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||PROLOGUE||
Life's strange. But as they say, there's no lemon so sour, that you can't make something resembling lemonade.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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||CHARACTER SKETCH||
Arjun Suryakant Rawte - As portrayed in the show. The only change is that, he has a son.
Veer Suryakant Rawte - Son of Arjun & late Roshni. He is 5 years old. He is a very smart & understanding one. His world revolves around his father.
Sakshi Anand - As portrayed in the show. The only change would be, she has a daughter too. Nobody knows about her.
Kavya Anand - Daughter of Sakshi. A mystery.
Sameer & Aisha Rathod - They are married to each other. Neel Rathod, their son. Aisha is expecting their next child.
Neel Rathod - Son of Sameer & Aisha. He is 4 years old.
Shree & Liza - As portrayed in the show. The only change is, they are in a live in relationship with each other.
Chotu - As portrayed in the show.
Sikku - Of course. How can we forget our Sikku Baby. He is the villain of the story.

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||CHAPTER-I||
ETF Office,03:05p.m
Chotu-Urrggghhh. Where the f**k is he? It's been 5 years. 5 freaking years, we're looking for him. Except Arjun sir, we didn't even get a glance of him. He's that clever.
Liza[Patting his back]-Calm down Chotu. Shree said Naah, he might be in Goa. If this time, everything goes as per our plan, we're going to catch him.
Chotu-Does that happen? Ever? Aur waise bhi, how can we take a step, depending on a guess?
Shree-Nahi reh. There are possibilities. Goa main achanak se, illegal karyakam bad Gaya Hain. Aur mere informers agree Kar rahe Hain kind off. I mean, can it be a simple coincidence?
Chotu making a face, shrugged his shoulders.
Suddenly, Arjun entered to the conference room, & cleared his throat.
All of them looked at him, questioningly.
He said very casually, we're going to the Goa.
Sameer-But aise kaise Arjun? We've to plan properly. As Shree said, it's just a guess. So we'll have to stay there for a quite long time. There's so much to plan.
Arjun-Aur kitne plan karenge Sam? It's been 5 years. It's time for action.
Sameer-But..
Sakshi-I think, he's right Sam. We should do something. At least we can try, rather than sitting here & thinking about what could have been happened if everything went as per our plan.
Sameer [Sighing]-Okay. Veer aur Neel kaha rahenge?
Arjun-We are taking them with us, of course.
Sameer-Are you out of your mind? You very well know, this is dangerous.
Arjun[Keeping a straight face]-If we don't take them with us, yaha pe un dono ke liye zayada khatra ho sakta Hain. C'mon, be practical, Sam. If Sikander ever gets to know that we're after him In Goa, he'll try to harm our kids to weaken us.
Aisha[Nodding her head]-He is right, Sameer. We should take them with us.
Sam[Sighing again]-Okay. Shree look for a place in Goa, where we can stay, & book flight tickets as well.
Sakshi [Scratching her head]-Umm.. Sameer, what if I say, I've a pent house in Goa?
Sameer [A little bit shocked]-Are you sure, Sakshi?
Sakshi [Nodding her head]-Arreh Haan reh, Sameer. Waise bhi Khali pada reheta Hain. I'll do one thing. I'll take the next flight to Goa, & after reaching there, I'll sort everything out. Tum log aao araam se Kaal-Parso.
Sameer-Okay then. All final. Shree book the tickets.
Saying this as soon as he & Arjun left, Shree turning towards Sakshi, questioned her-Ky a Yaar Sakshi? Tu toh badi amir nikli. Pent house Haan?
Sakshi[Laughing]-Shut up Shree. It's nothing like that. It was a birthday gift from my father.
Shree[Eyeing her top to bottom]-Oh, Matlab you're a spoilt brat?
Sakshi[Raising her one eyebrow]-Do I look like one?
Then Liza said, It's not fair, Saki. It's been years we've known each other. Still you keep secrets from us.
