears and silence… she left from there and hid her self behind the pillar and cried… after so many years the pain was the same… every time she saw him, she had similar effect…

Suryakant rathod broke down… usman felt really bad for him…he was not just a drive of Suryakant rathod but also a very good friend, and raazdar… he knew what had happened with him in the past, that was the reason he felt really bad for his condition… he tried to consoled his friend….

“KYAKAHE ISHQ MEIN ISE QADAR BEZUBAAN HO GAYE….

KITUMSE JUDA HOKE HUM TABAAH HO GAYE… TABAAH HO GAYE”

that's it for now.... and plz leave your comments and like here...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Really a nice start dear

It's quite peculiar & emotional ☹️

Hmmm so Sakshi what said to her parents was apt they didn't even thought about her happiness

This father son & Sakshi trio is going to be interesting 😉

Arjun as usual is quite furious after this marriage

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

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Posted: 6 years ago
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unres:

just one word wow awesome start

really interesting and mindblowing

is arjun suryakant rathod related by blood

thora confusion ho gaya meri side i mean

that they are father and son kiya..?

so sakshi arjun step mom then...?

omg yeh tou sach mai "KALANK"

eagerly waiting for next part ....

Edited by maha2905 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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thanks a lot for writing on Arakshii. 🤗

It's amazing.. u described very well..

Sakshi married with arjun's dad.. even he was unaware of her age.. sakshi's parents married her just for their family's well being.. but what about her life..

Really felt bad for Sakshii😭

Suryakant was also forced to marry Sakshii

You showed full picture Rajasthan in this update..

Every character is nice.. waiting for more to know them

Arjun came to home.. angry with his dad.. Sakshi didn't see Arjun face .. suryakant is not bad man..

He gave full freedom to Sakshi to lead her life as her wishes..

Suryakant loves someone else.. loved the you describe their moments..

Thanks for update..

Continue soon😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Really like it.very nice update.👍🏼👏

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting update

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice story dear.keep it up

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I am speechless

What a start👏👏👏

Poor sakshi 😭

Sakshi marriage Arjun dad

Interesting

Interesting🤓

Interesting❤️

Eagerly waiting for next update

Please please continue

Edited by Arakshi234 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice story

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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shocking that sakshi was forced to marry suryakant.thnkfullyhe is nt bad.shocking that even he didn’t know her age.Arjun’s anger his dad is justified.shocking that suryakanth loves someone else.Then why didn’t he marry her instead of marrying Sakshi?

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