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Posted: 6 years ago

Superb amazing update

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Posted: 6 years ago

nice update dear

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update dear👏

Loved it... Ariya hi ariya tha isme to😃

But ria ko panic attack aa gya😔

Anyways thanks for the pm n continue sooner😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

I read the entire story together and I really like the concept.

Riya is a woman who believes in living in present but Arjun is someone who takes the future in the consideration too.

I know situations are to be blamed and I know they both are justified in their own places but I can't help feel that what Riya did was not right. She hurt so many people and will hurt more because of her impulsive decisions. If she has moved on with Sameer, she doesn't deserve Arjun once again.

I'm worried about Sameer. If Arjun and Riya do somehow end up together, what will happen to him? He has invested his everything in this relationship. I hope there's something much greater waiting for him.

Sakshi deserves a lot more than this pain. She has been going through it for years and I wish it stops soon

But I like how slowly the misunderstandings are being dealt with and Arjun is trying to clarify the problems between them. When he finds out the truth, he's going to be heartbroken. But I can't connect with Riya at all, maybe because of her personality of always blaming others.

Anyways, great work at presenting scenes and characters. The flow seems very natural

I'm so sorry for commenting late on this story and thank you so much for all the PMs

Please update the next part soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

I read the entire story together and I really like the concept.

Riya is a woman who believes in living in present but Arjun is someone who takes the future in the consideration too.

I know situations are to be blamed and I know they both are justified in their own places but I can't help feel that what Riya did was not right. She hurt so many people and will hurt more because of her impulsive decisions. If she has moved on with Sameer, she doesn't deserve Arjun once again.

I'm worried about Sameer. If Arjun and Riya do somehow end up together, what will happen to him? He has invested his everything in this relationship. I hope there's something much greater waiting for him.

Sakshi deserves a lot more than this pain. She has been going through it for years and I wish it stops soon

But I like how slowly the misunderstandings are being dealt with and Arjun is trying to clarify the problems between them. When he finds out the truth, he's going to be heartbroken. But I can't connect with Riya at all, maybe because of her personality of always blaming others.

Anyways, great work at presenting scenes and characters. The flow seems very natural

I'm so sorry for commenting late on this story and thank you so much for all the PMs

Please update the next part soon

This one made my day

Ty dear 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

PART 12

THE FONDNESS

Arjun and dhruv moved back to dhruv's house. They sat there in the balcony discussing about something. After sometime riya came to arjun with two coffee cups in her hand. She handed one to arjun and other to dhruv. But dhruv gives back to her stating that he doesn't want to drink coffee.

Dhruv leaves the place giving privacy to them. Riya sits beside arjun and smiles lightly at him. Arjun moves close to her. Riya bit hesitates but she sat there silently. Arjun kept his hand on her shoulder.

Arjun : how are you feeling now riya?

Riya : sab theek hai.. Lekin thoda aur thakan

Arjun : u should have taken rest

Riya : no baba i am fine..

Arjun : sab kaam khatam hogaya. But flight are delayed due to this weather. They will be fine by tomorrow

Riya : let's take a train then

Arjun: riya no way.. It will be late

Riya and arjun move inside after talking about Mumbai's weather. Arjun was keeping the cups suddenly dhruv came to him. Dhruv dragged arjun away from riya excusing themselves.

Dhruv : kya chal raha hai?

Arjun : aur kya (after thinking a while) fog hi chal raha hai

Dhruv : ohhh... ( after sometime) what the..... I am talking about bhabhi ju

Arjun : propose karna hai fir.... Fir shaadi hogi aur...

Dhruv : bas wahi ruk ja... Hame wo sab gandhe baat nahi sunne ka shauk nahi hai. Yeh bol when are you going to propose

Arjun : apna Time ayega

Dhruv : kab jab mein meri dada tarah banne ke baad?

Arjun : actually... Mujhe dar kag raha hai yaar wo kaise react karegi yeh sochke hi.

Dhruv : duffer hai yaar thu... Ek acha place dundo aur jao jake propose karo

Arjun : kaha.. Wait let me think... Ha hamari colony wala cafe leke jau

Dhruv : kyu tumhare colony mein chota chai dukaan nahi hai kya?

Arjun : waha cafe mein chai aur samose ek dum first class hai

Dhruv : toh u propose her for samosa.. Ju think big....

Arjun : ha donut stall leke jau

Dhruv : are yaar koi romantic place..

Arjun : bas romantic place chahiye right... Wait ( thinking deeply) ice cream parlour

Dhruv : yuck.... Thu kaise admi ho yaar.. Mujhe ab pata chala ki tumhe riya se jyaada khana pasand hai.. U are hopeless.