Sakshi-Oh C'mon. Chill guys. It's no big deal.
In mind she says, I guess I do have a huge secret. But let's see, what happens.
Later at night that day, Arjun pushes the calling Bell of his house, & after few seconds, a little, oh-so-cute boy opens the door, showing his tooths.
He shouted-Daddaaa..
Arjun scoops him in his arms quickly, hugs him for few seconds, trying to take the fragrance of his child, trying to soothe away all his pain, worries. He then kisses on his forehead slightly & asked-Kaisa Hain Mera Bachha? And where is Mrs. Johnson? Why did you open the door?
Veer-Oh ho Daddaa. Aate hi shuru ho jaateh ho. Mrs. Johnson ko Aaj jaldi jaana pada to, Maine kaha jao, Main khud Apna khayal rakh sakta Hain. I'm a big boy, after all.
Arjun[Clenching his jaw]-What?
He locks the door of his house, put down Veer on the Sofa. After taking out his Phone, he dialled Mrs. Johnson's no.
Arjun [Slightly shouting]-You know what? You're fired. How can you be so careless? Aap Veer ko akele chor ke kaise chali gayi? Ekbar mujhe Call karke bataya Tak nahii. Arreh, batana chahiye tha Naah. I would've came home earlier. No, I don't want to hear anything. You know very well that, I don't like keeping Veer alone. Even after knowing my profession, how can you be so inhuman? I told you Naah, I don't want to hear anything. I don't want comprising regarding Veer's safety. Waise bhi, we're going to Goa, a day after, for a quite long time. After returning, If I feel like, I'll call you. Bye.
All this while, Veer was staring at his father. After cutting the Phone, Arjun took deep breathes, composing himself, he asked Veer-Khana khaya?
Veer-Dadda. Aap bekar main hi unpe chillaya. Maine hi kaha tha. It's all my fault.
Arjun [Strictly]-I don't want to talk about this. Chalo Tum TV dekho. Main fresh hoke aata Hoon. Then we'll have dinner together.
Saying this, he went towards his room.
Veer shouts from the living area-Why you're always so afraid, Daddaa?
Arjun ignoring his question, went to the bathroom, after stripped out all of his clothes, he turned on the shower, as soon as the cold running water started slipping on his body, he closed his eyes, & said in mind-Because I don't want to lose you, Veer. I won't be able to live then.


Edited by Shanjh - 7 years ago
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||CHAPTER II||
Rathod's Apartment,10:30p.m
Sameer was scrolling through his social networks. Aisha came to their bedroom, glancing towards Sameer, sat in front of the mirror.
Aisha[Moisturizing her hands]-Sameer, you know, you can tell me anything. I won't judge.
Sameer coming out of his trance, asked her, Hmm?
Aisha[Looking towards him, through the mirror]-Yes, I'm having labour pain.
Sameer instantly looked at her, with shocking expression, asked, What?
Aisha sighed,then went to him. Sitting very close to him, she cupped his cheeks, asked in a very soft voice, Sameer? What's going on your mind?
Sameer gave a slight smile to her, then squeezed her hands. He said-I was just thinking weather it's going to be a good idea, taking our kids with us. You know, it's very dangerous. If anything happens to Neel or Veer, I won't be able to forgive myself ever.
Aisha understood his state of mind. She was having this kind of thoughts too. But what Arjun said earlier was right. If Sikander ever gets to know about them, he'll try to harm their kids. That inhuman being won't even think twice, before doing anything to the little kids.
Aisha started massaging his temple with her fingertips, trying to soothe away his worries.
After few silent moments, she finally said-You know, it is going be alright. I've full faith in you & Arjun.
Sameer taking her hands, kissed her knuckles & said-You know, I love you, right?
Aisha laughed a bit.
Same time,Rawte Mansion
After having dinner, both Arjun & Veer went to bed, finishing night chores. Veer's head was resting on Arjun's chest, & Arjun's one hand was resting on veer's waist. They were having a little talk.
