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Shivanya

@IfritAmbrose

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Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Interesting Start

Continue soon

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loveuAriya

@loveuAriya

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Awesome update dear

Loved it

Flirt Arjun and serious Riya

But Riya kuch jyada hi khadoos hai

Arjun and his family is very sweet

Waiting for the time when we will see the sparks between the two

Continue soon

Thanks for PM

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Swati

@swaasp

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Posted: 6 years ago

#33

nice update

loved it

ye arjun bahut cute lagta hai

aur ye babhi kaun, ayesha?

interesting

thanks for the pm and update soon

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zubiya92

@zubiya92

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Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
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gauri

@ariya143

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#35

Awesome updated..

Sub ulata hai.. arj is cool n ri serious.

Superb yaar ..Love arj in flirty n sweet..

Waiting for next..

Thanks for pm dear..

Updated soon..

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Awesome update
Loved it
Wow ye ariya in new avtar
Aise lag raha tha ri aur arjun ki souls exchange hogayi ho 😆
Poor ri ek incident ne uski lifese trust and love nikal diya par koi nahi ab arjun aagaya na tho trust aur love dono karna sikha dega hai na!!!😉
Samjun family scene was so cute and lovely arjun bache ki tarah complain kar raha tha sameer ki 😆
Oho sam ko arjun ke bhabi yani ayu ke bare me batana hai but our super cop know it before only
Cont soonish
Thanks for pm
Bye take care

Edited by sana1819786 - 6 years ago

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#37

Areee waahhh. .Cool update

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Bloomie

@bloomie

Dazzler

+ 10

Posted: 6 years ago

#38

Awesoem update

loved it

lovely start

Arjun is the new chief

lol...sab use criminal samajhne lage

upar se ghar jaa kar Arjun Sameer ki complaint karne laga

ek hi din mein Arjun ko Sameer aur Ayesha ke baare mein pata bhi chal gaya

cont sooon

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Shanafr

@Shanafr

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Posted: 6 years ago

#39

Awesome update

Loveit

Thanks for pm

Cont soon

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Shivanya

@IfritAmbrose

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#40

Fun update!

This Arjun is really nice and is even little childlike.. refreshing for a change but khadus hi baat hi alag hai!

And Riya baap re, lagta hai khadus Arjun ka soul iske andar aa gaya hai!

Can you explain this (Bold), what does this line mean or is it just normal grammar error?

Arjun:thik hai, par agli baar his you dekhlena

Loved the update!

Just a little advice, go through your update once you have finished writing it and review all the grammatical mistakes in there, rest all good!

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