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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ariya786

awesome dear

loved it
arjun is doing his job so perfectly
he is fooling the goons and making abbas himself kill his trust worthy persons
wow kya khoob khela arjun ne usne abbas se khud kehelwaya deal ki details
ab raaju ka kya hoga
cont soon
thanks for pm
sorry for late


Thanks
Haan akhir eo Arjun Rawte hai
Ab toh Raju gaya kaam se

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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 19
At Abbas' place

Abbas:Urggh aaj phir raid pad gayi police ki.

Akram:Boss aapne wo dekha jo apun ne dekha?

Abbas(confused):Kya?

Akram:Yahan nazar ghumake dekhiye sabko haat pair pe chot lagi hai yahan tak ki apun pe goli chali hai aur aap ko bhi chot lagi hai sivay ek ke.

Abbas:Kiske?

Akram roam his finger to each person and stops at Raju.

Akram:Raju ke. Dekhiye boss ise ek kharoch tak nahi aayi.

Abbas:To tu hai wo gaddar..kal to bahana banakar bach gaya par aaj nahi bachga.

Raju:Nahi saab maine kuch nahi kiya...mera yakeen kijiye...mai nahi janta unhone mujh pe goli kyu nahi chalayi jabki mai toh unke samne saab...mujhe mat mariye.

Abbas:Ye le Akram bandook tune kaha tha na apun se pehle tu uska kaam tamam karega.

Akram points the gun towards Raju who is begging in front of him. He press the trigger and shot on his leg.

Raju:Ahh..

Abbas:Akram maine kaha tha...

Akram:Janta hu boss par final kaam toh aap hi karoge.

Abbas shot him dead.

For some days Abbas didn't go for any dealings. At least showing like that. They didn't know it was the silence huge storm.
Today is Riya's b'day. All wish her including Arjun's parents. Riya was missing Arjun very much. She remembers how they calebrated Arjun's b'day.

Rathod:Riya aaj raat hum sab restaurant chalenge.

Riya:Nahi sir mai aise kaise khushiyan mana sakti hu jab wahan Arjun Sir apne desh ke liye lad rahe hain.

Rathod:I know Riya but..

Riya:Please sir mujhe force mat kijiye. Mai apko baar baar na nahi keh sakti.

Shree:Dekh Ri agar tu aisa karegi aur sir ko aane ke baad ye pata chalega toh unhe kitna bura lagega.

Chotu:Haan yaar apne liye nahi par at least Arjun sir ke kiye.

Riya:Ok guys.

Shree:Thik hai fir mai aur Chotu tujhe 7 baje pick kar lenge.

She nods.

At Delhi

Arjun was in his room watching Riya's pic in his mobile. Now Abbas had removed all the cameras and mike.

Arjun:Happy b'day Riya. I miss you very much.

He comes to the lobby and sees all of them working.

Akram:Boss aaj kal koi deal nahi karne jaate apun log. Daam kam ho gaye kya market me.

Abbas:Arre nahi yaar kuch din chup rahe toh thik hai. Mamla thanda hone ke baad kuch karenge. Tu bata chehra kyu latka hua hai?

Akram:Ab kya batau boss aaj girlfriend ka janmdin hai aur apun usko koi tohfa bhi nahi de paa raha hai. Wo Mumbai me apun yahan.

Saying this again his face fells.

Abbas:Arre itni si baat. Ja dukan se kuch kharid le uske liye aur courier karde.

Akram:Kya apun jaa sakta hai shopping ke liye.

Abbas:Arre haan haan tune gaddar ko pakadwane me kitni madad ki hai. Inaam samajh le.

Arjun happily goes to mall and buys a beautiful pink saree for her. He imagines her in it.

Arjun:Kash hum saath me khushiyan manate Riya. Koi baat nahi agle saal hi sahi.

He sends the gift through speed post.

At Ariya's home

Riya was selecting dress to wear tonight when the doorbell rings. She opens the door and finds courier boy.

Riya:Ji kahiye.

Men:Ji ye Mrs Riya Rawte ke liye courier aaya hai.

She takes the parcel and signs.

Riya:Kisne bheja hoga. Koi naam bhi nahi hai isme.

She opens it and finds saree with a note. It says

Beautiful saree for beautiful b'day girl. Aaj isse pehenna. Mai janta hu sab party ke liye zabardasti le jayenge. And Happy birthday Riya.
~Arjun

Riya has tears of happiness and sorrow. Happiness because he send gift to her being in a dangerous mission and sorrow because she couldn't celebrate this day with him. Suddenly her phone rings. Its Shree. She picks up the call.