Veer-Daddaa, why Goa?
Arjun[Smiling softly]-Because we haven't gone for a holiday, from a long time. Plus we've some works to do, as well. Ain't you excited, Kiddo?
Veer-Hmm. I guess.
Arjun-What happened? Why aren't you all jumping & dancing around me, even after hearing the word, holiday?
Veer[Shrugging his shoulders]-Don't know. Not excited anymore. Maybe big & mature stuffs.
Arjun[Raising his one eyebrow]-Really? What's the matter, Veer? Are you upset with the Mrs. Johnson thing?
Veer ignoring his question, said-So kaun kaun aayenge humare saath?
Arjun thought for a bit, & decided to let the matter go, until Veer wants.
He said-Everyone will be there. Sam,Aisha,Neel,Shree,Liza,Sakshi,Chotu.
Veer laughed a bit, & said-And the fact that, I don't know anyone except, Sam Uncle & Aisha Auntie, & wo Neel. You never introduced me to them.
Arjun [Sighing]-You know very well Veer that, I don't like taking you with me, at my work place. I want you to stay away from all of these things.
Veer-At least, you can invite them over here, on my birthdays, or your birthdays. Main Aap, Sam uncle, Aisha Auntie, Neel, Mrs. Johnson and Rohan k alawa kisiko bhi nahii janta Hoon.
Arjun-I don't like partying.
Veer-You don't. I do. Chalo birthday party chor dia. You don't even let me go to Rohan's house to play. Main pak jata hoon, Ghar pe beithe beithe.
Arjun-Goodnight Veer. Raat bohot ho gayii Hain. You should sleep now. We'll talk about this matter, tomorrow morning.
Veer-Do we? Ever, Daddaa?
Arjun[Sighing]-Tomorrow morning, we'll. I promise.
Veer-Goodnight Daddaa.
After making sure, Veer was sound asleep, Arjun slowly got out of the bed. He went to the balcony, lightened up a Cigarette. He started taking deep breathes to calm himself down. He knew, what he was doing was completely wrong. He never allowed Veer to go anywhere alone. The only place, he ever allowed, was Sam's house of course. Still he always made sure, he would drop him, pick him up from there & he would always keep calling him. He knew, how much Veer loves people. How much he loves interacting with new people. But the restrictions he has given to him, he never complained that much. If everything goes as per like this, Veer is going to be more lonely. Arjun cannot do this. He cannot do this to Veer. He has to let Veer go. But after suffering from the dreadful past, his childhood, Roshni, was it really his fault that, he was so afraid? Of loosing Veer? Veer was the only tangible thing in his life, for not giving up on his life. Looking at Veer's face, he knew, he has to live, For Veer. He pushed himself to get up from his state, for Veer. Without Veer, there's nothing left, really. He didn't want to loose Veer, too. He couldn't. He must not. That's why, he has always been so over protective about him. But today, after seeing his face, he knew, he had to change himself. No matter how much it is going to bother him. He just had to. Veer never complains, does that mean, he was being a good father? A father, who doesn't allow his kid going anywhere alone, a father, who doesn't allow his kid interacting with unknown people, are these features of a good father? He knew the answer very well. The truth was, Veer was a good son. He never complained, or got irritate over his protectiveness. But he needed to change himself.
PS-Smoking is injurious to health. Smoking causes Cancer.*Formalities*

Edited by Shanjh - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hii.. I am big fan of Arakshii.. u are writing on arakshi so i always be there.. I read ur story it's super.. Arjun & Veer bonding is really touching..they are going to Goa for Sikkii... intersting.. Pls continue soon..Thank you so much for writing on Arakshi 😊 ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you very much, for reading, everyone. I'll post the next part, tomorrow for sure.
Love,
Shanjh
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Wow nice story
Continue soon
Do pm me
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi, Shanjh, at first welcome to our Arjun forum.. Hope you gonna have a great time here with all of us.