Arjun : tu hi bolo... Wait someplace here.. Because agar waha wo kuch ulta seedha bole toh mere ijjath... My friends... God

Dhruv : idea.....

Arjun : 3g ya 4g

Dhruv : idiot dekho tumhare flight kal shaam tak delay hogayi na

Arjun : ha toh

Dhruv : lonavala le jao ise... Aap dono 3 ghante mein pahunch jayenge. Jao waha se koi bhi exotic location mein propose karo.. Aur kal subah tak return hojavo

Arjun : ok done wait i will ask her..

Riya moves to arjun to show something. Dhruv moves away and shows him a big thumbs up

Riya : arjun yeh dekho... Aaj ham shopping jaenge please

She made a cute puppy face and his heart melted. He nodded yes. And she ran inside to get herself ready.

She comes out after an hour with a white top and blue jeans complemented with a multicoloured dupatta...

Dhruv slowly sneaked near arjun

Dhruv : same same.. Comeon

Arjun : toh kya karu.. Shall i go and say same pinch

Dhruv: nahi yaar ur mindsets kaafi ek tarah hai. Hai na

Riya entered the scene and dragged arjun with her. She went near dadi.

Riya : dadi.. Ham dono ko thoda shopping karna hai, ham shaam tak laut aenge

Dadi : ok beta jao...aur tum (pointing arjun) take care of her warna

Dhruv : darling jaane do

Arjun and riya went outside dhruv's home on his bike

Riya just hugged arjun from back.. (Ok... Ok i got u from arjun's point of view its hugging from riyas its holding securely)

Riya : main bahuth kush hun aaj. Kai dinon ke baad koi rules nahi.

Arjun : where should we go now?

Riya : pehle ham shopping karne jaenge, fir ham lunch ke liye jayenge and then beach.. Ok

Arjun : ha chalo

They moved to a big mall and riya started to select some clothes for her and her mother. She later went on to buy some gifts for roshini and ayesha. She then went near arjun, who was checking out some clothes, and handed him a box. Arjun took it with blank face

Riya : arjun yeh lo tumhare liye. From my side

Arjun : mujhe kyu

Riya : dekho mein sabke liye shopping ki... Aur arjun jo people hamare liye special hai. And we should let them know that they are special.. And giving gifts is one such thing

Arjun just didn't get what he listened. But he went away from there taking that box and left the place. He then silently sat at a corner and slowly recalled the words she said

Arjun : kya bola usne.. Wait wait.. We should make our special ones feel special means... Mein uske liye special hun..

Arjun was just super happy about this.

Arjun : (m.v) wo mujhe special maan rahe hai and ab yeh mera time hai ki tumhe dikhau ki tum kitna special ho

Arjun and riya moved to creamstone which is in the mall. Riya sat there. Suddenly she started coughing badly. Arjun just looked here and there and grabbed a bottle from the bag of a person passing by. He made her drink, then shouted at that man to take back his bottle. That man just glared hard at them and went. Riya who was suppressing laugh started to laugh out loudly... She is actually rofling there moving here and there.

Arjun was just so embarrassed so he made an excuse to loo. After nearly 15 min he returned. She was still giggling looking at him

He sat down so she tried to stop giggles but again laughed harder. She again started coughing

Arjun : dekho tum tumhare khyaal nahi rakhthe ho aur phir se shuru hogaya dekho yeh cough.

Riya : are yaar tum mujhse naaraaz ho? Drama queen

Arjun : naraz nahi hun mein... Lekin tum khyaal rakhna tumhari

Riya : tum ho na meri fikar karne ke liye...(laughing)

Arjun looked at her with all the love he had.. But Riya was looking at the menu and then arjun called waiter.

Waiter : order please..

Riya : ju order bolo na

Arjun : tu bhajan karegi kya.. Tu hi bol

Riya : ju please...

Arjun : tu nahi sudharegi... Bhaisaab tum 2 choclate truffle leke aao.

After sometime waiter comes with a choco truffle and a vanila. Arjun took the choclate one but looked at riya and waiter questioningly.

Riya : are rehne do na... Its fine

Arjun : bhaisaab dekhen ki hame kya order diya hai

Riya : are ju rehne do na...we have to adjust with what we have when we doesn't get what we want.

Waiter leaved and arjun ne kaafi irritated hogaya. She then moved to the chair beside him and took his ice-cream and started to eat it.