Shree:Hello Ri hum aadhe ghante me aa rahe hain tu ready rehna.

She cuts the call hearing this and gets ready in saree sent by him.

At night

They all tried to keep Riya happy and Riya too shown that she is happy. After dinner Shree dropped her home.

At Ariya's home

After coming home Riya changed and made a cup of coffee and sat in balcony. Sleep was far away from her eyes. She was talking to his photo.

Riya:Aap kab aayenge Arjun. Apko pata hai aaj sabke hote hue bhi kitna adhura lag raha tha. I miss you so much. Bas aap jald hi mission pura karke sahi salaamat laut aaiye.

She hugs his photo tightly. She didn't know when sleep engulfed her.

Next morning

Riya finds herself in balcony. She quickly gets ready and goes ETF.

Ayesha:Riya wo file paas karna.

Riya paas file to her.

Riya:Guys coffee.

All nods.

She was going when she felt dizzy and was about to fall but all saw and held her.

Chotu made her lay on conference sofa and called doctor.

Rathod:Dr. ye achanak kaise behosh ho gayi.

Dr.:Don' worry Mr Rathod inhe fever tha jiske kaaran ye behosh ho gayi. Mai ye medicines likh raha hu. Make sure ye time pe le.

Rathod:Thank you doctor.

Shree drops him till the gate. After gaining consiousness Rathod sends a reluctant Riya to her mother's home. She takes care of her and her temperature also comes down.

In Delhi

Abbas:Suno sab agle hafte ek deal hone wali hai. Koi mamuli deal nahi hai. Bahut log isse pana chahte hain aur ye ek khaas jagah hogi. Toh achhe se tayari kar lena.

Arjun informs Rathod about it. Rathod does not tell Arjun about Riya's health not wanting to make him worry about her.

Rathod:Don't worry Rawte ye Abbas ki akhri deal hogi. Shree agle hafte ke Delhi ke 7 tickets book kara dena.

Shree(confused):Sir 7?

Rathod:Haan Riya nahi jayegi uski tabiyat thik nahi hai. I can't take risk.

Shree was about to say something when

Voice:Mai chalungi sir.

Rathod:Par Riya..

Riya:Nahi sir aap mujhe Delhi aane se nahi rok sakte. Mujhe bhi ek beti ka farz ada karna hai. Aur mai ab bilkul thik hu. Abhi ek hafta hai aur mai puri tarah se fit and fine ho jaungi. Trust me sir. Please mujhe iss mission se dur mat kijiye.

Rathod:Thik hai agar tumhe aisa lagta hai toh thik hai but mai nahi chahta wahan koi problem ho.

She nods determined.

They all plan about raid. They didn't care about place as they will know when Arjun will switch on the camera on that day.

Rathod:Sab ready.

All(louder):Yes sir!!

They all goes to Delhi having different thoughts in mind.

Edited by Ariyatogether - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yippee!! Finally Aap Ne update Kiya. It's awesome. Thanks for the pm. And next time Bhi zaaror bhejna.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
nyc update. place k naam se thora shak hai ki kahi ETF ko fasane ka plan to nahi bana rahi hai okay update soon.. n thanks for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
How swt yaar
Sahi hi kehte hai ki do pyaar karne wale bhale hai door ho par unka dil hamesha ek doosare ke karreb rehta hai
Aur hamare ariya ka bhi yahi haal hai...
Arjun ne riya keliye gift bhejha woh itane khatarnak situation mein... Chooo chwweeettt...
Mujhe next update ko lekar negative vibes kyun aa rahe hai...
Hope ariya sahi salaamat wapus Mumbai aa jaye...
Cont soon
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ariya ek dusre ko.miss kar rahe hai Riya ke liye saree not bad hope yeh last deal ho aur Arjun sahi salamat rahe supper update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago


Amazing update
Ariya miss each other alot. Arjun send gift for Riya and she got emotional.
Last deal. Looks like a big destroying storm. Seems like Abbas has planned something dangerous.. hope Arjun's disguise doesn't came to open still. And team along with Arjun be safe and return Mumbai safely.

Superbly written

Loved it

Thanks for PM

Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Arjun ne gift bheja agar unn logo ne pata karwaya to
Arjun ne aisa risk nahi lena chahiye
Gift bhej raha he pakade gaye to
Sabne bday manaya
Everyone is worried about arjun
Everyone is ready to go
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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