About coming to the update, it is really a good one. Bahut Dino k baad aj Arjun ke flavor mili 😃
Thanks for sharing your creation with us.
Well, although I'm a blind Raisha lover, but secretly I also do admire Arakshi..
So, loved your concept along CS.. Specially Veer, my little kid!! He actually resembles his parents.. So mature.. ❤️
And about Raisha, unke barime kya bolu, whatever they do I just love them. 😳
Rest about Sakshi I hope you have made better plan for her.
So, continue soon and do pm me, plz. I have sent you buddy request already, 😳
Till then, take care. Bye.
Love, Keka 😊
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||CHAPTER III||
Two days passed within a blink of an eye. Arjun & Veer never had the conversation, nor that Veer expected it to be happen, but Arjun made the decision this time. He promised himself that, he is going to let Veer live his life freely. He is not going to put restrictions much.
Soon all the ETF members flew to Goa. Veer got a very warm welcome from each & every member of his father's team. He was very happy & excited throughout the journey, as he never ever experienced this kind of holiday, with so many people. It was always only Arjun & him, or Arjun, him & Neel.
Arjun sighed watching, Veer talking to Shree & Chotu so excitedly. He was so happy. Anyone could tell that seeing his face. Arjun realized that, he did a mistake by keeping Veer away from the world. But he is not going to do that, not anymore.
Everyone was looking for Sakshi at the Airport, as she said that, she would come to pick them up. But there was no sign of her. That time, Aisha's phone buzzed. Hearing the conversation, though from only one side, but it was clear that, for some reason Sakshi wouldn't be able to come. But she did send a car for them.
They came out from the Airport. A middle aged man, holding a 'Anand' written placard, was looking everywhere.
They went to him, & after making sure everything is settled, they settled themselves in the car.
It was not a long journey from Airport to Sakshi's house. Within 20 minutes, they reached the place. The mansion was undoubtedly very beautiful. It wasn't big at all, it wasn't small either yet it was the perfect size. There was a small garden type area in the front. An aura of peace was roaming around the place. It was like, anyone could take a break life & hide in this place, to rediscover him or her.
They got out of the car, a middle aged lady was standing in front of the door of the mansion. Seeing them, she came towards them & smiled at them.
"Hello. I'm Pooja. Aap logon ko aane main koyi problem toh nahi huya Naah? Actually Sakshi couldn't come to the airport to pick you guys up. Use bohot zarori Ek Kaam aagaya tha.",she said very sweetly.
Aisha was the first one to respond,''Nahii. Koyii problem nahii huya aane main.''
''Chaliye andar chalteh Hain. You guys must be tired'', she said showing the door.
They entered the house, & it was beautiful too. It was very simple yet elegantly decorated. Everyone was very much impressed.
They settled themselves in the couch, both Veer & Neel started roaming around the living area. Pooja went to the kitchen to bring them water.
''Kya Yaar. Kya mast Ghar hain. Sakshi ne kabhi bataya nahii that, she's this much rich. I mean, I'm quite impressed, Dude",said Shree looking all over the place.
''Shut up Specky! Pooja ne agar sun liya toh Kya sochegi, Tunhare bare main",said Lisa hushing him.
"Quite guys",said Arjun glaring at them.
''Ye chota sa Bachha Kon Hain?",Neel asked his mother, pointing towards a photo frame, which was hanging from wall. That caught everyone's attention. Everyone noticed, there were so many pictures of a kid of different age.
''Shayad Sakshi hogi",said Aisha.
Suddenly the door bell rang, as Pooja was in the kitchen already, Aisha went & opened the door.
Much to her shock, there was a little girl standing, of 4 or 5 years old. Seeing her Aisha was in complete 'Aww' situation. The little girl was so much cute. & There the girl was gawking at Aisha, & seeing her bump, she immediately touched it. Aisha laughed.
''Apke Pet itna bada kyun Hain? Aur AP ho Kon BTW? Kitni bar Pooja ko kaha Hain Kih strangers see baat maat Kare, aur usne toh Ghar pe invite bhi Kar liya",said the little girl, now her hands were on her hips, & she was staring at Aisha.
