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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

beautiful one

loved it

thnx for pm

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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Beautiful OS *claps*

Loved it too much

Arjun's thoughts in the diary were very well written.

And the pain of becoming immune to anything could be felt through the words.

Yaar rulane ka poora plan tha na? *cries*

I'm running out of words to praise. *hats off*

Thanks a lot for the PM

Keep writing such beautiful stories


*I would have written more but the new look of IF is very demotivating and disappointing that I can't write more. And I would've used emojis but they are missing.*

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Posted: 6 years ago
#13

Awesome update... Loved it....!!!!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

So...beautiful.....

Really heart touching....and the way you presented it, is brilliant....it reflects the pain...

I m in love with the last para.....

Thanks for the story..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Wonderful os.

Arjun's pain is too much to tolerate.

And now he had become immune to

Each and every tests of life.

Riya's absence did make a difference in his life.

Lovely yet emotional os,

Thanks a lot for the pm.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Awesome os

Beautiful and emotional

Loved it

Ye Arjun to patthar ho gaya bina Riya ke

He confessed finally that he love her and all the feelings during cases

Thnx for pm

(Mil hi gaya tumhara updt lol)

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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Actually speaking the last sentences were very hurtful...

Bcoz if a person acts like that after he lost sme1 imp means; he is truly in very much pain..

I don't know what to say further...

Good work...

Thanx for pm

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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

No words........

Is it stupid .... if I say I'm crying over this.......

The pain is so raw

I love them both.... our Ariya ..... a love story that never got it's happy ending...... neither did we see a proper beginning.......

I stopped watching after riya...... died... for me the show ended there and then..... I couldn't bear the thought of arjun without her.....

U are an amazing writer .... never stop writing......

Can I probably ask for more of this..... or another story on them...... an ff most probably.....

I've been on edge lately..... life hasn't been kind..... I love reading and especially about the characters I personally fell in love with

Hopefully you have a story on ariya.... on the way

Thanks for the pm

Keep writing

Waiting for your next work

Ps. The link of your previous update still didn't work..... tho it worked for this os miraculously... Thanks nonetheless.... love you

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: RiyaA123

No words........

Is it stupid .... if I say I'm crying over this.......

The pain is so raw

I love them both.... our Ariya ..... a love story that never got it's happy ending...... neither did we see a proper beginning.......

I stopped watching after riya...... died... for me the show ended there and then..... I couldn't bear the thought of arjun without her.....

U are an amazing writer .... never stop writing......

Can I probably ask for more of this..... or another story on them...... an ff most probably.....

I've been on edge lately..... life hasn't been kind..... I love reading and especially about the characters I personally fell in love with

Hopefully you have a story on ariya.... on the way

Thanks for the pm

Keep writing

Waiting for your next work

Ps. The link of your previous update still didn't work..... tho it worked for this os miraculously... Thanks nonetheless.... love you

Thank you,

I do have a story in line...just waiting for a few issues to resolve so that it can be carried on smoothly

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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Awesome update


Love it..


Riya is no more..n Arjun has fallen for her now..


Poor he..


Do write more..


Thanks for pm..

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