Arjun : yeh kya hai tum mere ice-cream kha rahe hain

Riya : tu toh bahuth hot ho na... Yeh iss hotness ke wajah se melt hone ki pehle mein khau toh waste nahi hogi na

Arjun : flirting huh..

Suddenly arjun's eyes fall on a bouquet shop. Its decorated with many bouquets flowers gazebos etc. Soon after they completed that arjun took riya there. They wandered here and there. Finally arjun's eyes fell on a two bouquets. He grabbed two of them and went near Riya.

Arjun : riya inn select one

Riya : ha ok..

She started to examine the bouquets carefully. She was confused, slowly she started to panic. Arjun observed the shivers and asked what

Riya : i think i am tired...

Arjun : ok we. Will leave but pehle ek thing batao.. Which is better.

Riya : arjun mujhe dono achi hai

Arjun : nahi any one

Riya : red mera favourite hai lekin white perfect select anyone

Arjun : tum hi bolo.

Riya (yells at him) : mujhe nahi patha.... Can you just leave me....

Saying this she went from there. Arjun also silently followed her embarrassed. They both move back to dhruv's house. Riya went to sleep for sometime.

Arjun said about this thing to dhruv

Dhruv : kya uski dimaag stable nahi hai. Ya use flowers se koi problem hai.

Dhruv (m.v) : kya yeh wo hai jo meine parso book mein pada... No no aise kyu hoga.. Dhruv thu bhi na

After sometime arjun brought some red roses to Riya kept it beside her bed and a card which is enveloped and left the place gloomily. After sometime riya woke up only to find red rose beside her. Riya slowly opens the enveloped card

" Dear Riya,

Things we like need not to be perfect. Kabhi Kabhi toh gussa kabu pe rakho.. Warna bp ka attack jo hojayegi.

Yours lovingly,

Arjun."

She went out and searched for arjun. They were no traces of him. She found dadi doing some work in the kitchen. She went near dadi and stood near her.

Riya : dadi, kya aap ne arjun ko dekha?

Arjun : mein toh yahi hun

She turned back only to find arjun licking his fingers after eating paratha

Riya : tum itne der kaha the? I was tensed.

Arjun : darna kyu ( carelessly) i didn't die right

Saying this he went outside and sat on the steps. Riya turned to dadi with tears. She quickly cleared them but dadi noticed. She enquired everything and riya informed everything about their quarrel.

Dadi : dekho beti mein ek baath bolthi hun hamesha yaad rakhna(riya nods her head) the one who loves you can't fake anger for so much time

Riya listened and thinks deeply after sometime she moves to arjun's place. Arjun just gets up from there but she sat there holding his hand. She slowly rests her head on his shoulders.

Riya : dekho i will not say sorry..

Arjun : am i asking you?

Arjun slowly moves his hands round her and held her. She also hugs him for sometime. Then arjun moves to dhruv.

Dhruv : itne bechain kyu.. What happened?

Arjun : i am proposing riya tonight...

Dhruv : wow...

Arjun : i will go to some beach side restaurant aur dinner phir propose...

Dhruv cheered him and arjun went outside with some excuse. After an hour riya remembered something and came to the living area except grandparents no one is there

Riya : dadi yeh dhruv aur arjun

Dadi : dhruv tho cricket khelne gaya tha.. Aur arjun ka tho patha nahi

Soon she called arjun. There arjun was busy in booking table with a great view. The noises in the hotel were loud. Suddenly he got Riya's call.

Riya : ju where are you?

ARJUN : Bas kuch kaam tha.. I am returning now.

Riya : arjun you come to beach from there we will come back here. I am leaving.

But arjun didn't heard that due to the noises.

Riya got ready within an hour and went to dadi saying that she will return soon. Soon she took an auto and moved to the beach. Here arjun returned home after 1 hour.

Dhruv : where is riya?

Arjun : she is not with me..

Dadi : riya bola tha ki tumhe patha hai

They waited for Riya for next three hours but she didn't return. Suddenly arjun saw call coming from Riya's number.

Edited by Shriyareddy - 5 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Unres fog chal raha hai apna time aayega 3g 4g hai nice one dhruv arjun se kehta hai ki riya ko propose kare ariya achcha time spent karte hai arjun riya ko propose karne wala hai yeh riya kaha gai awesome update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

Edited by ruhi1985sheetal - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome chapter.Liked it.

Today Arjun's one lines...😆

Ariya's relation is much better now.Their moments were lovely.Liked the thinking of Arjun's between perfect & like.

Thanks for PM.

Update soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update dear👏

So many Ariya moments 😃

Just lovely 😊

Please update soon n thanks for the pm😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

Beautiful part dear

Loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

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