''Arreh Kavya, Tu aagayii, itta jaldi? Mumma kaha Hain?",said Pooja from behind.
Everyone looked at the direction. & They were shocked as hell, would be an understatement. As the little girl came into the house, she was shocked too, seeing so many stranger faces, gawking at her. Aisha came, sat where she was sitting before. Kavya after checking everyone out from top to bottom, turned towards Pooja & asked in a enquiring voice,"Pooja, how many times do I have to tell you that, you shouldn't talk with strangers. Aapne toh inhe Ghar pe bhi invite Kar liya Hain. Hain Kon ye log?"
Everyone was having a hard time to control their laugh. Even our rough & tough ACP Arjun was smiling too.
Pooja, sighing said,"Ye sab Apke Mumma k saath Ek hi office main Kaam karteh Hain. Unke dost hain."
Now everyone again went to the shock zone. Mumma, same office, so the little girl was Sakshi's daughter? But how can it be possible?
Kavya digested everything, & looked apologetically to everyone.
"Waise where's your mother?",asked Pooja.
"Unko Ek zarori Kaam aagaya toh wo she asked Raman Uncle to drop me.",said Aisha.
"Okay. Waise Kavya Tere manners kaha Gaye? Say hello to everyone."
"Hello",said Kavya pouting.
Everyone nodded their head. But everyone was in dilemma, how can the little girl can be Sakshi's daughter? Sakshi never told them about her daughter. Aisha & Liza were very disappointed. As the three of them shared literally everything with each other.
Kavya all of a sudden again went to Aisha, asked her,"Aapne bataya nahii, Apke Pet itna bada kyun Hain?"
Neel & Veer started laughing, as they knew about the baby thing, so they thought she was such a stupid girl that she didn't even know that, Aisha was carrying a baby in her tummy. Arjun glared at them. Kavya glared at them too. Both of them stopped their laughing almost immediately.
Aisha smiled at her curiosity, said,"There is a baby in it."
Now Kavya was in shock zone. Her jaw almost dropped to the floor. She asked,"How can you eat your own baby?"
Everyone again controlled their laughter, as it would be very inappropriate.
Pooja interrupted suddenly,"Kavya go to your room & change your clothes. I'm preparing lunch. And let them take rest too. Tu bad main Apna ye KBC khelna."
Kavya looking dejectedly to her, started going towards her room.
There was a pause, for few moments.
Couldn't hold back her own curiosity, Aisha finally asked to Pooja,"Kavya Sakshi ki beti Hain? I mean how? She never told us about her."
Everyone was looking at Pooja's face for an answer. She just smiled at them.

PS-Okay, first thing's first, I'm very sorry for the late upload. I was having a hectic schedule from past few days. But today I had to. 😆
I want to thank all of you, Thank you very much guys, for reading, for liking, for commenting. Let me know, weather you liked it or not. Till then, Tata. Goodnight. Sweet dreams.
Love,
Shanjh


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow, Shanjh dear, in a word it was simple yet attractive.. Thanks for updating.
Coming to the commentary, Veer's expectations came true at last. The conversations between father - son is yet to happen..
But, as Arjun decided so he let his son to collaborate with the outer world.
So everyone is in Goa. To be frank I thought you may kept Kavya as a mystery, but you introduce her at very first... Well that was a shock for me as well 😆
Hmm.. Kavya... Super cute baby. Loved the way she was scolding Pooja for talking with the strangers and also letting them inside of the house.. 😊
And her questions towards Aisha, 🤣
I must say she is little naive also...
Aww! She knows glaring too 😆
Well things gonna like the kids may have tough time together...
Rest about Sakshi, I think KBC toh ab uske sath shuru hone wale hai...
Very nice. Continue soon.
Love, Keka 😊
Edited by FarhanaKeka03 - 7 years ago

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