Ariya FF: Niyati ka Khel [Thread 2]

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

armishra

@armishra

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#241

Socking update

Love it

Eagerly waiting for next part

Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Edited by armishra - 6 years ago

Quote

Arjunasr

@Arjunasr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#242

Oh no! Whenever I think that your story can't have a deeper cliff hanger you prove me wrong. We requested you not to kill Riya so are you planning to take Arjun??

Wonderful as always was the update, and Thank you for giving the update for me.

Coming back to the update, I feel all the people there in ETF including Ryan have split personality disorder. First they stood against Purab for Sakshi then suddenly they switched side and felt enraged as Purab was wronged.

I think judging Sakshi right now will not be wise. She might have her own reasons.

By Riya's dream, and because of earlier chapters too, we get a slight idea that may be rockstar and Arjun are same, then what is the betrayal she's talking about? So many mysteries are still under covers. Hope you'll reveal them soon.

The team should her punished for what they did to Arjun. Continue soon. And this update was not too soon, it was in the right time. So jeep giving updates like this. Thanks for pm and please try to give the update as soon as possible.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Divanru

@Divanru

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#243

Lovely yet emotional update.

Glad riya is alright but arjun is in danger .

Waiting eagerly for further updates to see arjun alright .

Thanks for PM.

Updt next soon

Quote

ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#244

part 24;-

dam how could everyone blame Arjun..n they even didn't know he too had bullets..

n that rayan said aahana to go to sikandar..

oh plz u all are police officers how could u even think like that..

plz continue soon

thanks for pm

sorry for late response

Quote

ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#245

awsome update

love it

so Purab Sakshi story reveal

I think there is some reason of sakshi's betrayal..

oh god riya awake but Arjun?

plz continue soon

thanks for pm